A Fully Invincible Game Character Traveled Through Time

I feel like the author is making a fool of himself, this novel is like a diary

I don't know why first-person fantasy feels so disgusting

I read seven or eight chapters of the author's story, and the content is really good, but when I read it in the first person, I thought it would be better to change it. Even if you want to practice writing, don't disgust us readers.

First person. After reading three chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

I like the theme of the book very much. It can be seen that the author wants to write a relatively large world view, but it is a bit messy. In addition, there are no chapter titles, which makes it a bit tiring to read.

Once I see the first person narrative, I have no intention of reading any more. No first-person novel has ever been completed, and reading it is a waste of time.

This is not a first-person novel at all. Can a first-person novel contain a plot in which the protagonist is not present?

First person, how confident is the author? You are sure that you are better than the great gods and dare to write in the first person.

First person plus question mark? ? ? I don't even want to read it anymore

The author should be a newcomer. If the novel is written in the first person, it will make people feel messy, and there will be zero sense of substitution. If a novel has no sense of substitution, it can only be said to be waste paper.

Who sees it? ? .........

Looking forward to the ugly thief outfit and two weapons, it seemed like it in the first chapter. I was also obsessed with it at the time, but unfortunately I didn't do it later.

Brother, read the prologue yourself, there are a lot of bad sentences