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The pain at the beginning of "Chi Jing" made me feel it even through the screen (however, the connection between flesh and blood in the chapter made me lose my mind for a second). As the heroine of this book, Chi Jing, as soon as she traveled back in time, the word "slave" was branded on her face. In ancient times, tattooing was a form of tattooing on the face. Although the area of ​​the wound was very small, it brought not only physical pain to the victim, but also mental humiliation and torture. There is no woman in the world who does not love beauty - no matter whether she is born with a pleasing face or not - even if she has an acne, she will feel awkward and uncomfortable until it disappears. The owner of Chi Jing is a naturally beautiful person, and because of her good looks, she was jealous of her owner and had the word "slave" branded on her face. But the heroine whose soul comes from the 21st century didn't care about this. After escaping from the Tang family, she covered herself with a veil just to avoid scaring others. This shows that she is really different from ordinary women. The most gifted thing is that Chi Jing can see the scene when others die. As an atheist, I don't know much about supernatural things. My superficial understanding is that Chi Jing has opened his eyes and can predict the death of others. This is the golden finger of the heroine of this book. Qidian's online articles all have the term "Three Golden Chapters". Although I don't know much about it, in this book, Chi Jing's life experience and personality, the experience of the body owner and his relationship with the owner's family, the description of the golden finger, and the relationship between Chi Jing and his younger brother are all established by the author in just three chapters. There are highlights, foreshadowing, suspense, and appeal. For a new author, it is already very good. However, for a female channel book, the first few chapters are to introduce the heroine's golden finger, so it involves scenes of character death, and the author's description is very vivid, so it is a bit bloody, but not scary. Those who are timid can skip the detailed description, which will not affect the understanding of the plot. Although Chi Jing can see the fate of others, she does not believe in fate, so she wants to change the fate of Wan Sheng, whom she considers to be her younger brother in her previous life. A reader of this book once questioned Chi Jing's feelings for Wan Sheng from his biological brother. I think that reader must be a man, so he cannot understand this kind of thing. Women are very emotional creatures. They will transfer their feelings to things related to them because some people, or even their pets, leave. What's more, it's her own flesh and blood relatives who are the purpose of supporting her to live. The death of his younger brother is a knot that cannot be erased or unsolved in Chi Jing's heart. Therefore, after time travel, when he sees someone who looks the same as his younger brother and has the same birthmark, he will inevitably treat him as his younger brother in his previous life and love him. Traveling to a completely unfamiliar world with no goals and direction, Wan Sheng is her purpose for living in this life. There was a very popular saying on Douyin before: Have you ever risked your life for someone in your life? For Chi Jing, her younger brother is the person she wants to protect at all costs, so this setting is completely reasonable. Chi Jing could see hell in her eyes, how could it be a white lotus? She predicted that the Tang family who had bullied the owner would be exterminated. She did not report the news, but left with an attitude that it had nothing to do with her. But she still has a compassionate heart. Based on my understanding of the author, I think this character's personality is very similar to the author himself. Miss Wong was my guide at the starting point. She was righteous and helpful. She took the initiative to help us promote books in the column and answered many questions that new authors did not understand. She hated evil so much that everyone turned a blind eye to unfair things, but she was the only one who would stand up regardless of her own safety. The same goes for Chi Jing. She relied on her own scale in her heart to watch on the bank of the River Styx. If the people passing by were kind, she would hold them back and not let them pass; if the people passing by were evil, she would let them go to hell. Chi Jing has demons in his heart, but he can ferry people across the river.

Well, I came here as recommended by the system every day. I haven't read the book yet. I just read your book review and I think what you said is really right: "If you don't want to read this book, you can stop reading it and remove it from the bookshelf. Don't be so self-righteous that you can curse people in the book to gain a sense of presence, and I hope there will be a quiet reading atmosphere in the book." This sentence makes me feel very sad. When I read a book, I will open the chapter reviews from time to time to see the comments that are like-minded to me, rather than the bad words. What you said really makes me feel heart-warming. And when I look for books and find them that are not suitable for me, I usually discard them and remove them from the bookshelf, and I never leave random comments. Of course, if you feel that the book is still salvageable, you will put it in a category that is not commonly used. Maybe you feel that it is hard to describe it because of its precious light and dust.

I have read more than 300 chapters. I started reading it on Friday night and finished it in one sitting. The plot drags on a bit, but it's still very interesting and it's better to get to the fight quickly. Before I know it, it has reached 1 million words. Come on, right, how many thousand words are left in this book? Is there a score for the next book? Also, do you know how many times I checked this paragraph before I dared to publish it? I was afraid that I would make typos and be criticized by you.

I have a habit. I can't help but write a few sentences to express my personal opinion when I see a book that I like or have some thoughts on. After reading the introduction, I feel that it is very interesting. Reading the book reviews, I will think that this book should be very exciting. For an old book fan, it is really not easy to find a novel worth reading in the sea of ​​​​all books. I picked up this book after reading the introduction. I will objectively evaluate whether the book is good or not. But this book cannot be said to be very mature and exciting. At least the first few chapters did not strongly attract me to read. Moreover, the first chapter was lost and may have been blocked by Qidian. I patiently read the previous long review and several subsequent chapters. Strictly speaking, the author's writing style cannot be said to be sophisticated. At least in my opinion, it is not as good as the review in the long review. It also has traces of a novice's greenness. This may be a common problem among novices, some are obvious and some are not. The most obvious problem with this book is that there are too many inner activities of the characters at the beginning, which makes it seem a bit long-winded. As the story develops, the cause and effect of the past and present lives should be appropriately included, and the foreshadowing should be complementary to each other to make it more attractive. In this way, it starts with memories, the present, and inner activities, which makes people feel unclear. Although it is compact, it feels messy. The author may want readers to understand the heroine's past and present experiences as quickly as possible, but this kind of writing is really not recommended. Of course, the concept of the story is still good, but the author's writing skills need to be refined, and maybe he will get better and better after writing a few more books. Come on＾0＾~🌹

It's not easy to be able to write almost 900,000 words! Come on, wrong girl!

I am curious about the truth about Wang Sheng and Li Sheng's reasoning question.

Shocked! ! ! The word count actually exceeds mine! God, am I just left behind? Wuwuwu, crying~~

I saw this book when I was grabbing red envelopes. Although I didn't grab the monthly pass package, I still clicked in to take a look. The author was so gentle in his criticism at the beginning. I sent the seven votes first. I will definitely vote in the future when I think about it. If you haven't grabbed the monthly pass package by 11 o'clock tonight, the monthly pass will be given away.

It's pretty good, the logic is smooth, and it doesn't seem that difficult to understand. I don't know when the heroine will go to Tianji Lane again. The first two times were just to test the waters, right? It's time to make a splash on your third visit, right? Looking forward to it

I read your column on the official account... Come and take a look at the koi 🤓

Finding a good book depends on luck! This is a great book that was almost mistaken for a supernatural beginning! When I first read this book, I thought it was very heavy. Generally speaking, although thick novels have depth, they are not very exciting. But to my surprise, when I looked down, I found it particularly interesting. Yes, this is a book that is both in-depth and enjoyable. Taking "Yi" as the carrier, it is filled with various short stories about physiognomy and character interpretation. Very interesting. I was lucky enough to find a good book. In-depth books are sometimes too thick, but they can easily make people read heavy and depressing. Cuo Gu Liang has a good grasp of the degree, being thick but not heavy, calm but not depressing. It just starts out a bit like a supernatural novel. It's scary to see. Take a deep breath, don't be afraid. When I read the second chapter, I realized: Oh, fortunately not. Damn it, is it really a good idea to scare readers like this? There is also a reader who makes matters worse @chuchunfeichong. With her comments, it becomes even more supernatural and terrifying. It's so bad. There are really just as many readers as there are authors (excluding me, I am a good person with normal aesthetics). Like a raccoon dog from the same hill. I copied it to prove that I did not wrong them both. 1. The original text of Cuo Gu Liang: The strong pungent smell of burnt skin (so terrible o(╥╥)o). Chu Chun Fei Chong's comment: It's obvious that this cooking skill is not good! It will be crucial to find a man who can cook in the future! (Not only is it scary, but it also uses a roaring body o(╥╥)o Human flesh cannot be eaten). Buddhism talks about cause and effect, and Taoism talks about responsibility. They are different systems. Some books tend to confuse cause and effect with responsibility, and are written in a nondescript manner. So far as I have read the chapters, the author's writing is still very good, and there is basically no such misalignment. One destiny, two luck, three feng shui. Here we will talk about two views of numerology. One view is more depressing: there must be something in life and there will be an end, but there is no time in life, so don't force it. I just think that fate is fixed and no matter how I change it, it won't help. We can only slightly improve luck and feng shui on the basis of destiny. Another view: You can change your destiny by changing your luck and feng shui. Cuo Guliang should adhere to the second point of view. I also hold the same view: I have no control over my fate. This is good, at least the novel looks much more enjoyable and more positive. Finally, predict the plot. Li Shangyin has a poem that goes: If you have talent in wind and music, you will not be dissatisfied, but if you have no life in Guan Zhang, what will happen? The meaning of the poem is: Even if Mr. Zhuge has the talents of Guan Zhong and Leyi, he will not be able to turn the tide after Zhang Fei and Guan Yu leave. Wan Sheng's ending was that after his rebellion was exposed, he was sentenced to death by being broken into pieces. Guanli is the fate of a famous general in the Wuwu year, Wuwu month, Wuwu day, and Wuwu hour. They are the lord and his subordinates. Can you imagine that the heroine is the female Zhuge in the novel? Also, who are Zhang Fei and Zhao Zilong? Chi Cheng transforms into a counselor, and the novel style changes to strategy? Just thinking about it makes me feel so cold.

I would like to give some advice to the author. If you release new books in the future, you can put them in front of your completed books. Don't put them in the back. It's too troublesome to find them. It's better to put them in the front for easy viewing.

This book is particularly crooked, and I like all the crooked parts, but it's a bit cruel, a bit cruel, and that's how human nature is, but it's just written in a realistic way!

The front is very ok, but the back is a bit cliche.

That's weird, didn't it say that the new book would be released in August or September? Why wasn't it found?

This book came to my attention during a book shortage. Overall, the plot is quite interesting, but the writing style is a bit rough. Come on, author, I hope it gets better and better!

The heroine is like a living Buddha, and the Holy Mother is not that great. Tang tide branded her face, looking for someone to blame her, and he had a broad hand. . I really didn't want to watch the rest and jumped directly to the heroine going back to deliver her baby. What did you think of this? . Didn't you just worry about what you said earlier? What does the child in her belly have to do with you?

A different kind of romance, very nice to watch

Where did Chapter 1 go? The beginning is the second chapter

Congratulations on the completion, the reorder is completed, and the cover is well received.

The plot is quite jumpy, and the male supporting cast is indeed a bit stiff, but to be honest, many people may prefer this kind of old-fashioned plot and don't like too many routines. This cliché is not a derogatory term, it refers to the old-school classic plots, such as repaying a favor from a big shot, pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, falling off a cliff and encountering old martial arts secrets and treasures, etc. In fact, it is more skillful to write such a story well, because the readers clearly know how the plot should develop, and it is not easy for the readers to still follow it. This can be regarded as a kind of returning to nature. In fact, today's readers have experienced many battles and have never seen any routines before. There are basically no plots with unpredictable endings or particularly unexpected ones. It's better to choose that classic section and add new content to make the details more substantial. Keep up the good work, author. This is the first book. With more than 100,000 words, I can already give it a relatively high score. It does have problems, but it also has highlights. And those shortcomings are also based on experience. If the author can persist in writing carefully, he will definitely get better. Overall, it looks funny, cute, and sometimes mean-spirited. People who like it will especially like it, such as me, who always enjoy watching it (*^ω^*).

Let's talk about "Chi Jing" again. Chi Jing is the soul character of the entire novel. Whether her image can stand up will largely determine the success of the book. She was tortured before the time travel (I won't spoil it here, just read the book for yourself, she has super powers). The owner of the body after the time travel also had a rough fate. Although she may have a great background, she was reduced to a slave and allowed to be bullied. She is a person who lacks love, so the wrong girl arranged for many people to love her (slightly Mary Sue, the author is great, I recommend not to have a Mary Sue, ahhh, be serious, of course this is my personal taste, I think Mary Sue is too unreasonable, and it will lower the level of the novel). Chi Jing is calm, rational, and deeply passionate. She seems cold but is actually enthusiastic, and her love and protection for her family is even more heartbreaking. At first, she just wanted to protect her younger brother. Later, the scope of her "home" continued to expand, and Yu Ping, Lan Yimo, etc. Joined in. If this trend continues, she will become a central air conditioner and warm many people! I really like to see the loving and warm part of the family. It is more touching than the ambiguous relationship between men and women. I hope you can write more about the family part. Chi Jing's character and design are both successful. She has the potential of a great heroine. Even if she doesn't take on the role, she will still be liked. The male protagonist and male supporting characters, please don't all like Chi Jing! I am against Mary Sue, alas, Mary Sue is really my resentment. Especially brother Wan Sheng, don't make trouble, German orthopedics is not fun at all, not fun! How could Xiao Nie be Xiu'er's brother? Isn't this a double orthopedic surgery... My head hurts... It seems that Lan Yimo's wife can be raised, and she is very worried about the marriage of little sister Chi Jing. From the plot point of view, the novel digs many holes and sets up many mysteries, so it is very attractive. From the beginning of the Tang family's destruction, to the major events planned by Wan Sheng, to the terrible secret of the saint, the novel has been digging holes, leaving little clues, and foreshadowing thousands of miles. This is the fine tradition of Chinese novels, and I am just waiting to see the author fill in the holes. Let's talk about the writing style. Wrong Girl's writing is very contagious and creates an immersive atmosphere. I read the part about Chi Jing dreaming about her parents in the middle of the night, and I was really scared. That's why some people kept asking if it was a supernatural novel. However, the author has promised that those who are not frightened can feel free to enter the pit. The author greatly appreciates the update!

She came here after going round and round for several lifetimes, I thought it was God's blessing, but I didn't know it was the beginning of fate. A brand, she is Chi Jing with a transparent heart, and then she met him. That face shows how long she has regretted. She said, her brother is only thirteen years old. She said, her brother is missing. How long did it take from initial anxiety to despair? This emotion had trapped her for the rest of her life, but the young man on horseback gradually mixed with the sweetly smiling figure. When she woke up from the dream, she smiled bitterly. She dreamed that she had lost her brother again. But in just a few minutes, what I got in exchange was eternal guilt and heartbreaking pain. In this life, she will protect him no matter what, even at any cost. She can tell fortunes and divination, but she cannot see her own destiny. Her eyes can see life and death, but she is powerless to prevent all tragedies. If she couldn't take it lightly, she would set a goal and move forward unswervingly. Maybe it was stubbornness, maybe it was the despair of not getting it for too long. Even if she knew that her brother was about to enter a doomed situation, she would still move forward and pave a smooth road for him. Along this journey, she was always moving forward, just for one goal. Whenever she thought of her past life, it was like tearing pain, and the emotions gripped her heart wantonly again and again, but it made Chi Jing hold on to the current motivation tightly, even if she knew that it was not love from heaven but destiny in the soul. Even though she remembered everything more, her eyes were full of hope. Because she was confused, she had many people behind her without knowing it, so even if it was suffering, she was happy to break free. She has the benevolence of a doctor, so of course she has to pay to see a doctor! ~(￣▽￣~)~ She has a kind heart and rescued Lan Yimo, who was regarded as an alien, from the cage, as well as the children who were cruelly destroyed. She will not be overflowing with love, and she will not hesitate to do useless things that cannot be stopped, because Chi Jing has already seen through human nature. Chi Jing has endured too many hardships, but she resolutely follows the same path as before, because there are too many people she likes on that path, and she constantly absorbs knowledge to become stronger. The warmth in the comedy, the humanity in the blood, and the human heart in the five elements and gossip. This book is obviously written in a relaxed style, and the emotions are expressed very powerfully, making people shed tears or smile knowingly many times. But it expresses so much, which makes me look forward to the future development even more. In my opinion, Chi Jing is like a three-dimensional living person. If someone offends me, I will repay them. If they treat me well, they will definitely repay me with springs!

What's the new book? What's the new book? What's the new book?

Great book, please read it! Already collected! Come on! Mutual encouragement!

Wow, Wrong Wong is finally over! Congratulations! ! !

What's the new book? What's the new book? What's the new book~

Write an outline? It's a bit wild to catch up, and the grassland is a bit big.

The author's writing is very good! Chi Jing was a girl with superpowers. She was taken to a research institute and eventually died. She traveled back to ancient times. Fortunately, she still had superpowers and was able to resolve the crisis. After resolving the crisis, she was rescued by someone who looked like her brother and guessed that he was her brother's previous life. On the surface, his status is ordinary, but secretly he is anything but ordinary. What's the background behind it? The author laid deep foreshadowing. Chi Jing's love for his younger brother is touching. Although in ancient times, he did not know that she was his sister, when writing this, the details were handled very well. Regarding human nature, the author often writes witty words that make people think deeply~ Chi Jing has a pair of eyes that can see through the future. These eyes are enviable, but are they not a pain? Facing the impending death of her brother and the future of the heroes who died on the battlefield, she sees it in her eyes, feels pain in her heart, and is anxious. Can she change it? Or are you unable to change and die generously in the end? After reading this, I feel helpless, but it doesn't make me despair. Maybe the author has other plans. Also, I want to ask, who is the male protagonist? Who is it? Who is it? Who is it?

In other books, the time-travelling women take the initiative and cry and shout to avenge their original bodies, but this one doesn't look so holy. I also like the skill of being able to see the scene just before death. What I like even more is the description of the twelve-year-old saint. It's simply amazing. . Somewhat creepy. Although it can be seen that the author's writing style is a bit immature. First collect and fatten up, and support new authors. Save it for the New Year and nibble it slowly. Can the author finish the Spring Festival~