Super God Loot

This is a bad ending... It feels like there are still a lot of pitfalls. If nothing else, the ending feels rushed. And so many people have a favorable impression, and in the end, there is a heroine whom I don't know or know about. This is not a suspense, but a trap←_←The heroine in the voting is better than this. There are also many people whose presence is really thin at the end. There is no mention of cause and effect. It is useless to spread out such a big situation in the blink of an eye, not to mention the foreshadowing that makes people shine. There are so many poisonous points. However, after reading the whole process, I found that the comedy and other aspects are well written, and it is really relaxing. The fighting is not like other books that require multiple chapters or even a dozen chapters to make me want to vomit. It is simple and crude, and it is refreshing. The location is great if you want to relax. I hope the author can write a good next book. Small suggestion: Let the relationship develop... Be natural, whether it is falling in love (this is actually difficult to write...) Or getting together later (be sure to have more scenes here|･ω･｀), I also hope that the author can maintain this relaxed, happy and informal style of painting, so that it can fill in the pits. Come on

The author was so careless and felt that he was fooling the readers. After reading more than a dozen chapters, two chapters were missing! Not in Chapter 10, not in Chapter 14 either! Is it because of the free chapters? It's hard to believe that this kind of author can write any wonderful stories🙂

Why did you kick the junior junior brother's egg instead of taking away an egg? In this way, the protagonist is a man with three eggs.

The author should update quickly. People are inherently good at first. If not, the author would be a bad guy. If you don't update, I don't like it. The author has to decide what to do.

Realm division: Twelve stages of mortal realm [number]. Nine levels of Tongjing: Spiritual power, Yuanli, Gangqi, Yin and Yang, heaven and man, psychic communication, golden elixir, overcoming tribulations, and breaking laws. The six realms of the King's Realm: Immortality, Ten Thousand Dharma, Unity, Virtual Sky, Chaos, Derivatives (also known as Earth Immortal)...

To be honest, if I write it further, it may be out of control. Although many characters have very few scenes later, I want to know their endings, such as Zhao Mingyu, Tushan Jiuyao, Xiu Xiu, etc. . . Hmm. . . Think about it this way. . . Sure enough, I still feel dissatisfied. . .

It's finished. This is the first book I've finished.

Yesterday I went to buy cigarettes. I bought a pack of 20 cigarettes. I gave the boss 50 and gave me 40. I pretended not to know, put it in my pocket and left. Before I had gone far, the boss called me: You didn't take your cigarettes! I shed tears of emotion and took out ten yuan and gave it to the boss: You gave me ten yuan more. The boss was also moved to tears: Young man, bring me the cigarettes and I'll give you a pack of them. Smoking the new cigarette that the boss gave me, the pure taste couldn't help but moved me again: Boss, bring me the 50 cigarette just now and I'll change it for you! The boss took the 50 and was moved again: Young man, give me the money you asked for just now, and I will change it for you. After receiving the money from my boss, I was moved again and took out a mobile phone from my pocket: Boss, please return the mobile phone to you. With tears in his eyes, the boss tremblingly took out a wallet: "Young man, return your wallet to you." At this time, I couldn't hold it any longer, so I knelt on the ground and hugged the boss's thigh, crying: Brother, go to Room 304 of the hotel next door and take your daughter who is in elementary school home! The boss was surprised when he heard this, sighed, turned around and shouted to the shop: Hongxing, stop hiding, come out and go back with your husband! I looked at the woman walking out of the store in surprise, shook my head slightly and said, "Brother, you can take this medicine and use it." Taking the penicillin I handed him, the boss lowered his head in shame after reading the instructions and said, "Forget it, I don't need this medicine anymore. I am an HIV virus carrier. I'm sorry, brother!" My heart instantly went to freezing point. , But the boss's sincerity made it feel warmer than ever before. I said: "Brother, I almost did something that I will regret for the rest of my life! To be honest, that ointment is not penicillin, but dichlorvos!" The boss pondered for a moment, the tears in the corners of his eyes had not yet dried. He closed his eyes and looked up to the sky and sighed: "Young man, in fact, I am not sick at all. Your honesty It's really touching, I'm so damn happy!" I rubbed the tip of my sore nose and said, "Boss, don't do this, I deserve to die! In fact, your daughter is not next door, I lied to you!" The boss waved his hand and said, "Boy, it's okay, it's okay, and look carefully, this is not your wife at all, and your wife's name is not Hongxing! "I suddenly realized, and a warm feeling went through my heart: "Haha, brother, actually there is nothing in my wallet. I just picked it up on the roadside." I took out the wallet and waved it in front of him. The boss said: "Boy, that phone is just a model. If you don't believe me, just take a look." He took out the phone, and the display was just a piece of colored paper. Our eyes met, and we sobbed softly because we were moved by each other. I said with a thick nasal voice: "Brother, actually, the fifty yuan I gave you later is also fake!" The boss shook his head slightly, and a crystal teardrop fell on the ground: "Young man, the change you asked for is actually... Oh, bring it over, and I will change it for you." My tears were like a bursting dam, blurred. On the retina, he bent slightly and rummaged through the money box carefully. I finally couldn't help it anymore and said, "Brother, I actually don't know how to smoke! I came here just to use the fake money!" The old man patted me on the shoulder and whispered: "Young man, to be honest, this is actually not my shop..." Life is not easy, post a joke, Bo Jun smiled. If you laugh, I hope you can stop by and read it in my book. Thank you very much (^_^)

I fully subscribe, I give you the full monthly pass, and then I give you all the recommended votes every day, but you don't actually give me more? Does this make sense?

At the thousandth chapter, if the protagonist is still a fledgling, give up. If you read a book with a female protagonist or no female protagonist, that's all. If you flirt with a bunch of girls but then put them aside and pretend to be innocent, is the protagonist gay?_→

The Book of Killing Coins is full of mentally retarded plots

I never understood why the Great Sword Qing Sect was number one? The forced conscription order can make others do tasks that require death, and the sect will not care. The three-year protection period for newbies is canceled immediately. The referee can also intervene at will during PK. Author, did you really write it seriously?

Why doesn't the protagonist go to the ground to plunder the continent's resources 😏

The part about subduing one's wisdom is too outrageous. The protagonist, as the legitimate son of Zhou Mu, is recommended to enter the Sword Sect through the back door, but is ridiculed by the genius disciples. Only the second generation can understand by mocking the genius, and the genius mocks the second generation for being stupid. They will probably kill you before you have grown up, and they are actively mocking you. It is too late to avoid it, right?

After reading the above, no one doubts that every time the person who fights the protagonist either loses his pulse or has his cultivation level reduced? Or is it a forced reduction of intelligence?

I'm afraid you won't believe it, but I've known for a long time that this piece of shit Qi Ran will definitely fail! Ever since I traveled back to the era of Emperor Jiwu, Fulong Black Hand felt that something was wrong. This ending was not as good as a direct eunuch, which directly lowered the grade of the entire book. It was so screwed up! Five-star negative review! I'm really angry. It's understandable that you're tired from work. If you don't want to write, you can take a rest. What the hell is this? Nine and a half months pregnant and induced labor? So angry!

After reading more than 50 chapters, it turns out that entering a sect does not test the disciples' character, nor does they have a sense of belonging to the sect. They just give each person the exercises one by one, without telling how the sect maintains its existence. Let's talk about whether inner doors and outer doors are necessary? If you go to the outer sect to learn basic exercises and do odd jobs, and if you are not qualified enough to go out to work at an old age, you can go to the inner sect if you are good, and if you are good enough, you can really teach it. With this horse setting, how can a master make apprentices for one person and one skill? Why enter the inner door? What does the true biography teach? Let accountants teach agricultural college students how to farm? This novel is about martial arts for the sake of martial arts, and has no IQ.

Is this event the reason for the two updates in the past few days? With all due respect, what is the difference between this and Double Eleven, first increasing the price and then discounting it?

What the hell, it can be seen that the author is indolent at heart. Instead of working hard on his own, he thinks about stealing the fruits of other people's labor all day long. He doesn't realize that he doesn't look good, and he is also lustful, haha.

New writing and old routines. The plot is bloody. The poisonous hemiplegia has slipped away. Newbies can check it out. It looks good for newbies. I don't recommend reading it for old bookworms who want to feel more comfortable. It's all old routines. It's uncomfortable. Don't use it to criticize me for writing a book or get lost. I don't accept refutation.

Nice refreshing article. But why does such an awesome system need to practice black magic, and the black knife, which can affect the mind, is still regarded as a treasure? No normal person would touch such a dangerous thing when his future is bright, right? There is no shortage of martial arts and magic weapons for the synthesizer, so he still keeps this black knife, waiting to be controlled? Or are you waiting to be influenced and kill the wrong person? If you are disobedient, you will always think about the Devourer. Why not hurry up and synthesize it?

When we were in Liangzhou, we should have gone to the cell to draw out the pulse of the death row inmates. Since it was a plundering system, we should have been able to pluck out the people who wanted to be killed, cripple them, and then slap them until not even a drop of their blood was left. This kind of cheating is not very particular.

I read it when I was in junior high school, and I didn't have much insight. Oops, I feel so good. After reading this thing, although everyone is scolding it now and being embarrassed and so on, at that time, only a few years ago, all the online articles were like this, just mindless and cool articles. Then I read this and it was so cool and comfortable. I was still reading pirated novels at that time. I thought this stuff was not very popular, it was niche, it was the most common kind of mindless cool novel, and few people would pay attention to it. I didn't expect that so many people had read it.

I'll give you a monthly ticket with an extra 100 points. Can you add fines to it?

The system flow is quite good, one is like this, and the other is an anti-routine system. The system flow is a pitfall.

Happy New Year! May everyone have a prosperous Year of the Dog

The writing is too retarded! The villain has no IQ at all;

Happy New Year, may you all be in the Year of the Dog.

I don't have much money, so I'll give you a reward of 10,000 yuan on the first day of the new year. Please update well in 2018~

I think it's okay, but there are some problems with the emotional line with the female partner, and the ending is a bit sloppy.