The Uchiha Story from Scratch

The protagonist is too weak. Madara's Whisperer can cut mountains with one sword, Itachi's Whisper is absolutely defensive, and Erzhu's Whisper will be burned to death at a touch. What the protagonist's Whisper is is still open to debate.

Uchiha has a small amount of chakra. You may think it is too little, but that is compared to Naruto who has a huge amount of chakra. Sasuke's chakra alone is several times higher than Kakashi's Absorbing the energy balance from the outside world is magic chakra

After reading the first seven chapters, I can conclude that this article is just a two-dimensional random thought. Punctuation marks are used indiscriminately, the subject and object of the sentence are unclear, the logic is confusing, and the plot is nonsense.

All I can say is that the author doesn't understand the power of Uchiha at all.

The protagonist is very contradictory. Although the chakra can only release a large fire ball, he can use Susanoo's chakra materialization ultimate move.

Reinhardt's protection table: 01. The Sword Master's Protection: You can use the Dragon Sword Red and maximize the sword's ability. 02. The protection of dodge: the opponent cannot hit with long-distance attacks 03. The protection of arrows: one's own long-distance attacks will definitely hit. 04. Protection from demons: Invalidate the support effects of spells and various debuffs and buffs 05. Protection from fire: only 20% of the effect of fire attribute magic is left 06. Wind spirit's protection: can absorb 80% of wind magic effects 07. The protection of soil: can reduce 80% of the magic effects of earth attribute 08. The protection of water spirit: can reflect 80% of water attribute magic effects 09. Darkness's protection: 80% invalidation of Yin attribute magic effects 10. Light's protection: transfer 80% of the light attribute magic effect to other opponents. 11. Drive's protection: walking at an inhumanly fast speed, also applicable to riding animals 12. Blessed by experienced drivers: able to skillfully control the mount used for the first time 13. Passenger protection: you can ride various animals 14. Preemptive protection: You will not be attacked by surprise, and Reinhardt's first attack will definitely hit. 15. First sight's protection: If it is a visible attack, the opponent's first attack will definitely not hit. 16. The protection of the second coming: If it is a visible attack, the opponent's second and subsequent attacks will definitely not hit. 17. The blessing of tears of heaven: the power of rain will be enhanced 18. The blessing of heaven: the power of sunshine will be enhanced 19. The blessing of night: the power will be enhanced at night 20. The blessing of morning light: Strength will be enhanced in the morning 21. Telepathic protection: You can roughly understand the thinking of the opponent you are facing. 22. The blessing of the weapon master: you can immediately understand and skillfully use the props you hold. 23. Empty-handed protection: Empty-handed can be powerful 24. The God of War's blessing: you can immediately use your own weapons proficiently 25. The protection of the lake: you can walk on the water 26. The protection of haze: the view will not be blocked by various means 27. The protection of clouds: you can walk on the clouds 28. The protection of thunder: you will not be hit by thunder and lightning 29. The protection of salt: Don't mistake sugar for salt 30. The protection of King Wei: 31. BBQ protection: 32. Protection for cooking: 33. The protection of steaming: 34. Fried protection: 35. The protection of sketching: 36. Protection of clothing: 37. Haircut care: 38. Educational protection: 39. Exercise protection: 40. The protection of poison resistance: 41. The protection of hundreds of medicines: 42. Bleeding protection: 43. The protection of the phoenix: it can be resurrected once, and the new protection obtained after death can be resurrected again. 44. Game center protection: 45. The protection of judgment: Waiting for protection

It gave me a headache to read. The protagonist was supposed to be cold but he was written as a talkative and complaining patient with weird behavior and lack of communication experience. The plot jumps uncomfortably. To be honest, I can't remember what I watched after watching it.

Uchiha Kaede. . . To be honest, the word "Feng" has been overused as the name of the protagonist in novels. You may think it sounds nice, but after reading too many novels, you will feel that names like Lin, Feng, and Feng are boring. It is better to call them some cliché and simple names, such as Uchiha Daqiang. There is also the fact that the protagonist was a killer before time travel. You may think this killer is cool, but it is also very cliché. It is better to just say that the protagonist is an otaku. Otaku is also vulgar, but it is better than the killer soldier king or something. Actually, I don't say this to laugh at you. I was also young. When I first started surfing the Internet, I thought things like Maple Wind were cool, and I also named some AB CDs. But after watching it too much, it really feels very cliché. Just these two points make me feel that your book is unattractive. Maybe your subsequent writing is pretty good, but there is really no highlight in this beginning.

I think the protagonist is more of a joke than a killer 🔨

Where is Susanoo? I feel like a chuunin, the kaleidoscope can only be used as a weapon, and it is not on the same level as other kaleidoscope users...

😒There is no difference between the protagonist and the soy sauce guy!

Are you sure the protagonist's character is correct? How come a killer in his 40s gets funnier the more he writes about it? It's very inconsistent, okay. Have you thrown away all the suffering you suffered in Hokage? Or are all killers such funny beings? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

What is this written about? I'm a bit confused.

There are too many complaints and it's too watery. The prototype of Uchiha is Obito, right?

Author, you don't want to love Mi Lili?

A very high-quality re0 fan fiction. The background introduction is a direct copy of the original text of the re0 novel, which proves that the author has read the original work. He also let himself go in the later development. It is also the most enjoyable work to read in the starting point. The main character is a fun-loving kid on the outside, but on the outside he is turned into a cold-hearted and cold-blooded killer by the author. This kind of internal and external split is generally called Chuunibyou. In this way, it is better to directly design the protagonist as an invincible cool protagonist, so that his happy and funny kid character is generous and glorious. The character is designed to have a paralyzed face on the outside, but when it comes to daily life, the author starts to make the protagonist go crazy in order to live up to his expectations. What an image! Also in the middle of the article, he began to retaliate and use a huge amount of words to describe such simple things as "I cut him with a knife". This successfully made the novel evolve into prose, but the author's description was quite exciting and his writing skills were good. Similarly, the author created a lot of psychological activities for the protagonist for the sake of emotional drama. How can a protagonist who has killed two generations of people every day have so many b-stuffs? But no b-stuff means no story. How can the author let the protagonist have no plot~ Then he brought out Ruoye. Okay, I declare that this Ruoye is the real protagonist of this book. She is a Naruto. People in the world know more about three dimensions than the protagonist, so she is the real time traveler. She appears directly from the protagonist's right eye, and the protagonist knows nothing about her. The author directly divides the plot between her and the protagonist into two lines. The emotional scene in the front is simply her conspiracy, turning the protagonist into a container. She controls the shadow clone in the front and Betty in the back. The author is playing a very dangerous game. A book cannot have two protagonists, even a male protagonist and a female protagonist. Although the protagonist is not a cool character, but letting others steal the protagonist's role, and firmly control the male protagonist, is very calculated, isn't this dark and cruel? There are not many readers in the first place, but you still have to disgust them. But it's okay! Author, you haven't written these plots of my YY yet. Come back and update the book soon. How can you finish it? Woohoo... Your writing is great. You still have the qualifications to be scolded by readers. How can you be a eunuch? ! Sorrow comes from the heart, and I burst into tears and don't know what to say.

In fact, Beatrice is the real heroine, emmmmmmm... The protagonist is a lolicon! (Laugh~)

The setting is good, but the character of the protagonist is not understandable. I suggest the author to read Zhihu more often, at least to have a correct view. After all, readers are also changing.

Where did the 59 and 60 pieces go?😥😥

Emmm~ I thought I had found a treasure, but it turned out that it was over 😭 I am obviously very interested!

Save it first and wait for more updates. Too few words, no appetite

Similarly, it should be a cool article type, but it doesn't perform as it should.