Gangster Arena

This book did poorly for two reasons. First, there are not many explanatory words in the first few chapters, the image of the protagonist is not well established, and the background setting is not clearly stated. Second, the protagonist of the whole book is too confused. He is neither a lazy salty fish nor a hardworking person. If you don't know what you should do, you will try your best to do whatever you encounter. You will not work hard or find ways to be lazy, leaving readers feeling at a loss. The reader does not know what the protagonist wants to do, but feels confused, mediocre and extraordinary. The protagonist's world view and life values ​​are: I don't know anything, so I just imitate the behavior of normal people. You won't be excited when you gain power, you won't be depressed when you lose your power, you won't be vigilant when encountering a dangerous mission world, and you won't work hard to collect treasures when you encounter a safe mission world. Although I can't call it pessimistic and world-weary, it's close to it. I feel that this is because the author himself is relatively confused, which is why the protagonist in his novel has become like this. Author, please find an editor to press and urge you. Third, the author's editor didn't make an effort to recommend this book for some unknown reason. If the editor doesn't recommend your book, dismal results are inevitable. See for yourself why. Your writing style is very good and worthy of being recommended to you by the editor.

Halfway through, I discovered a problem, that is, the protagonist's strength has improved too slowly. By the time I saw it, there were about 150 chapters. The protagonist's abilities were actually Venom and the nano-armor he had just obtained. The trick the author gave to the protagonist seemed powerful. As long as he endured it for a long time, he could become a god, but the actual implementation was too slow, right? This is a web novel, not a physical novel. Modern web novels are all about fast-paced routines. If you don't expect the protagonist to be able to survive in seconds, you can't be such a weakling, right? Anyone can bully him in the arena, please! After all, this is a protagonist. Anyway, in my opinion, protagonists bully newcomers at most, and some are even unable to bully. They have such strength before they have even completed a world. Looking at the protagonist, Venom is unreliable, and the upper limit of nano armor is low. Dragon Soul just looks awesome, and the talents are the same as Dragon Soul. They are background abilities. I don't know how long it will take to show my strength.

Wonderful Night at the Museum There are gods in this world, at least there is an Egyptian pantheon

The protagonist is just a trap. One second he becomes a god, and the next second he changes world and becomes a noob. He doesn't want to make progress and makes trouble everywhere. His survival is entirely due to the protagonist's aura being too strong.

I have a book published by Dakshunaida, which I have treasured for many years.

The author should find a new subject, and the protagonist should stop being a weakling.

At the beginning, I thought it was grass jelly, but after looking at half of the food, it was plain boiled water after 300 yuan, which was bland and tasteless.

After reading dozens of chapters, I can't understand it at all. The protagonist's climb up the ladder is so awesome! ! The protagonist's dragon spirit is awesome! ! ! However, as a reader, I can't see at all what's so great about Shinhwa Naruto, who is just a supporting character showing off to the weakling of the protagonist A few worlds have passed, what is the protagonist's future plan? What about the main plot? Absolutely not, the mission to enter the world is irrelevant The protagonist's ascension to the dragon soul requires a lot of time. The protagonist finally stayed in the movie world for a year and accumulated 0.00001%. Once he returned to the paradise, everything was gone. Each mission started from scratch, but it is not like the main god hunter who can explode in strength. What's the point of this novel?

I don't understand what it means. Does the ability clear after every world ends? If so, why can other people carry the ability? If it doesn't clear, why can't the protagonist know anything, what about the ninjutsu he learned, and what about the Byakugan. Don't understand

What the hell, why do I remember that the elixir is completely dependent on Tianxing, what's the use of grabbing a pill? Is the author stunned?

I bought it and didn't want to read it before I finished reading it┐(─__─)┌Why is it that everyone is dying in the world of swords for no apparent reason? What kind of bullshit is the talent of the violent giant ape? Besides the time limit, are there any world limits? This talent will keep the protagonist in trouble for the rest of his life? You're stuck at the bottom, and you still have to be restricted after you become stronger in cultivation? The setting is really bullshit... The Great Sword World explains that talent limits the strength of Dragon Soul. Not to mention taking a serious look at it, at first glance, it is a bunch of bullshit settings. The remaining chapters you bought are just for feeding the dog.

I think it's OK, but the updates are not strong enough.

This book has too many bugs and is messy. It's really baffling to read! Also, the protagonist has always been a weakling, and various seemingly awesome settings actually limit the development of the protagonist. And the author's settings are very inconsistent. You have to forget the previous ones when reading later, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable. When you see the paid chapters, come here and complain... It's a good setting, and the beginning is also very good. It's a pity that the writing is broken later. If you like it, please support it. I won't spend money to read it anyway haha ​​🤓

Talent is completely useless! The things I learned were messy and completely useless.

How to say it? This book is just one word, messy. I don't know what will happen next, but the first twenty chapters are really messy. I can't understand it without explaining it. The protagonist has almost no sense of existence. He is a bit too useless.

After reading Chapter 20, this book is too confusing and has no outline at all.

I saw Chapter 96. A year later the talent was unlocked again. What's going on with the protagonist's talent? Do we have to start accumulating time from scratch every time we arrive in a world? ? ? Wouldn't it mean that the protagonist will become more and more deceitful later on? The higher the dangerous world, the more advanced and common low-level battles are. I am afraid that the protagonist in the previous world will become a god and return to a mortal in the next world, and then be shot to death by a soldier on the battlefield!

There are too many calculations, and the protagonist is not enterprising. It can be described as waiting to die. In other words, the protagonist's IQ is too low, and this is definitely the author's fault.

It's a weed. If you have time to find a book, you don't need to read this one.

Apart from seeing the protagonist being clearly arranged like a puppet, there is nothing else. Author, at least get the setting right before writing. After reading half of it, there are various setting conflicts. Sometimes it is said that if the task fails, you can exit the world, and sometimes it is said that if the task cannot be completed, you can only stay in that world. Also, every time the protagonist arrives in a new world, all talents will be cleared and restarted. How can it be considered a boss talent? Even if you want to limit the growth of the protagonist, it should be set so that you can reach a certain level of strength only after a certain number of years in a certain world. After changing to another world, all the years will be cleared and restarted, but the strength will not change. For example, if you become a god in the first world for a hundred years, your strength will remain unchanged for a hundred years in the second world, and your strength will continue to accumulate only after 100 years. This is the real talent of a boss!

The talent setting and arena setting are very novel, and the introductions of bosses and other characters give people a feeling of invincibility. Overall, it's not bad, but looking at Gorilla Joe, I can see that what you want to express, the author, makes me feel very confused. The first setting makes the protagonist's talent directly cost money, so this is not an invincible novel. If you want to become a boss, you can only practice and then enter the world. (I didn't jump directly to the finale to find out that the setting directly ate part of it. If this talent only speeds up the passage of time for an individual, it would be a bit outrageous.) The second creative idea is also good, but there are also some poisonous points. All in all, it makes me dizzy.

I've read over a hundred chapters, what's the use of the protagonist's talent?

Ahhhh, update! Update more! Three pictures a day, each with 10,000 words would be enough!

Finished as soon as I found it. . . . .

When will the author release a new book?

There is a small problem, that is, the author said that each world can only produce one arena player, so the author can change the names of the planets in each world instead of calling all the planets Blue Star.

That's it? I can't understand it at all

Although I haven't watched it yet, when I read the introduction, God, Time Planning Bureau, Naruto? . . Did something strange appear?

I didn't quite understand it at first, but later it got better. It's cool and that's it, but it's a bit short.

It seems that recent authors like to write dramatic protagonists