Poisoning the Stars

Regarding this book, I can say that people were trying to persuade me to give it up during the free period... I skipped reading it at first. I didn't even want to read it during the paid period. Recently, I continued reading because I was too bored. After reading more than 200 chapters, I found that the image of the heroine only had a negative image for me, and it felt like it had become a male protagonist. And once I remember the heroine asked, "He can actually be your brother at his age." This is something that most people would not hate to ask. It felt like the author was doing it for you. The heroine asked this question in order to bring out that they have a past. Her sense of the heroine changed from bad to slightly better and then became worse and worse. She could not feel the heroine's mood at all. She felt that the heroine was very pale and could not feel the heroine's charm at all. Even now, I still don't know why the male protagonist and the second male lead like her (I can't find any opportunities at all). The plot is also a bit stiff, maybe a little lacking in writing skills, and most importantly (for me) there are many logic bugs...

I obviously like interstellar novels... I don't know why the more I read it, the less interesting it became. When I thought about it more carefully, I realized that this is basically a fantasy and immortality novel disguised as an interstellar novel! Especially the long section about grudges and grudges. I am always bullied, and my troubles get bigger and bigger... But I still read them all. I hope the author can do better in the future.

(There is a word limit in the comment area, so I have to change my reply here) After reading your comment and reflecting on it for two days, I decided to explain it. Let's start with what you said. Why does the heroine ask, "How can he be your eldest brother at his age?" If you read the background of this article carefully, you should understand. According to the heroine's understanding at the time, the ultimate powerhouse was only over 200 years old, while Xiao Yi was almost a hundred years old, while the others were still young boys in their twenties. Don't you think it's strange to say that they are brothers? Moreover, this is not ancient times, nor is it an upper-class society, which also pays attention to etiquette and euphemism. Everyone is a warrior and is used to being direct. Everything that can be said clearly is said clearly. Let's talk about the character creation issue you mentioned. I admit that many people's characters are not intuitively and three-dimensionally created, but I think the heroine's character is still created. Grandpa is in extremely poor health, and the heroine has to earn money to support the family while dragging a patient, which shows that she is independent, but because her family is poor and she has low self-esteem, she is no different from most girls her age. After her grandfather was kidnapped and she was hunted down, she gradually became stronger and lost the cuteness of a girl, but became more mature and steady. In the middle of this article, when you first enter interstellar civilization, there will be a period of dormancy and depression. There is nothing you can do about it. No matter how talented a person is, it is impossible for him to shine when he first enters a new world, and he will not dare to shine. As for the love between the male and female protagonist for the female protagonist, this all happened at the beginning of this article. Maybe you were jumping too much and didn't pay attention. As for the story you mentioned about becoming a male protagonist (laughing), I have been a bookworm for ten years. My favorite things are male protagonists cultivating immortality and fantasy. Maybe I was too deeply affected. The cultivation system and world background setting are all written according to the male protagonist. Speaking of this, I suddenly remembered my original intention of writing an article. At that time, I couldn't find novels to read. Many good novels were about stallions and harems. I have an emotional mysophobia and couldn't stand it. Later, I became cruel and decided to write it myself. The novels I read so far are all those I have read before, because it is difficult to find novels with a single heroine and no ambiguity. I have read books like Tomato's and Fang Xiang's books over and over again, and I have been deeply influenced by them. I also read romance novels, but after reading them for a long time I get tired. The same male protagonist is astonishingly handsome, and the female protagonist is so beautiful that she comes to earth. That's fine. How can she be the protagonist if she's not beautiful or handsome? But why does the male protagonist always send people to follow the female protagonist because of trivial matters? Don't they have anything to do? There are also chapters where the two of them are having sex together, but I basically skip this. Of course, there are many well-written female protagonists, and I am reading them all now. I'm going too far. Anyway, thank you very much for your criticism, which made me realize my shortcomings, and I will work hard to correct them.