I Have a Devil Card

I will read them one by one. As long as you don't greet other people's parents casually, they will basically not be blocked. 😁

I don't know how many times I have opened a new book. I have been writing since I was in high school. Until now, I have been writing and writing without getting any grades. I have dreamed about it many times at midnight, feeling melancholy in my heart. No one can understand this sour feeling. This year has also been very unsatisfactory. To put it simply, even a mouthful of cold water makes my teeth clenched. 😭 Sometimes I really want to look up to the sky and scream, yelling at God for cheating me. Okay, I won't say much more, I just want to say one sentence, please readers, please bear with me and support the new book, whether it is collection, recommendation, or reward 🙏. Please, fellow veterans, 😟.

I have read the previous chapters and would like to make some comments: 1. The protagonist is a little too careless. Others can see the Sharingan when it is used. If you get the Sharingan, use it in public. Aren't you afraid of being caught and sliced? And once in the woods and once in the classroom, I didn't realize the importance of confidentiality at all. You must know that the protagonist is still a scumbag with nothing but Sharingan. Normal people have a sense of self-preservation. The protagonist has none at all. After all, it's about your own safety. 2. The protagonist's mentality change is too sudden. After getting the devil card, he becomes extremely decisive immediately. He is too decisive. Even if he writes a sentence in front of him to make up his mind, there is no foreshadowing. In Chapter 3.13, Using one's lifespan to exchange for things from a demon card was too casual, and it didn't feel like using one's own life to buy something. It doesn't seem like he's taking his own life. Although it's not a long day, it doesn't mean it doesn't matter and shouldn't be taken seriously. It is better to add a little psychological activity to make it more reasonable. 4. I have watched Naruto, and the illusion of Sharingan cannot control people's behavior, at least not the three magatama. It's really a bit of a joke to write a skill that the Sharingan can't do just to pretend to be a b. That's all for the time being. I'm not here to find fault. I just want to make some comments. I hope the author will write better and better.