Orochimaru’s Ambition

The theme is to use ninjutsu to change the world, but the author wastes too many chapters to describe a useless plot, which makes it feel "boring". If you write so many chapters with an actor that no one likes, it will collapse sooner or later. Can everyone go directly to the theme? Ninjutsu develops agricultural industry and develops the blood inheritance limit. We already eat enough chicken soup. If you fill it in books, it will only be counterproductive. Cultivate more power, make money, and change the world.

In fact, there is nothing bad about the heroine's character. It's not that there are no such characters in Naruto, but it's just impossible to have them in ANBU. If she were treated as an ordinary ninja, she wouldn't be so poisonous. The author just didn't plan the character's background well.

I have been reading books for a long time, from high school to college graduation. I rarely post book reviews for such a long time. I don't want to say how you should write them. I just want to say that I read books in three categories. The first is for those who don't want to read. The second is for those who want to read but don't want to spend money. The third is for those who want to read and are willing to spend money. Having said all this, what I want to express is that you should take good care of your outline and I will order it all when it is put on the shelf.

The writing is very good, keep up the good work. Don't worry about some readers, just respect the original work to the maximum extent, and fully respect whatever fandom you write, just follow the instructions. The anti-Japanese drama is not banned in any country, which means that it is not important whether the screenwriter (author) respects the history (original work), because the Chinese people say not to but still watch the eight-way hand-pulled Japanese crotch hiding thunder. Isn't this further biased than the author? When the country bans the anti-Japanese drama, author, you can overhaul it then🤓

Regarding Hinata Xunyi's arrangements. Many readers don't like this character, and hope that I will try to delete this character's scenes as much as possible... Emmm, how should I put it, this is very difficult. Because according to the plot outline, this is a very important supporting role. Her setting is like this, hot-blooded and extreme, brainless, in opposition to Orochimaru's thoughts, but also consistent to a certain extent... Well, it is what is called "contradiction" in philosophy. A work must have different characters, and of course the author cannot make every character exactly the same. Maybe because the character is too distinct, everyone hates her because she is on the opposite side of the protagonist. But actually, as I said, there is a unity of opposites in contradiction. Orochimaru's own thoughts are extreme, so he needs another extreme thought to form a strong contrast with him. This is the creation of "contradiction" in literary works. Opposition and unity. Well, as the author, I majored in liberal arts, not science and engineering, so let's just say this. Although I am embarrassed, this character will not take advantage of her so easily or weaken her image to passers-by.

I said that Naruto has already had a microscope in it. Author, you are not serious about Naruto. Everyone and computers have them, it's just that the technology tree is a bit crooked

Another technological version of Cultivation of Immortality (?), Ninjutsu - Nuclear Bomb (Little Boy)! Ninjutsu Puppet--Cheer-class battleship! The dream of a ninja is the sea of ​​stars!! (Funny face)

Why is the eunuch's book always recommended last week?????

Sigh, there is no way. The movie about the little girl from the Hinata family is too annoying. Uncle Snake is too crazy in your writing. When a scientist accepted knowledge from another world, he did not come to verify the knowledge, but to make a movie. Okay, forget it. Come on, author, tell me why you let Uncle Snake stay in Konoha? In addition to providing Uncle Snake with a blood chakra eye, what else can Konoha see? In my opinion, the whole of Konoha is holding Uncle Snake back since the development of this book. Hey, author, if you want to make a movie, then you should just write about entertainment.

Poor people: alive, fed, family, well-being, Do movies matter? My stomach is not full, and I don't know if I will see the sun the next day. What's the use of all that spiritual food?