N Road Dealer Kang Caien

The author writes the novel carefully and the characters have distinct personalities. But me as a reader. . . I don't have the patience to read some novels that are too complicated. I just don't think it fits the concept of modern novels. Half-white novels and novice novels. If the plot is compared to this novel, even if the level of writing and plot is inferior, I personally think it will be more popular than this book. You want to depict a "real" ancient time with a soul, but it seems that you have unconsciously added some heavy and intangible things to them. . .

I have just read the first ten chapters, and I can see that the author wanted to write about a man with a story, but the writing was very devoid of a sense of immersion. It made me think that it is just a young man who doesn't know what it feels like to be sad. In order to create new words, he forced himself to express the meaning of sadness. It feels like the protagonist wants to show off but doesn't pretend to understand yet.

I would like to give you some advice. The outline of the novel has been constructed as usual, but the text descriptions of each chapter feel cumbersome. I don't know what other people think of it. Anyway, I am getting more and more headaches as I read it. If I want to describe it, I can only say that it is poor. It left a very bad impression on the readers. The first few chapters can be said to be discouraging chapters. I panicked and wanted to read your synopsis before continuing. But after reading these ten chapters, I found that I really didn't have the courage. Maybe what you need now, author, is not to work hard to update the article. , If you want to go further, it is best to read novels written by other authors, especially their language expressions, and try to make your language more concise and concise. You must know that novels are for entertainment to kill time, and readers with novices as the main group will not like the trouble!

The protagonist is probably a man, but why did you write him as a woman? Looking at it, I thought the main character was female.

After reading three chapters, I can't tell the difference between "he" and "she".

It looks a little awkward, it feels like it's jumping around.