Orochimaru's Ambition

The theme is to use ninjutsu to change the world, but the author wastes too many chapters to describe a useless plot, which makes it feel "boring". If you write so many chapters with an actor that no one likes, it will collapse sooner or later. Can everyone go directly to the theme? Ninjutsu develops agricultural industry and develops the blood inheritance limit. We already eat enough chicken soup. If you fill it in books, it will only be counterproductive. Cultivate more power, make money, and change the world.

In fact, there is nothing bad about the heroine's character. It's not that there are no such characters in Naruto, but it's just impossible to have them in ANBU. If she were treated as an ordinary ninja, she wouldn't be so poisonous. The author just didn't plan the character's background well.

I have been reading books for a long time, from high school to college graduation. I rarely post book reviews for such a long time. I don't want to say how you should write them. I just want to say that I read books in three categories. The first is for those who don't want to read. The second is for those who want to read but don't want to spend money. The third is for those who want to read and are willing to spend money. Having said all this, what I want to express is that you should take good care of your outline and I will order it all when it is put on the shelf.

The writing is very good, keep up the good work. Don't worry about some readers, just respect the original work to the maximum extent, and fully respect whatever fandom you write, just follow the instructions. The anti-Japanese drama is not banned in any country, which means that it is not important whether the screenwriter (author) respects the history (original work), because the Chinese people say not to but still watch the eight-way hand-pulled Japanese crotch hiding thunder. Isn't this further biased than the author? When the country bans the anti-Japanese drama, author, you can overhaul it then🤓

Another technological version of Cultivation of Immortality (?), Ninjutsu - Nuclear Bomb (Little Boy)! Ninjutsu Puppet--Cheer-class battleship! The dream of a ninja is the sea of ​​stars! ! (Funny face)

I said that Naruto has already had a microscope in it. Author, you are not serious about Naruto. Everyone and computers have them, it's just that the technology tree is a bit crooked

Regarding Hinata Xunyi's arrangements. Many readers don't like this character, and hope that I will try to delete this character's scenes as much as possible... Emmm, how should I put it, this is very difficult. Because according to the plot outline, this is a very important supporting role. Her setting is like this, hot-blooded and extreme, brainless, in opposition to Orochimaru's thoughts, but also consistent to a certain extent... Well, it is what is called "contradiction" in philosophy. A work must have different characters, and of course the author cannot make every character exactly the same. Maybe because the character is too distinct, everyone hates her because she is on the opposite side of the protagonist. But actually, as I said, there is a unity of opposites in contradiction. Orochimaru's own thoughts are extreme, so he needs another extreme thought to form a strong contrast with him. This is the creation of "contradiction" in literary works. Opposition and unity. Well, as the author, I majored in liberal arts, not science and engineering, so let's just say this. Although I am embarrassed, this character will not take advantage of her so easily or weaken her image to passers-by.

Give Orochi a wife, Medicine Master Nonoyu

It feels like the rhythm of a eunuch! Keep it on the bookshelf for a week. If you don't update it, you will delete it.

I think it's quite interesting. It's not like the usual routines in some fan fiction. It's worth reading, especially since there's no such thing as a system. Why are there so many system texts now? It doesn't feel interesting at all.

Why is the eunuch's book always recommended last week? ? ? ? ?

Orochimaru protagonist? That means there is no heroine, oh no, the heroine is Orochimaru!

I'm convinced. There are so many stupid people. Although I'm not good either. I just give up when I encounter someone I don't like. But compared to you guys who carefully study the book inside and out while saying that the writing is not good, I'm really convinced.

Poor people: alive, fed, family, well-being, Do movies matter? My stomach is not full, and I don't know if I will see the sun the next day. What's the use of all that spiritual food?

I think if you want to make a movie, the super beast fake paintings are very good, and all the special effects and animations are there

Sigh, there is no way. The movie about the little girl from the Hinata family is too annoying. Uncle Snake is too crazy in your writing. When a scientist accepted knowledge from another world, he did not come to verify the knowledge, but to make a movie. Okay, forget it. Come on, author, tell me why you let Uncle Snake stay in Konoha? In addition to providing Uncle Snake with a blood chakra eye, what else can Konoha see? In my opinion, the whole of Konoha is holding Uncle Snake back since the development of this book. Hey, author, if you want to make a movie, then you should just write about entertainment.

Many people are complaining, saying that Orochimaru's character is wrong and shouldn't be like this or that. First of all, we need to be clear about Orochimaru's character! Some people always say that Orochimaru is a scientist, but the author said that Orochimaru has the memory of people on earth! So the question is, with a modern perspective, can we still appreciate the crude and crazy research on the world of Naruto? Modern machine research is inseparable from basic industry. If you want to develop basic industry, you cannot rely on just one person. Orochimaru changes the world in a subtle way and makes the world change according to his needs. This makes sense.

I feel like Uncle Snake won't do those unnecessary things. After all, for a scientist who concentrates on research, games and stuff are just rubbish and a waste of my time. In the end it is of no use to you. And that network, didn't you know that Uncle Snake already has a snake phone? According to Boruto, every time his son is connected to Uncle Snake, there is always a snake. Apparently the snake is the phone. And what is the use of the Internet? Out of all the Hokages who are engaged in science and technology, Uncle Snake is the only one who is professional, while Scorpion is still half-full. Who do you communicate with and what do you know about online. Can you imagine turning on your computer without a single piece of software or a single web page? What's the use of a computer and an internet connection?

Chapter 8 says that Uchiha does not need to go to the battlefield. I was shocked. Obito is not from the Uchiha family? Chapter 6 says that the Earth Kingdom was the first to discover ninjutsu in 86 years before Konoha? What? The Uchiha family's stone tablet has been handed down from the beginning, but ninjutsu actually appeared so late? Some things will look better if they are not written down, but writing them out will only drive people away. Especially for people like Naruto, it's best not to add settings yourself, just promote the plot directly. What the author wrote was so poisonous to me, 88

It felt quite interesting at first, but later on, Uncle Snake talking to himself felt wrong. Uncle Snake is a man who pursues the truth. Why is he so excited about making movies? Which scientist have you ever seen do this? It feels like the author imposed a task on Uncle Snake, but it didn't have the flavor of writing.

This doesn't fit Orochimaru's character. He might as well have been transported through time.

It's a good idea, but I personally feel that if the Earthling succeeds in seizing the body, or the souls of the two merge, the Earthling will feel more immersed in the dominant position!