The Witcher

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It is so difficult to advance, how do other wizards advance? The protagonist has a richer background than the others. He drank dozens of bottles before he was promoted. He is poisonous, right?

Why is there no wizarding novel about doing experiments well without getting into trouble or causing trouble?

There won't be any silly situations about picking up girls, right?

When I read this book, I felt like I was reading an outline.

It makes sense not to try easily when it is difficult to get even one evolution source in the early stage. Later, there will be hundreds of evolution sources, but I still ignore it. It is really a fool's errand. Or you just don't want the attribute of wisdom at all

This dialogue is also drunk. It feels similar to those dialogues about chuunibyou.

Can the protagonist's name be changed? It looks distorted no matter how I look at it.

The plot transition was very abrupt from the beginning. The plot of the protagonist traveling to another world was transitioned in less than half a chapter. In the second chapter, he studied with a scholar for a day and was canonized as a noble by the scholar. Is this old scholar going to die tomorrow or something? He is so anxious? First of all, how can the old scholar be sure that the protagonist has not learned this knowledge in advance and is deliberately trying to get close to the old scholar? And how can the scholar know that the protagonist really loves these knowledge and does not just regard knowledge as a stepping stone for himself? After all, the protagonist does not come to study until he is sixteen years old. All these factors determine that the veteran scholar would normally teach the protagonist for a period of time before making this decision. Therefore, the author was so hasty in writing this book that the plot was unreasonable and the character's behavior was unreasonable. For example, the matter of being canonized as a noble by a scholar could have been written after the protagonist had been taught by the scholar for a period of time. This situation would have been much more reasonable. For another example, when traveling through another world at the beginning, the author can describe the new world in a more magical and specific way, such as the three suns in the sky, how they rise, the same orbit or different orbits, who rises first or later, and what kind of geographical scenery the protagonist's territory is like. These can be described. How dry is the author's writing in these chapters now!

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This is right, the supporting actor should get a free lunch

It feels pitiful. The optical brain is not integrated into the protagonist's soul. In the world of gods and demons, this is the rhythm in which will is born and evolves into life.

120,000 Stabs add 0.02 Strength. How much strength can you add to 120,000 push-ups?

Why doesn't the pig's trotters level up the meditation method? It only costs 30 from level 1 to level 2. The points of the pig's trotters are more than enough. How can the main meditation level upgrading be more effective than the basic mental exercise method?

What are you doing with so many BBs? I'll kill these three losers in the next chapter.

I feel that the protagonist's attributes are too complicated. There are three types originally, and an extra thunder attribute is added.

I saw a few new books recommended (text recommendations) on the fantasy page, so I clicked in to take a look at them with a curious mind. I thought that although it was an inconspicuous recommendation, with an insignificant title and an insignificant introduction, it was recommended after all, so there should be something interesting no matter what. The result is a bit boring. I don't think the author is bad, because the author's writing skills can basically tell the story clearly and clearly. But the plot at the beginning had no ups and downs, and it was very bland with more than 20,000 words... I was put off by this too bland opening. Perhaps, this is a potential author. But this opening chapter is really... Uninspiring. [The following comments involve the content of the main text (Chapter 1~10). Readers who enter the comment area before reading the text (if any) should read the main text themselves first]