Immortal and Infinite

The Demonic Eye of Direct Death + Two Ritual = No solution, because the two rituals are the root and understand most things. I can only say sorry for things I don't understand.

The theme is a bit unclear, and the first few chapters are crucial. The information given in the first chapter is that the protagonist's soul will be reborn six hours ago before entering the main god's space after death, but this means that when the scene is changed to the next save point, it suddenly appears at the previous save point, and it seems to mean that the soul after death enters the main god's space, and at the same time, the dead person will be reborn. The conflict overlaps. There is no doubt about this and I believe that the author will give the answer next. However, the plot goes on by itself inexplicably. There is no explanation at all about becoming the captain and the team member. There is not even a general world view of the character of the conflicting character. It feels completely inexplicable. I don't feel any cause and effect. I just write out the world in the author's mind according to the author's ideas, regardless of whether the reader can keep up with the rhythm. . .

Bloody Blood 1: A fat man appears out of nowhere and calls the protagonist the boss. [Other people's protagonists have to show off their bastard spirit to get a younger brother to join them] Dog Blood 2: How did the fat man know that the protagonist had skills? [When the protagonist said to himself that he had skills, the fat man hadn't come over yet] Bloody Blood 3: Where did the three teammates come from when the protagonist first entered the main god space? Dog Blood 4: It is not clear who Li Sha is who is entangled by Black Fire. First impressions are important, and so is reading novels! If there is no bright spot at the beginning, it fails to capture the reader's heart, and there are various bugs in the article, most readers will abandon the book instead of continuing to read.

I couldn't stand the first chapter, it was written in a mess, with all kinds of unclear things

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