Martial Arts Advancement

The plot is too exciting. You can't do something honestly. A martial arts contest is a martial arts contest, always interspersed with other things. It was the same before. Are you sure you have an outline?

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The protagonist's IQ is a flaw…no trouble

Good, good, good, good. It's a good book, but it's a pity that it's not to my taste. It keeps me in a state of indifference and lack of interest.

I suggest the author reduce the data and not be so omnipotent? Also create metal, wood, water, fire, and earth, and directly use the five elements as one data. Write too much data and mix up the number of words

The author now has either a sister or a daughter. Is he a lolicon?

One update is only 2,000 words, that's all for one day, I beg you to have ten updates a day.

Please support the new book, thank you all!

The golden finger is useless, but after upgrading, it becomes useless. Moreover, the cultivation elixirs you have trained cannot be used by yourself. What is going on?

Writing a book is very tiring, I hope the author perseveres

I would like to give some advice. The system bugs are too big. Now they are all small bugs. Your system looks uncomfortable to people, and the skills are too easy to obtain. The popular systems nowadays are generally used to assist breakthroughs and improve qualifications. For example, this weapon training and elixir training are too buggy, and the description of the weapon training is too simple. It feels like just throwing the materials in and it is done without any technical content. I am just giving some opinions, not a troll. I wish the author a happy new year.

I feel like the author has been a sailor before. He has profound skills in sailing. Especially the chapters about digging for spiritual stones in the mines are the most ridiculous among the novels I have read in so many years. . In addition, every time you advance a talent, all attributes will be improved again. The entire book is estimated to have tens of thousands of words. .

The writing is good and the ideas are good.

Can you advance the plot faster? It's so hard to follow 555555

I only update this little every day, can you update a few more chapters? It was extremely frustrating to wait.

Have you been lazy lately? Why do you update one chapter in one day?

It's too verbose. I keep writing about pig's feet and I don't understand anything. I didn't understand anything when I entered the academy. I don't learn anything even if I don't understand. The content is too bland, as if I am stating one thing. I don't feel anything when I look at it.

The author is a very good person, and this book has changed a lot for the better.