Entertainment Child Star

Can we always call him Actor Shen, Actor Shen? I was so embarrassed watching it. Tony Leung has won so many Best Actors, whoever meets him is called Best Actor Tony Leung? Jacky Cheung is the God of Singing. Whoever meets him calls him the God of Singing? Even though Andy Lau is called Liu Tianwang, he won't always be called him like that, right? Are you just saying "too much water"?

The writing was a bit without a theme. It took me a long time to write the first variety show, and then I just brushed it off two years later. Seeing how long the foreshadowing was, the excitement was about to break out, and you withered. Then you went to film a TV series, discovered your own problems, and then there was a lot of nonsense. Another time span, until It took a long time after receiving the broadcast, and then someone suddenly said that there are not so many awesome comics in the world, and you have to draw comics again, and talked about a lot of the indissoluble bond between Barabala and comics in the past life. At this point, I felt that I couldn't stand it anymore. I was so determined to be an awesome actor before, and now. . . Also, it's been so many years since there was such a great comic that no one drew. I feel like the author didn't have an outline? Write wherever you think of it? Here in the manga, I feel like I was forced into it! Also, there are always a lot of ideas about the author, and there are a lot of inner conflicts all of a sudden. I feel that the book started to collapse two years after the author wrote it.

I have a small suggestion. It feels very awkward to be so mature at only 4 years old. If you want to make the protagonist more mature, around 6-8 years old, it would be better. The above is just my humble opinion. The book is good, but the protagonist is a bit precocious and scary.

The author is not thoughtful enough, nor is he imaginative enough. A child born into an excellent family, and at the age of nine, Pig's Feet is only a variety show and a TV show! Ordinary people's rebirth would be much more wonderful than this! Isn't it! Who can tell me how you can float after being reborn like this? How? How to realize your heart's wish? In this regard, the author is not enough!

Nothing new, just familiar plots

What I hate the most is being a child in time travel, having no sense of empathy at all.

Ball ball. I really can't look straight anymore. . My brother's dog has this name. . The smallest one. Recently, a cat was picked up at home. . As a result, Qiuqiu was frightened by the cat and fell to death. . . Tragedy

It's Dad, Where Are We Going? The name of the variety show is wrong. Dad's Back was recorded at home.

It feels too watery! ! ! You can write about the plot of a variety show, but don't be so long-winded (only half an episode of a variety show was written in more than ten chapters); you can write about the hardships of being a child star and the hardships of being a star.

Collect names of supporting actors I have difficulty naming names, and more and more characters will appear when I can. I also ask all book friends to help me come up with names. Preferably an actor, as this is the person the protagonist comes into contact with the most.

As for the plot with the most flaws, Ji Xue has changed it. You can check it out. Ji Xue replaced it with an imaginary novel title. In order to prevent readers from being dissuaded, Jixue has deleted the original post discussing that plot. We ask for your understanding.

Tucaolou I specially picked this page for book lovers to express their dissatisfaction. Collections and recommendations have dropped in the past two days. There must be something wrong, but after all, the authorities are obsessed with it, so I ask all book friends to correct me. Although I have opened several books, I have only written tens of thousands of words. I gave up because I felt it was too difficult, so I am still considered a newcomer. I also thought that writing a book incompletely would not improve my writing skills much, so I will keep writing this book as long as I can sign a contract. Anyway, I was chasing the 600 perfect attendance award from the beginning. Note: The signed website short message has been received today. Thank you all book friends for your efforts. Okay, enough gossip. Regarding the writing style of complaining, this basic knowledge can only be improved slowly, please forgive me. For those who complain about the plot, you can't just read the opinions of a few book friends when looking at the opinions of many book friends. If everyone thinks this plot is terrible, wait until the past week, when the basic school will have winter vacation, and we will slowly change it. Finally, Ji Xue would like to thank all the book friends 🙂