Genius Quarterback

People in American football really need physical talent. Basically, those who can become professional football are just fucking animals. Asians really can't play if they don't have a system or a golden body.

After reading the first few chapters, the writing is not good.

I thought that the protagonist would rise to the top, and I started to get slapped in the face, but now I don't even have the position. I read the novel just to make the impossible possible. The author, you don't know how to make the ending: the protagonist worked hard, but due to various force majeure in foreign countries, the protagonist became an excellent cook. Such a weird ending.

A good rugby game must be forced to arrange a scene where the female protagonist is injured and the male protagonist is emotionally ups and downs. I also played in the two major American American Football Leagues in the country. Our enthusiasm for rugby and the emphasis on winning or losing the game cannot be changed by a woman. If you don't have the ability, just come down and don't drag down the collective. The quarterback relies on his brain, and if he can't even manage his emotions well, he might as well play on the defensive team. Also, a quarterback on the line even had a father who had objections to him and even gave him a hair. But the author, you actually made up a male protagonist who is talented and has the unconditional support of the head coach. I was convinced. If the online dad just slacked off during the game and let the defensive line come in, you would be dead. The whole brother is the last hope of the whole family. You don't want to lose the starting lineup because of a bad relationship with the male protagonist. You gave up and gave up. The more you look at it, the more disgusting it becomes.

Not even half time, just trembling hands and feet. Are all the steps I usually run in vain?

The protagonist is not well portrayed, but instead focuses on a few supporting characters. The main problem is that it is taken for granted. The initial plot of being invited is unreasonable. He has never played in the olive tree and has no outstanding talent. How can he be directly substituted? This is a college football game, not a high school. In college, the team is either the main player or the substitute.

I lost interest when I saw the Spartans, and the protagonist, who was all-powerful at home, gave up when he came to the official competition in the United States. Even if he loses the game because he first came into contact with rugby, it should be because he is inferior in skills rather than because he is an actor who is trembling with pustules. This is not a genius, just a mortal who has good physical fitness but has to struggle every time to become a talent.

Well, let's talk about the description on the field. The description of the quarterback's actions in the pocket is good, but when it comes to the description of the receiver, there is room for improvement. I'm not going to describe running routes in detail or anything, but what about his position? Left side? Right side, sideline or center? Is there anyone else who can help with blocking? I wanted to see these descriptions that would make the scene more vivid. Come on, writing about rugby is not easy.

Please write it carefully. Actually, I fell in love with rugby after watching Lightspeed Man.

The author is a bit funny, and a good online article needs to be attractive enough in the first fifty chapters, but in the first fifty chapters, the author deliberately wrote some twists and turns in order to be cool. For example, the protagonist was exhausted before playing a full quarter, and any NCAA quarterback would not appear in a game and would cause a passing error due to lack of energy. Also, comrade, are you writing web articles or competitive web articles? Readers need to be enthusiastic. For the sake of your feelings, I deliberately let go of a touchdown in the last game due to a slip. Everyone was climbing to the top of GC, but you missed it. I like football, and there are very few such novels on the Internet. Although this novel is still readable, there is no harm without comparison. Compared with King of the Bay Area, this novel is far from as exciting as the rules of football, stimulating the readers' adrenal glands (a must for competitive novels), the detailed portrayal of the protagonist and teammates, and the description of the game. I hope the author will work harder. If it weren't for the lack of rugby novels, he might have given up on the book. Can you recommend any other rugby novels?

I once read a book called "Monster Football", and I was very excited about it. It was full of side-to-side pushing, and it was boring but enjoyable. As a result, I thought the first 100 chapters of this book were good, but the more I read it, the more depressing it became.

Hello fellow book friends, I wonder if you can see this reply. Because it seems that the system will not prompt. Regardless of whether you have seen it or not, first of all, thank you all for your support, encouragement and suggestions. To be honest, I have hit rock bottom during this time. I didn't make a good outline before, and I don't understand what I wrote now. This was not the result I wanted at the beginning. I thought about giving up several times. As long as I pressed the button to end the series, it would be over. But just before pressing the end button, I hesitated again. As countless sports programs have shown, it is easy to end, but it is really difficult to start, and it is even harder to persist. So I let go again and insisted on coding a chapter even if I didn't know what to write. I also know that this is a kind of torture for myself and the readers of this book. But I don't want it to end like this. I'm rewriting the previous chapters and the progress is very slow. Because I have written until now, I have a clearer understanding of the previous content outline. I believe that the plot will be better after rewriting. I'm afraid one month is not enough, but I hope I can keep it on your bookshelf. When you completely forget me one day and come back again, I believe I will bring you wonderful works. Reading is difficult, and writing is also difficult. These days, I have been studying the works of several great masters, hoping to find some inspiration. After I start writing, I can feel the value and hardship in the works of great masters. I hope I can persevere and one day create works that satisfy me. Thank you all. Thank you very much.

Boring. . . . . Maybe imitation is genius? ? ?

Okay, wait, come on, support.

Where is the system, where is it? It's been over 200 chapters and it's still abusing the master. I hope to see sideways pushing instead of failing again and again. After raising it for more than a month, the result today is that it is boring. Recommended, but don't plan to order again.

Give a reward if you win.

Where is the genius of your protagonist? You have accomplished nothing yet and no one wants to read it. It is a fictional story and you still abuse the protagonist. Do you think this is called maturity? It's so LOW.

More than 200 chapters and yet to enter the NFL

Support.

There are still a few days left in a game.

Just like another book, the protagonist's specialty is accurate long passes. If your protagonist is good at running + accurate in short and medium distances / very fast, then you can write more things when writing about games. PA+read option+short and medium speed of light passing.

Why is it suddenly finished? Didn't you say it needs to be modified?

I hope it will change after another month. 🥺

Well, as I write this, I can't even read it myself. When I first started writing this book, I came with the idea of ​​"I want to create interesting works." However, I rushed to write without even finishing the outline. As a result, I became an idiot and continued to revise and rewrite. Moreover, the rhythm was messed up and the plot was boring. I thought about coming back again, but found that it was already difficult. If you really want to write a good book, an outline is really important. In fact, during this period, the book was rewritten for the third time. It was just to make the book more interesting and faster-paced, but after writing ten chapters, I couldn't help but think that if this continues, the rest of the book might be as boring as before, because there is still no outline. So I wanted to calm down, go back to the outline, and see if I should rewrite it from scratch or start a new book. Thank you all book friends for supporting me, even if it is just a recommendation vote, I really appreciate it. I'm really sorry for not living up to your expectations. I also wish myself that I can write better and better in the future.

The biggest tournament in the world? Play rugby, not football.