One Piece: Demon Epic

Come on, the direction of the book is good, at least it doesn't rely on the system. Live your own uniqueness. Starting from a small character, it resonates with Long Aotian as soon as he appears. Effort

How to put it this way, I like the author of this line of reply to readers, so I support the author's work. Here I have a few suggestions for the author's reference. Since the author is writing about One Piece, he can add his own understanding of pirates. For example, why the Yonko Kaido was caught so many times and couldn't be killed. Everyone thinks that if he eats the second devil fruit, he will die. So why did the navy not eat the second fruit after catching him so many times? Why didn't he throw him into the sea and drown? Does the navy think that the existence of the four emperors is a kind of balance? Or are the Yonko originally created by the navy (brain yy) or the Devil Fruit will not die after eating the second one, but will not absorb the power of the second fruit. The second point is that I hope the author will not change the pirates in a mess. For example, some authors, aliens appeared in One Piece, before the war on top appeared. Whitebeard is written to death, or Ace is written to death. I feel that since it is a fanfic, then it must not be random in some aspects, but follow the original and add some other things. It is just a personal opinion. I very much hope that the author will not be tJ, not write badly, not be unfinished, and leave a good fanfic for pirate fans. (Actually, I haven't read the author's novel yet) 😅

A pretty good pirate fan, keep it up

A new chapter has opened. I feel like the story is about to officially begin? 😍

It's really weird to mix different systems. It's better to just write that the protagonist eats a devil fruit that can control hair and imitate the development method of Food Captive. This is less surprising.

The author should advertise more. It's a good book, but there are too few people.

Well, I've seen Chapter 46, and I feel it's pretty good, but I'd like to ask if I'd like to participate in the plot of One Piece? Because I haven't had much interaction with the plot after seeing Chapter 46, and I don't like the protagonist's behavior. When I kill people at night, I conclude that the evil party is evil just based on the scenes I see, and the killing is just to satisfy my arbitrary justice, and I cry for help. Not only does it have ***, but the protagonist is eaten by food cells and goes in search of food, thus starting a different kind of food prisoner in the world of One Piece. As a reader, it doesn't feel very good. I might as well write about food prisoners. And the Devil Fruit ability users I have seen so far only have a flicker, and there is nothing that feels great. In short, after reading Chapter 46, I already don't want to read it.

The writing is pretty good, but why aren't my grades outstanding? Recommended, please help.