The Demon King's Department Store

Why do I feel that the main character I watched is so mentally retarded? How can there be such a devil?

The author shouldn't write the protagonist as a devil, he should write it as a sufferer. Even normal people would be angry even if Louise scolded her so much, not to mention having been a devil for so long. If you hadn't written it and still had a little bit of a temper, it would really be no different from the slaves seen on TV (temper)

Hmm, tomorrow's first update will probably be a little later 😅 for writer's backend maintenance, and I probably won't be able to get up in the morning... I have no choice but to say something here. By the way, the Familiar of Zero arc is coming to an end, and the protagonist will be out of the way in a few days.

When it comes to writing a novel, I guess the author didn't write it seriously. The first chapter is exactly the same as the mess I wrote in the second year of junior high school! You need money for writing like this! Who would spend money to buy a novel like this?

I feel like the male protagonist is so stupid. The plot of the first Zero: Familiar is similar to the anime, with no changes.

So poisonous! He doesn't look like a devil at all!

So what... I saw this book elsewhere... I read a few pictures and found out it was a pirated copy, so I came back. It's quite good 😁😁😁

The protagonist is set to be an otaku, right? Could it be that the protagonist is an otaku who has never watched anime?

Come on, author, this type of writing would be better if it were more relaxed and enjoyable! I will explore slowly and hope that my writing will get better and better.

Wow! I looked through the book reviews, and it's such a lovely author. I've been following this book for a long time

If the author likes this kind of books, you can check out "Use Infinity as a Standalone", "The Creator System", "The Age of Invasion of Gods", "Wandering in the Second Dimension", "Infinite Works for Heaven", "The Big World of Rubik's Cube", "Invasion Moon", "Ultra-Modern Magician", "Non-Human Gene Integration" and "Omni-directional Fantasy"! My favorite among these books is Infinite as a stand-alone game, because the understanding of power in it is what I think is the best and simplest and most crude, and it coincides with my ideas. Secondly, it is an all-round fantasy. The author's description of pretentiousness made me feel even better! Especially in the battle between the Godslayer World and the King of the Last, the clash between the Noble Phantasm and the Divine Phantasm! Or maybe it's from the Little Garden world (you defeated me, but lost in the final trial of humanity!)

The author feels that you can read "The Goddess Summoning System". It is somewhat similar to your book. It is also written by a new author. At first, I just read the first few chapters and was almost addicted to abandon the book. But after reading it, I felt that the more I wrote, the better. Although it is not very popular now, it should be a reference. I have read more than 20 chapters of your book and I am still reading it. The special points are nothing special. It just doesn't feel particularly refreshing after reading it. I will read it first and then give some suggestions 😁 Come on, don't give up, write more, your writing will always get better and better.

I went and finally changed it...

When was the status changed? I never noticed it.

In fact, I think it would have been better if the author had focused on the Demon King's Department Store when writing it (˙-˙) and it would have been similar to Invincible.

I came in after seeing the department store... The result

I changed my ID to look familiar.

If you have any questions about it, please tell me. If I have ulterior motives, I will explain it. If it is really poisonous, I will correct it. Thank you for your support! 😌

As expected, Qidian's fan fiction is just like this, I don't like it

Dear readers Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel, Xiaoyao Xiaoxian. It has been a week since this novel was published. From the beginning there was not a single click, to now I have a few collections, which is very gratifying for a newbie writer like me. But I understand that as a new writer, I will definitely have shortcomings in content and writing style, which require long-term tempering and training. The quickest way is to listen to other people's opinions, so I hope that if you readers have seen this comment of mine, can you stop and give me a few words of advice, even if it is criticism, I will accept it. Here, I wish all readers the best in everything and a good mood every day! OXiaoyao XiaoxianoYours sincerely😁