Bingzhou Li Yi

When I first got into the game, I discovered a problem: in the first chapter, it was said that the protagonist's mother, Yan Yun, died in childbirth, but she was resurrected in the third chapter. What the hell is this? !

To be honest, since Zhang Ning is the main character, you can mention that she and Liu Yan got together in the later stage. There is no need to write a chapter about this process. It is not to look at her growth process. Even if you write it, many people will probably forget it later. It is not as simple as mentioning it when needed. They all come to see the protagonist's growth experience😄

1: Delete all Zhang Ning's scenes 2: Delete all Xiaobai's scenes 3: Delete the scenes between Qiao Xuan and Erqiao. Erqiao's life experience has also been changed, and she is no longer Qiao Xuan's granddaughter. 4: Increase the plot of party struggle. Is the reason why the late Han Dynasty turned into troubled times simply because of the eunuchs' monopoly? Obviously impossible. 5: Enrich each character so that they are as non-facial as possible. 6: Add some supporting roles and plots, reduce or delete some supporting roles or plots...

The author strives for death because of his strength. The chapter about Zhang Ning being drunk is disgusting to many people. At least a group of people will be removed and some people will be driven to piracy.

Is the author too serious and responsible? After writing so much, he still needs to revise it? This is one of the rare weird things in online articles, I admire it.

Having read the last book, I admire the author's great perseverance. It is not easy to revise a book seven or eight times. Let me share my understanding of why there is no big fire. 1. Thoughts, it's really a drama. For example, those words that ask readers back make me feel a little uncomfortable every time I read them For example, those who make fun of the God of Harmony are unwilling to give up, and the jokes that have nothing to do with the plot are not very cute 2. The paragraphs should not be too long. Nowadays, the paragraphs are basically one sentence or two sentences. Each chapter should not exceed 2,500 words, otherwise you will feel a little tired 3. Subject matter. The previous book was unpopular but the writing was really good (after all, it has been revised seven or eight times). I haven't read this Three Kingdoms yet to comment on it, but the theme of the Three Kingdoms is too vulgar and it's not easy to stand out. 4 characters. The protagonist in the previous book had no brains and a weak sense of empathy. It lacks ambition (of course the friendship with Nobunaga is also a highlight) and lacks motivation to move forward. The characters are too invincible and not exciting. If it is an invincible style, it will not be exciting enough. It's not embarrassing but it's a bit uncomfortable The supporting characters are portrayed very brightly. When Ryuuki Saito died, I got goosebumps all over my body. For an old bookworm, I haven't felt this kind of excitement for a long time. In the later period, I felt weak, especially after Oda Nobunaga changed his name to Lu Xin, he was portrayed like a minion, without any domineering power. He was the Demon King of the Sixth Heaven! 5 heroines. The author naturally has his own judgment, but for now let's forget about the stallion. Just fight and kill, it's good to combine vertically and horizontally, don't drive randomly (I really don't understand why there are many paragraphs in the original book that have not been harmonized, hehe) 6, and what are the Yamata no Orochi and Taotie? Let's make it clear😱Whether it's martial arts or history, it's too ambiguous 7, Golden Finger. There is no pleasure of improvement, and the impact is a little bit better when it reaches the peak all at once Summary. This is the first time I have written a long review to someone, and I just feel that it is really a pity for the author and that it could be better. Come on! By the way, the author really has no talent for naming. Next time I have decided on the subject of my new book, would you like me to help me come up with a name?(•ོ̀ᴗ•ོ́)و

Brother Eunuch, I have changed my mobile phone, and your name no longer has the default spelling 😁 Brother, you might as well finish this book and start a new book, and continue writing about the Meiji Restoration after the Warring States Period 😁

😓 Can you give me some thoughts?

My child was not born when you started changing it, and now he has to register for kindergarten. . .

After reading several versions, the author really cares about what readers think. Author: 1-year-old posing with a stick Reader: Too fake, strongly opposed The author explained it, and then changed it to 2-year-old posing with a stick Reader: Untrue, strongly opposed The author rewrote the beginning in a rage, the mother who had a difficult childbirth survived, and started practicing martial arts and wielding a gun at the age of 3 Reader: gave up, no longer loved it Author: Forget it, I won't write it anymore

I haven't read it yet, please revise it quickly and subscribe if you have money during the New Year! You must first be logical and amplify appropriately! Nowadays, there are only two or three people who write good history, and they all turn to fantasy. I have only seen two or three people in Qidian who played to the best of their abilities! If it doesn't look good, criticize it! Come on!

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The plot is too boring, and the more I write it, the more boring it becomes. The first part is actually okay, but the second part is almost unbearable. . . .

I have long said that this book of yours will definitely collapse. There are so many bugs at the beginning, but you actually have so many words in Bingzhou. Readers are not fools and will not give you a chance to cheat on the word count... Revise it and speed up the pace. If you can unify the Three Kingdoms as soon as possible and then write about going to the Western Regions, then you can become a god. Come on, author

After a while, I wanted to take a look at the progress of the revision of this book, but I had no choice but to find a group organization. Although I know that the author will not adjust the main plot line so quickly from chapter 700 to 800, I still hope that the author can have time to share the recent revision progress and the plot revision. Trends (Zhang Ning has revealed that the plot will be deleted, is this person no longer there after deletion, or what happened?), If there are any new ideas, please announce them, let us know or discuss them, so that readers who are watching or just waiting for the revision will know that the author is working very hard to polish the writing. A little suggestion, I hope the author can see it!

It's okay to be short of books. I miss this book and am going to give it a second glance. After reading the reviews, I also want to say a few words. First of all, my feelings about the book. To be honest, when I started reading this book, I was attracted. I basically have two hobbies in reading the book of the Three Kingdoms, recruiting generals, recruiting counselors, and recruiting girls, watching the protagonists rise to prominence, and watching how modern ideas are used to change ancient life. Therefore, I was full of joy when the author recruited girls and military generals in the early stage. Diao Chan, Cai Yan, and Xiao Qiao are my brother's favorite; the one I can't stand the most is collecting. For the plot of Da Qiao sending Xiao Qiao, and Lu Bu sending Diao Chan, either we should create an original heroine; it would be deviant to write about the Three Kingdoms and not accept girls from the Three Kingdoms. As a man, in an era when you can have a harem, don't tell me that I am a modern person. As for tiger children, even now, you are allowed to hump a bunch of cabbages, and it is not illegal to do so. Can you hold it in as a man? It's not that he wants a stallion, but because it's a man's instinct to like beautiful women. Is it possible that in ancient times, you still have to engage in basic clothing and pure knots to have true love? You can pretend to be pure. Then, there is nothing wrong with military commanders, and they accept them when they are destined. Time travel is from a God's perspective. It is normal for famous military commanders to accept them. I like the way the author handles it; the same goes for counselors. Again, those who travel through time have a God's perspective, but whether it can succeed or not still depends on the character of the person involved. Just let it happen. I want to give a thumbs up here. At least, the substitution of women, generals, counselors, and the advanced ideas and culture of today's society is very reasonable; Then the second point came, Zhang Ning is a witch, which led the author astray. I skipped all the chapters with Zhang Ning. To be honest, the rest were well written, but the fictional Zhang Ning was written as another protagonist, and Ma Chao, whom I loved, was written as an SB. There was a period of time when I was YY. Ma Chao killed Ma Teng due to family hatred, and then took possession of Zhang Ning. As a result, the author asked me to read a book, "Two Mothers Really Love"; I'm sorry, I'm digressing. . . Also, the author was not influenced by King Xi, and he wrote Yuan Xi so brilliantly. Although the author also said that the time when he showed his power was because he happened to meet him, well, regardless of whether he is great in history, it is better not to stand out as the third fake. In the troubled times of the Three Kingdoms, when the princes are fighting for hegemony, the protagonist is the king. Let me talk about a few final points. If you want to change it, just change Zhang Ning's plot. Others like the protagonist, the women who have been accepted, and other princes can be unnecessary; the roles of Ma Teng and Ma Chao should also be adjusted, the writing is too brainless; the other is based on the butterfly effect caused by the history and the protagonist's intrusion, how to develop a wonderful story is the most important; Finally, please update the author as soon as possible, I feel uncomfortable holding it back, I want to see the protagonist accept a woman. We have almost collected military commanders and counselors. In the later stage, it will be good to destroy the princes and recruit surrendered generals. How about developing technology and getting some fire systems and divine machine palaces. Knowing the proportion of gunpowder, it is not difficult to do this. Anyway, if you write that during the New Year or when the protagonist gets married, you will set off firecrackers. Haha, are they firecrackers? Regarding accepting female protagonists, if you don't accept it, come and complain. Don't men like women? Gays still pretend to be innocent and flash it to me. Finally, the last, last, last, the author's father, please resume updating soon! ! ! ! ! 66666666666666666666

Okay, what a long title, just to attract people to use it, and then ask them to modify it quickly and restore it quickly! You have to have pressure, but also have motivation. If it really doesn't work, just send out the changes first and start the calculation again~~ Well, although I am just a small book fan and only voted for a few monthly votes, it is shameful that I have not subscribed to them all. [It's all Zhang Ning's fault. In fact, I wanted to subscribe to them all, but then the author stopped updating when I wanted to subscribe to them all...] Waiting for the update to resume, by the way, I owe the author a full subscription and a small reward of 10,000 yuan, so remember it first! Come on! Just got it~

How should I put it? Yuan Xi is written to be on the same level as Pig's Knuckle. In addition to force, he can defeat Tian Feng. Not to mention Tian Feng himself has doubts. I also have doubts. Pig's Knuckle's development strategy has always been step by step. Since Tian Feng has doubts and he wants to surrender, then the question is, should Zhang Yan surrender in the way he wants, or should he make a safer way by himself.

Well, if you don't put some pressure on yourself, the changes will be too slow 😓

The author is really serious, all I can say is, keep going!

Just wait for the author to return. When you come back, four recommended tickets per day and five chapter tickets per month will be provided immediately. I hope it will be soon. There are not many Three Kingdoms novels that suit my taste.

I discovered this book very early, and then I discovered the story of the Three Kingdoms after joining Li Yi in the state! I don't know who I like among the Three Kingdoms characters 😆

Confucius said that I am not a person who is born with knowledge. Is there a person who was born with knowledge at that time? He has seen it but he is not one.

Let's take a look at it first, and let me know if you have any ideas. Sigh... I decided to delete Xiaobai completely. I finally changed it to more than 100 chapters, and had to rewrite many of them. Have no choice

It feels very strange. It is almost invincible in the early stage and develops very slowly in the later stage. However, when reading a novel, you have to follow the author. Forget it about Zhang Ning. It is a foreshadowing. But what the hell is Yuan Xi? It feels like beating Lu Bu and Tian Feng. He is like the god of the Three Kingdoms. He knows things like a god and knows that Lu Bu will come to recruit Zhang Yan. Without this prerequisite, there is no point in the later. He digs holes and presses step by step. He is simply invincible. And even if Yuan Shao is capable, he won't be able to give him a hundred thousand troops, not to mention that he is just starting out and has everything under control. This guy will become a god as long as he doesn't die.