Enlightenment to All Heavens

There is too little description of the protagonist's small world, and there is no way to build, develop or upgrade it. This is the biggest failure...

Do you know why your grades are bad? It's not that you don't ask for votes or collections. There's only one reason. The water doesn't necessarily have to be very watery, just a little bit. It's not cool enough. Why don't you feel happy? The protagonist can create his own martial arts and there are so many martial arts. Is it difficult to separate life and death with one sword? There is still that space. If you catch the Pusqu snake and throw it in, can't you just throw the ginseng and Ganoderma lucidum into it? Throw a bunch of rubbish into it. Jianghu pays attention to pleasure and grudges, but what are you writing about? If you have good skills but don't practice well, and when you fight, you don't fight well. Just ask: "What is the protagonist afraid of?" One person and one sword dare to make the world silent; one person and one horse dare to travel all over the world.

It is recommended that you break through the innateness, and don't use the early, middle or late stages to embarrass you! It's better to follow the original work and make your own substitutions!

The rookie author updates once a day on average... The one I updated after half a month is not as long as my penis. I express my disdain and let you enjoy it... If you don't update it soon, I'll arrest you, lock you up in the basement of my house, watch you update with a whip, give you a dumpling in the next chapter, and only give you dumpling soup if you don't update it.

To be honest, I really think using a sword is a cheat. Sharp swords, soft swords, heavy swords, wooden swords, no swords, etc. I personally think this is used to distinguish thieves from trash. Two people with the same cultivation level use swords and the like. One has no sword in his hand and the other has a peerless sword. Who will win the fight? Is it obvious? The one with the most suitable sword is the best. I really can't stand saying this.

This world is a bit long to write about

Author, can you change the part about Swordsman? Yu Zhengyi really can't stand it and plagiarizes it!

Damn it! A martial arts of the same level as Hunyuan Gong can't beat a random person from Songshan, ugh! Yue Buqun really wanted to say that I casually created 20 to 100 sets of very powerful martial arts.

Emmm, has the author entered the palace?

The protagonist acts decisively. I like the character of the protagonist very much. Come on.

The novel is poisonous and has no logic at all

Everyone in the harem expressed this book. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good

The correct way to use Golden Finger is to recognize all sentient beings to perform martial arts for you. The author really has limitations as great as his heart.

How many decades would it take to create an internal skill similar to this sect? There must be something wrong with your brain! It's like if you don't eat one washed peach, you have to spend an hour to wash another one. After decades of seclusion, you still look like crap. You have already created your own internal skills and you go around looking for other martial arts to learn! Goldfinger is useless...

Legend of the Emperor, Mysterious Weapons, and other Hong Kong comics are also good.

🐷The giant TM looks great!

A eunuch?

The author is home for the Chinese New Year and will not update any more.

The author has withdrawn, so you don't have to wait any longer.

Why don't your Panlong fans write anymore?

After reading a few chapters, I talked about how I felt that Pig's Foot was nearly 30 years old. After that, Pig's Foot's IQ is completely beyond the idea of ​​an adult. Modern Traditional Chinese and Ancient Traditional Chinese have the same meaning. Renmei Chaofeng can train the Nine Yin Divine Claw into the Nine Yin White Bone Claw. Besides, Pig's Foot can create its own internal strength. You don't know any internal strength. You tell me that you have to create your own. At least you have to watch enough of Swordsman World to understand the principle of this thing! A person who has been practicing martial arts for many years is unwilling to practice basic internal skills. The reason is that he wants to pretend to be a towering building rising from the ground during the plot. He does not know how to give you this Dugu Nine Swords. Do you understand? , This arrangement is to prepare you to embark on the path of spiritual cultivation. Isn't this good enough even if your character starts off? The most lacking thing in cultivating is time, and the most indispensable thing is time. Lay a solid military base organization or control a powerful force to make arrangements in advance and take advantage of the familiar plot to control this proud world. Otherwise, you will become the best in the world. And if you become a behind-the-scenes boss, the familiar plot will be your toy. The advantage is that the author's storytelling skills are pretty good. The above are purely personal opinions and welcome to discuss.

Not bad

I want to conquer Dongfang Bubai, bye bye

It's a bit embarrassing to watch the relationship between Qiang and Dongfang Bubai, but the creativity is good. I'll wait until the author finishes writing the Dongfang Bubai section.

Don't write about the harem, just guide it.

It's poisonous. I will never be a Shennong again.

When I saw a name as domineering as Jade Emperor Fist, I suddenly lost interest in reading it.

I can't stand it any more, so I'll stop talking nonsense! The author has no sense of time from the beginning to now! Linghu Chong in Swordsman is already in his 20s when he appears. Linghu Chong is several years older than Yue Lingshan, and Pig's Knuckle is several years older than Linghu Chong, so the age difference between Pig's Knuckle and Yue Lingshan is at least ten years! The pig's trotters are around 30 according to their age! Dongfang joined the Sun-Moon God Sect at the age of 11, and became the leader of the Sun-Moon God Sect for more than 20 years at most. When Linghu Chong was in his teens, Ren Woxing was imprisoned! Looking at it this way, Dongfang knew Pigfoot for more than 40 years, and stayed in Xiaoao for almost ten years. Even if he went to Nading and it was the same as the outside world, he was already in his 50s and almost 60 when Mingjiao came out, but Pigfoot has become younger, one is almost 60 and the other is in his early 20s. According to people's thinking at the time, wouldn't Dongfang commit suicide? ? ? ? ? Time in Yitian is even more chaotic and there is no sense of time at all! That is to say, follow the main line of the original work, and ignore the time... Many of the things you wrote happened earlier than the original work, how come they still collide? Can the pig's feet catch up?

Can the author write about Gu Long? I'm so tired of watching Jin Yong's

Author, do you only update once a day?