Big Bang of Faith

Eh? Wasn't he a eunuch before?

Has the author ever thought that the so-called internal martial arts and methods of cultivating immortals are not suitable for cities? Reiki's environmental requirements are too strong. Without a good environment, cultivating immortality will not be affordable for the general public. The key point here is that Aura doesn't work in most worlds and its weaknesses are too obvious. Let's talk about the fact that spiritual energy is not adapted to the world. If a cultivator is allowed to go to a world without spiritual energy, what awaits him will only be consumed but not replenished. This will limit the way. Talking about the weakness, Dantian, look at all the novels about those who practice the internal energy spiritual energy system. If they are abolished, their Dantian will be abolished. If cultivation depends entirely on whether there is spiritual energy in the world, then this practice is just like a mirror, a flower in a mirror, a flower in the water, and the moon. If suddenly there is no spiritual energy again, it will be just like the original myth, a reincarnation. Infinite loop The reason why it is not suitable for most people is also very simple. The earth is recovering, and there is no immortality substance. (The author must have watched Zhetian). Playing cultivating immortals without immortality substance is tantamount to courting death. If you retreat for hundreds or thousands of years at a time, you may die of old age. Cultivating immortality in a world without immortality is simply making fun of life. Where did you get thousands of years of life? Cultivation to immortality is the most time-consuming, it is an endless cycle. When it comes to martial arts breakthroughs, the author also mentioned in his book that you can practice when you are full. This is the real way. Food is the most indispensable thing on the earth, and meat is even more indispensable. Medicines are all artificially cultivated. The key point is stability. Stability in cultivation is one. The second key point is social stability. When practicing Yangshen Martial Arts, no matter if you are not as powerful as guns or cannons in the early stage, you don't dare to compete with missiles in the later stage because of your temper, right? Therefore, practitioners must also obey the law. When there are more practitioners, everyone will get used to it and will be more able to abide by the law. It is not a system of cultivating immortals, which is not suitable for most people. Only a very small number of people can afford it. They have so-called spiritual roots, and then troubles occur. This is the benefit, and society will also have problems. If you think what I say makes sense, the author will adopt it. Are we talking about the martial arts Yang Shen really not needing the foundation building part? Just practice if you want to practice? Therefore, the book Dragon Snake appeared. The realm of Dragon Snake is all about the control of the body, the change of energy, the highest realm of breaking through the void and seeing the gods are indestructible. Would it be much better if it became a method for building the foundation of Yangshen Martial Arts? Only after the martial arts breaks the void, can you quickly get started practicing Yangshen Martial Arts. And I think the martial arts itself is a bit weak, but it will definitely be realized much faster, and it is all familiar to people, so the sense of identification will be strong. The problem arises again. Without energy flow, it will be difficult to write in the later stage. So the Yang Shen is changing. The martial arts of the Yang Shen and the cultivation of the soul are not to be integrated into one in the end. The author makes them merge into one energy to open up the sea of ​​suffering. It can also be connected to the method of covering the sky. This is considered a mainstream practice, and other things can be added, such as breathing techniques to quickly digest food. Zhetian's weapon refining method (I feel that the weapons inside really meet the definition of weapons, and the weapons for cultivating immortals feel so rubbish) To practice on earth, you must find a practice method that is truly suitable for people on earth. Eating is the only way for people on earth to practice cyclically.

I suspect the author is an avid cultivation enthusiast. The cultivation system itself has many classes. The mortal stage alone has nearly ten major realms. Including those after becoming immortals, it is not an exaggeration to say that there are 20. However, the author holds the cultivation system up so high. The legendary mages in the West can make nuclear bombs with their hands, but they are on the same level as our innate warriors! I haven't even touched the edge of cultivating immortality yet! How to play this? The dharma-tall people in the Supreme Being can only be at the same level as Nascent Soul according to his setting. If someone with Dharma heights goes three or four levels further, he will be the only one in the world who can jump out of the river of time! Not bad compared to Daluo Jinxian of Immortal Dao, right? But what is it if Yuanying is pushed forward three or four levels? After all, I still think the power span between the levels is too big.

What should I say? I took advantage of the limited offer and finished reading this book... The beginning of this book is quite eye-catching... But later the author collapsed. Forum friends keep saying these complimentary words. Does it make sense? Are we here for the comments? This jumble of words takes up at least a third of the book. Borrowing from someone's previous comment Some photos of netizens' comments after the accident A few reactions from others Opening the book and reading a few chapters Repeatedly. Originally the author wrote "Relics" which was very good... But because the author felt that there were fewer people subscribing to it, he stopped writing it. Why don't you think it's your own fault for not writing it, okay? I downloaded a few relics and felt that I didn't subscribe, so I started to open new books non-stop... Netizen water... Open new books... Netizen water... The whole book feels like there is no content from the author himself. After Chapter 130 of The Rise of Great Powers, the author may have thought of... Starting to add his own plot. There are too many force settings... If the author doesn't have a very grand idea, it will definitely collapse in the later stage... In fact, it's fine to write it down according to a martial arts series. Later, you can lead everyone to download the dungeon or you can download the dungeon to improve your level according to the protagonist's force system... To be honest, if I were asked to subscribe to this book, I would not subscribe to it. Anyone who has read the book for several years will have the same idea as me. After seeing the author's own introduction, I have been reading the book. How about re-reading your own book? How will you feel? Finally... I am not a troll or a rhythmic person. If a book has to be set according to the readers, the book will not be a good book. Readers' suggestions can be listened to, but they cannot be used. The author said that his subscriptions dropped by 31% as soon as he opened a copy. Opening a copy is a highlight. If there are fewer subscriptions, the author might as well go to the comments and ask why there are so few. Anyway, I feel like people don't want to read forum comments and praise people. Then start a new book. Forum comments encourage people to start a new book. It's not like playing live broadcast…

After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. It's just a waste of time. It's really disgusting. If I don't write a waste of time, won't I be able to continue writing?

Is the author in Black Swordsman? ? Can the protagonist give the outline to someone else to write? The protagonist ruins the classic by kneeling down and licking a woman? Disgusting? It's very exciting to watch! ! !

Why does the protagonist write a book? It's not to gain strength and immortality. If you enter the Yangshen Ruins and don't write about how to obtain the skills, what are you going to do inside?

The protagonist has no sense of existence at all. He deliberately weakened Goldfinger. After writing hundreds of chapters, he is still in the early stage of innateness. He has been writing the novel Relics and the protagonist has not come out to write. It is all soy sauce. It is so disgusting. It feels like it is all water. It is recommended to read chapter 250 and that's it. There is no need to read the following.

Liu Yun made a post. Here are some rough insights on what to write in future novels. I hope the author will adopt them! (It's not bragging, it's reasonable and well-founded) There are currently three oriental systems, the cultural system, the martial arts system, and the martial arts system. The Western system is Mage, Paladin, Priest, and Fighting Warrior. The power level is roughly the transition from low martial arts to medium martial arts, and the transition from low magic to medium magic. The sign is that there are no legends in the West and no innateness in the East. Therefore, the future direction is the transition from medium martial arts to high martial arts, and the transition from medium magic to high magic. So now I can't write about a world that's too perverted, including super magic, mythology, fantasy, and starry sky technology. It's not realistic. Let's talk about the Chinese martial arts system first: it advocates the development of the power, control, and potential of the human body. So, now, I think "Win the World" and "The Strongest Villain System" are both feasible. If you have anything you can add. Then there is the cultural system, which is a little more troublesome, but Yang Shen, Confucianism and Taoism are enough to hold the sage in his mouth, and he can also reach the level of gods and demons in the later stage, so he does not feel the need to upgrade the world. Finally, there is the martial arts system. I believe everyone has a lot of ideas. If the author wants to use "Jiuding Ji" to upgrade, I think it is very suitable. Then my own idea was to write "The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty" (the reasons will be discussed below). Let's talk about the Western mage system: because the author has already written "Arcane Throne", it has reached the god level in the later stage. I don't think there is anything to add in the early stage, but I just hope to broaden the types, because mages (elemental types) are a bit monotonous. Of course, there are arcanists now, and there are also: warlocks (blood warlocks and the like), wizards (and arcanists both study the world scientifically, but one uses science to explain the world, and the other uses the mysterious side to explain the world). Mages should also have magic network types, spell slot types, blue bar types, and new types. There are also summoners and beast masters. Fighter: I think we can broaden our thinking. Why do we have to use a Western setting? "Fights Break the Sphere" is just fine. Also, why do warriors have to be aggressive? I don't seem to have seen a combat profession like assassin. You can change the settings of Assassin's Creed in the early stage, and then change the DNF setting in the mid-term. The later version of "Lord of the Abyss" is perfect! Priest: There is nothing to say. The upper limit of strength = the strength of the god you believe in. It seems that there are not many people writing about this profession. Paladin: Must have Azeroth! Long live the Alliance! Tribal pig mmp! Ula! Ula! "Storm God" or other world views will be fine.

It should be called emotion, not belief.

Is it so poisonous? In this world where online literature is underdeveloped, there should always be something to make up for people's lack of spirit, and that is traditional martial arts novels. Even though the world is developing martial arts, martial arts can't compare to the original world?

Everyone, I really can't stand it anymore. I'm so poisoned. Goodbye π_π

Wow, it's so toxic. I'm about to give up the book. I'm obsessed with martial arts. I still have the mentality of a virgin bitch and the idea of ​​saving the world. It's disgusting. I'm disgusting.

One thing to say, I am really convinced by the reality system in it. The twelve main meridians and the eight extraordinary meridians are divided into twelve acquired levels and eight innate levels. As a result, you can beat the immortals of "Yang Shen" with four or five acquired levels? In many novels, the big bosses in many novels have already mastered the Twelve Meridians and the Eight Extraordinary Meridians. However, you can compete with other people's top combat forces by taking this separate system? Can you beat the yang gods and immortals by connecting the five meridians? And Grandmaster Yangshen is the best modern special forces soldier? Moreover, this acquired and innate system was summarized by the state at the beginning, which was not accurate enough. Later, you came up with so many systems, but in the end, you still use this system? And forcibly increase the combat power of this set? Are you kidding me?

There is nothing to say about the book. The poison in the back is not light.

The protagonist signs the contract without reading the contract. . . Is this also the case with the author? What if I get one yuan per thousand words? Funny

Reading the comments, many people are talking about whether Shushan or Piaomiao is the first work of Xianxia. Let me express my feelings. Shushan is not a fairy at all, but a martial arts. The first thing is to write about swordsmanship, not martial arts. Secondly, Strange Heroes of Shushan is about humans, not immortals. The last and most important thing is that the words Gongji, Jiedan, Yuanying, Mahayana, and Divine Sense are really original and are not found in Taoism itself. For example, pill formation is probably based on the concept of relics. Taoism itself is relatively vague. Nascent Soul may be the Taoist concept of an innocent baby. Taoism only has four types: sea of ​​consciousness, innocent baby, purple mansion, and golden elixir. Among them, the sea of ​​​​consciousness refers to the space between the two eyes. There is a saying in Tao Zang that the five hearts are turned toward the sky to attract the energy of purple clouds into the sea of ​​​​consciousness. This is to ask people to go to a place with a lot of water vapor when the sun rises in the morning and to expose their heads to the sun in a special way of meditation. Sometimes the "child baby" refers to the Tanzhong point, and sometimes it just refers to a state of mind. There is no perfect explanation of what kind of Taoism Zi Mansion is. Sometimes it is a place where immortals live, and sometimes it is where one's own child is. However, some people in Journey to the West say that it is a hidden Taoist practice method, that is, monkeys, dragons, horses and pigs. There is a saying that goes to the Six Thieves to realize the enlightenment of the Monkey and the Monkey in the Mind. This is related to the Three Corpses Method. All the techniques of cultivating immortals are just for the golden elixir. According to Taoist Luo Tian, ​​the golden elixir should be where the true spirit is, the physical body is the boat, and the true spirit is the only one. They believe that people have three souls, and the heavenly soul is lent to you by heaven, so your destiny is destined from the beginning. Earth Soul is somewhat similar to the concept of reincarnation. The human soul is one's own, that is, the true soul. The double break of life and death is the process of combining the physical body and the true spirit. The result is that the physical body is the true spirit, and it is also a body of natural energy, such as wind, thunder, rain, clouds, seas, and mountains, which are called gods. It is not a personal god of incense and fire, but the only god that exists in its own right. Such a god is integrated with the heaven and earth, and lives the same life as the heaven and earth. According to Western classification, it is a regular god, and immortality is the process of becoming a god. The book Shushan itself has nothing to do with Taoism.

The setting is good, but it's a pity that it was poorly written by the author.

What I wrote in the beginning was pretty good. From the second half onwards, the number of words I wrote was poor at first, but the sentences I wrote were also not fluent. It seemed like it was written by two people in a perfunctory way.

I abandoned it when I saw Chapter 8. Although there were some big and small poisonous points before, I was still looking forward to it. Chapter 8 was too poisonous.

Bubble, write more and upload it. Thousands of words. . . (￢_￢)

If you could travel through time, you would wish you could travel through that world. Can survive. F. Tomb robbing notes. The ghost blows out the lamp. Hell Apartments. Mr. Zombie. E. Zhu Xian. Liaozhai. Strange tales of ancient swords. Shushan War Chronicles. D. Marvel. Doraemon. Pleasant Goat. Calabash baby. C. Journey to the West: Conquering Demons. Fight to break the sky. Douluo Continent. The era of wilderness. B. A Mortal's Story of Immortality. Immortality world. Cover the sky. Perfect world. A. Ask for magic. Immortal rebellion. Tomb of God. After ascension. S. Hong [the beginning of heaven and earth] wasted. Chaos [Three Thousand Demon Gods Period]. Hong [chaos has not yet opened] Meng.

Good subject matter and creativity make the author write poorly

This book is watery, watery, watery, and the author's vision is too small. The author can write a book to verify the reality. As a result, more than 50,000 people are paying attention to the country. I 🥵 also have books such as beliefs or likes, etc. These things will appear. Religion is the first to develop. From the beginning to the end of this book, I feel that there are only tens of thousands of passers-by, and there are only tens of thousands of people in the world. I admire them.

Are there any novels of the same type?

At the beginning, it was said that people in this world don't understand how to cultivate immortals, and they don't know what foundation building and golden elixir are. Then in the fourth picture, during the group chat, your classmates actually knew that spiritual energy is revived and immortal cultivators can overcome tribulations.

It's a bit hard to comment on the plot of a book written in 2017. In 2022, there was this kind of plot that inexplicably denounces the protagonist.

It seemed okay from the beginning, but the female student turned out to be a little bit toxic. How can a 15-year-old girl be so scheming? Is she pestering someone she thinks is strong? Do her parents trust her to go to another place with another man? Then from the martial arts competition, I read the author's explanation in a single chapter about the pressure to publish an outline, etc. I don't understand what happened. I don't know if the author's mentality has collapsed. Later, it becomes very vulgar and tacky.

If the cultivation part of the novel is removed, I can still read it even though the story is cliche. The cultivation part is too outrageous. According to Western legend, a mage is equal to innateness. The protagonist obviously has a golden finger to turn faith into strength, but with millions of people's faith and cultivation, he can't break through innateness. In the setting, Xiantian has not yet begun to cultivate immortality, and there are orthodox Jindan, Nascent Soul, and even the prehistoric system. I really can't imagine whether the protagonist of global faith can reach the realm of Yuanying in the future. On the other hand, the secret realm is coming like crazy. Although the protagonist can barely solve it, I don't see how the earth can have the confidence to protect itself in the coming of the heavens. This resulted in a series of bugs. It would be much better if the training part was removed, leaving only a clichéd story full of pretentiousness and slaps in the face.

The upper limit of the protagonist's world strength was raised too hastily, and not all the family members in the country were dead. Why should we only rely on the male protagonist? The protagonist would post on Weibo and the whole country would be watching. Outrageous😆