Immortal Gate Path

It's the body-refining stream again, so it can't be innovated. Tmd there are eight or nine books of body-refining in the ten books of Xian Xia. It's boring as hell.

The plot arranged in Chapter 19 feels a bit stiff. It's just a light chivalrous act and then it's like meddling in other people's business (besides, how accurate are you at reading people? So why don't you look at faces?) It's actually just to arrange pig's feet to be apprentices (how can the heroine appear in such a situation to be an apprentice), so it feels a bit stiff. Besides, is this how cultivators recruit disciples? I feel like his master is too mentally retarded! Looking at the various tests of apprenticeship in other sects, this master values ​​​​chivalry and justice? (This is a job done by martial arts warriors, not cultivators) Please forgive me for talking too much, please get out of here as a sign of respect.

Let's learn from the Legend of Shushan Swordsman!

I always feel that there are hints of Shushan in my writings.

According to Xianxia novels! Without the soul, you are destined to be unable to fly with a sword in the first half of your life.

I want to know where the protagonist's identity as a time-travelling person is reflected 😰 If it is not reflected in the follow-up, it is better not to give up this identity.

A strong scent of fairy sword came to my eyes.

The Twelve Turns of Xuanyuan Gong is the evil spirit of the Twelve Heavenly Gods. It controls water, fire, and space. It is the magical power of the Twelve Ancestral Witches.

Not bad, quite a fairy-like atmosphere, come on

I don't want to read any books where the word "Taoist couple" is understood to mean the role of wife.

To be honest, this book is much better than the previous one. It has been improved by more than one level. Except that I still can't see that the protagonist, as a time traveler, embodies the way of thinking of those modern people.

Why is the book review section deserted as soon as the book is put on the shelves?

With such poor results, hasn't the author discovered the problem?

The traces of Shushan are too heavy, so I abandoned them

No wonder the grades are so bad! The protagonist can't protect himself and still meddles in other people's affairs

It feels a bit hasty for the protagonist to be directly accepted as a disciple. The protagonist goes from having nothing to slowly embarking on a series of adventures in search of skills, resources and understanding of the world. It is a very interesting process in itself. The most popular mortal stream in recent years basically follows this routine. From the protagonist's inexperience to the first glimpse of the door, I can write at least a hundred photos. If I can do it, it can be hundreds of photos. Through this process, the world in the author's imagination is slowly revealed. Although the routine is very old, it works. You have become a master for no reason, and you don't have to worry about the starting skills and resources. The most interesting thing about a fairy tale novel was just thrown away by you. What do you plan to write next? The confrontation between good and evil or the love between children, should we follow the path of traditional immortals like Zhu Xian? This kind of approach is a classic but it has long been discontinued. Look through the fairy tale novels that have become popular in the past two years, which one has this approach? Although the golden belt of murder and arson is not so positive, it cannot be liked by readers.

In fact, the main character So why didn't he choose the one who wasn't easily obsessed? Jiutian Xuanqing or something.