Super Elf Dragon 1

Let's take a look. There's grass growing on the tomb.

Build a built-in building. Friends who want a built-in building can leave a message under this post. The author will come to collect materials from time to time. Format: Name: Because of the initial setting, please try to use a Japanese name. Of course, you can also use a codename like Garton, but generally these are villains. Identity: This can be set freely, it is best not to be too exaggerated Personality: Determines the acting style of the supporting actor, whether he will be selected, and the plot in which he will be used. Elf: It's very important. It's best to write it all. Strength: must match identity This is roughly it. It may be changed when it actually appears in the book. Finally, thank you for your support! 🙏

First of all, I have to admit that this is a fine piece of fan fiction. I've read a lot of Elf fan fiction, and this one isn't the most passionate or exciting, but it feels the most real to me. Reading this book, I feel like I have seen a real elf world. How people live here, how the relationship between humans and elves is positioned, and the various life occupations and combat occupations satisfy all my imagination of the elf world. Moreover, the author also has a special description of the protagonist's emotional line, which makes the characters in the book come alive and makes the book more flavorful. Instead of the online novel's tendency to show off and slap Long Aotian in the face, all kinds of rigid routines have been adopted. There is no empty feeling when reading this book. At least I can still recall the plot of the book after reading it, and I can feel the author's care for this book, which is unconventional. I hope the author will continue his efforts and maintain his standards. Already collected! Ps: This is my first time writing a book review, so my thoughts are a bit confusing. I'm not going to laugh at my poor writing. The main reason is that this book is to my liking!

To be honest, your novels will never become popular. It's best for elf fan novels to not have the female protagonist's feelings. Not only is this cool, it's also very poisonous. Many people may have been poisoned because of it.

After reading a few chapters, it's no wonder that the prisoner is a brainless bastard. The author's decision is very wise.

It feels a little bit poisonous. The first is the contempt for the knowledge of the elf. It is obvious that the knowledge of the elf Long Mingming is terrible, but he still doesn't pay attention to it all day long. He has to have others come to him to tell him that knowledge is power! Secondly, there is not enough exploration of Goldfinger. Goldfinger obviously said that as long as you have money, you can buy all kinds of treasures and easily break through various limits. Money is power. What are pig's feet thinking? Isn't your brain not working well? A bright road is placed in front of you, go and make money. Easily reach the peak of life. I feel like the protagonist really relies too much on randomness to become stronger. There is no reliable plan to become stronger, and his brain is not working well. It made me very anxious. The author did write it with great care and the characters were interesting, but it was still a little uncomfortable.

You know you are weak, but who gives you the courage to be a burden? This heroine is completely unnecessary, right?

If the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, then don't write them. I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer after reading this!

How can I say that after reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the author does not understand Pokémon well. . . Abo turned into a Pokémon that is not strong in combat. How did it become Team Rocket's regular Pokémon if it was not strong? The change of snake pattern makes Aboguai almost as strong as Yu Sanjia, and with so many poison-type kings raising him, you can't say he's not strong. Then we talked about Pokémon that use escape methods, and it was Casey who opened his mouth. Did you know that super Pokémon will basically only follow people with super powers, especially Casey? You are writing a realistic article. If you don't write these details well, it will be a bad article.

Give the author some advice. This book is a eunuch as soon as possible! Stop hanging like this. It is recommended to read more fan fiction written by others, and then read the comments to avoid the poisonous points, and you may have many ideas.

. . . . . . This book actually doesn't need to be titled with an elf title. Apart from the fact that the names of the elf and the moves are the same, it doesn't feel like an elf novel. There are obviously other elf in the gym challenge but it is inexplicably called a newborn Bobo. It makes people think that the protagonist's IQ is problematic. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write it. No matter how you beautify a scumbag, he is still a scumbag. To be honest, he is a hatchet.

The protagonist's intelligence is lower than Xiaozhi. Without a system, he is a waste. He always wants to become stronger but shows no effort. He cannot train the elves, and he has no ability to command the elves in battle. The most important thing is that it is difficult for me to see where the protagonist has grown.

His Rocket Nova is probably the earliest dark Pokémon novel.

Damn it, a mere author got married and stopped updating.

To be honest, even if the protagonist is a playboy, even single, and dressing up as a woman, it would be too clumsy to curse multiple girlfriends.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that this book is poisonous. I advise you to quit as soon as possible to avoid being poisoned and ascending.

It's hard to imagine that the author has written Rocket Nova. I think Rocket Nova is one of the few Pokémon fans that can be compared with Teiki, Team Rocket, and Legend of Kojiro. However, I read it a little and found that this book was difficult to read. The setting of Rocket Nova is still unforgettable to me, such as the elements

I think you should write Eunuch Rocket Nova earlier in this book. Pokemon Rocket Nova is obviously much better than this one. Why did you write Eunuch Rocket Nova?

🤭Author: The first chapter of your book was broken twice in a row. Even if you are banned, you have to make up for it. I don't want to read anymore. It broke again in the ninth chapter. I can only say goodbye.

Boss, I have no other requirements. Five chapters a month is enough.

I actually updated my Cao, more and more.

2017 Book? ? ?

It's a fake corpse, it's a fake corpse, it's just a zombie, it's just a pity, the bronze talisman is still there today, but Mao Xiaofang is no longer there

This novel is very thoughtful. I hope the author will finish it well and publish a new novel

It's a fake corpse, why has it been updated again? It hasn't been updated in 2 years and I haven't even removed it from the bookshelf.

Read more of the elf books on the ranking list and write about them.

What can I say about this book? As far as I can see it now, it's mediocre, the writing is hard to describe, and there's no detail, so it's really boring.

Has the author considered getting a quasi-god? Banjira, Fatty, Metagross, Salamander

It feels a bit like a fantasy academy type covered in elf themes. It seems to be because the theme of elves and academies is so unpalatable.

Wuhu! Take off! The author is back