The Long Journey to Immortality

It's really annoying that the authors of fairy tales now have to listen to their decision of whether to have a male protagonist or not. If there is a male protagonist, the author will just let nature take its own course! A well-written article is good with or without a male protagonist, but a poorly written article can be read with or without a male protagonist. If you are obsessed with something, it will also affect the writing mood of the author and readers! Many authors of fairy tale novels have lost a large number of new readers who read the comments and felt they were stale and gave up reading the novel. It's really annoying. I lost interest in reading it when I saw the comment section.

The author's writing was okay at the beginning. I guess he is a novice so the details are not particularly good, but overall it is good. There are about ten chapters in the middle where the author is just writing down a running account. I don't know what the author is thinking. But after reading the later chapters, I found that the author has really improved and his writing is getting better and better. The other supporting characters are also pretty good, not just the protagonist who is awesome, but the other characters are also very good. The main line is outstanding, but the branch lines still need to be improved.

The heroine has a righteous outlook on life, and is not like other female immortals who always have false spiritual roots and golden fingers. This book is more about the balance of heaven and the cycle of cause and effect. The plot is not full enough when I read it now, but it is not difficult to see that what the author wants to write should be a flesh-and-blood world of immortality. But I have to admit that as a novice, the author's writing is not good enough. The plot is a bit complicated in some places, and some holes have been dug but have not been filled for a long time. But I believe the author will be better!

Never have a male protagonist, never have a male protagonist, never have a male protagonist! Say important things three times. Author, you also said that you are an uncle-controller. This is absolutely not acceptable. If you have a male protagonist like this, the female protagonist will not be far away from becoming weak. After all, an uncle is a female protagonist who needs protection just like taking care of a little girl! In fact, there are quite a few people who like to read novels without male protagonists on the female channel Qidian. Com.

I watch it regardless of whether it has a male protagonist or not. The key is, it's even better. . .

I think overall it's pretty good, but the development is a bit slow. I recommend reading it after you become a disciple. It's worth watching.

Why isn't it Honglian Yehuo? It's only ranked 14th.