Mowu Jishen

After reading the previous chapters, I thought they were well written, so I collected them.

Chapter 6 is extremely detailed. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of effort to write it. This is only the prologue stage. Such a work will probably have unimaginable stamina! It's very worth looking forward to!

Didn't you realize that the author has created more than 70,000 words? Looking back now, the author's layout is meticulous and his technique is smooth - the key points are like the foundation of the magic and martial system in Chapter 6, the layout of the seeds of the divine world, then the inadvertent little white pet, and finally the explosion of the bastard's spirit when he joins the army and becomes a mechanized soldier... Every line of the words has been meticulously carved, and it is coherent and smooth, vaguely like everyone! I hope the author can continue to persevere and create a brilliant example!

The four major forces in charge of mechas, networks, finance and mercenaries... Feel like they dominate the author's entire world? Masked Man, this big boss feels so familiar! But I personally feel that it seems inappropriate for him to be the final boss, because - "The emperor in the shadows is the most powerful, and unpredictable natural disasters are the most shocking"!

The rhythm is well grasped. The "non-repeatable collection" setting of storage space and space rings seems to answer many similar questions in the past - if the storage space items are placed into other similar items, can they be placed infinitely? It is worth thinking about.

Organizing a team has always been a difficulty for unparalleled heroes. In fact, many writers find it difficult to balance the personal hero image of the team with pig feet. The author should pay more attention here.

Well, I think that although physical training is very hard, spiritual training is even more difficult for people to live. It would be better if the spiritual training could be written in more detail. Moreover, spiritual training has fewer restrictions than physical training. Even people who are not originally strong in physical training have a lot of room to display during physical training, which can make the early wonderful output faster.

This book does have loyal readers, it's true! But it seems that this is indeed the first time for the author to write a novel, so some aspects are indeed not mature enough and need to be improved... After all, readers nowadays are very picky.

Chapter 45! It seems so far away from the first day of publishing the book, huh? Isn't it that enemies don't get together? At noon, we met the mysterious blonde beauty. It is said that "the most important turning point in a man's life cannot be separated from a woman, especially a charming woman!" - It seems that Chang Jianfeng's great luck is very close! ( •̀∀•́ )

Chapter 171 "A Time to Kill" vividly depicts the cruelty and intensity of the team's survival battle! I love so much! I feel like the author has a great style! I hereby solemnly recommend it to all readers!

Author, the update is too slow, the update is too slow...

The hypnosis skill is powerful, but it needs to be controlled carefully and used sparingly, otherwise it will not be interesting enough if you rely on this skill to pass the level.

More than 400 chapters from 2017 to now? ? ? ?

I have already written so much, please come on, author, please reply!

Author, you are the god of the beggar party😭