City of Billions of Stars

It's amazing. I didn't know how to use the power of time travel until I read the author's novel. However, the protagonist can find a world as his base. After ruling the world, he can continue to travel through the world, absorb the technology of each world, and continue to climb up. It is recommended that Fist Shinto develop your own body, human embryo gene adjustment technology, adult gene adjustment technology, super-body thinking dimension enhancement, my Superman ex-girlfriend's meteorite transformation technology, one hundred thousand civilization technology in Superman's spaceship, biochemical cloning technology, Red Alert's three major base tanks, mythical meteorite immortality Old Principles, The Mummy's 2 Bibles - Death Bracelet, Dragon Emperor Technique, Shangri-La Spring Water, Secret Spell, Air Magic of Jackie Chan's Adventures, Twelve Talismans, Demon Mage Encyclopedia, Divine Armor, etc., X-Men's x-gene, vampire, werewolf gene, Hulk gene, Inhuman gene, etc. Are countless.

I can't write about the main plane (write about reality, write about China), it feels too uncoordinated and weird.

The protagonist is a two-dimensional plot and the author is telling a three-dimensional story. The story is not vivid and there is basically no interaction. The third-year junior high school students write essays.

I think it's just writing a running account.

Are there any side effects from taking the medicine in Never Ending? Nothing happened. In the first chapter, you can write about pig's feet becoming gods. Waste of time

Rocket-like progress. What is necessary and what is not necessary is a mess. Did you miss it?

This book is barely readable at first, but the rest of it is so confusing that it can poison people to death. I can't stand it anymore.

I read ten pages of this novel in five minutes, and then I couldn't stand it anymore.

The protagonist travels through various time travels and develops various abilities, but how many of them are useful? It has completely become a running list, and the power system is too messy, with no standards at all. I was a little confused when I saw it.

What about Chapter 52? There are still fifty-one words left.

This. . . Have you already entered the palace? There has been no update for over a month. Want a big change? Or what

I don't know if it's suitable or not. I might jump.

Don't go to Deadly Violet to get the compression space bracelet technology for storage? With cash stuffed all over the room, aren't you afraid that the neighbors will see it?

I don't object to pretending, but don't force it. Also, don't pretend to be too cliché. Collect it first.

The plot develops too fast. Slow down the pace a little and pay attention to the details. The emotional series will be less and not very skilled.

Is this upgrade speed really not going to cause bleeding?

City of a Thousand Stars is released, and City of Billions of Stars is released. Well, a billion stars are bigger than a thousand stars.

The author asks for an update. Come on!

Why are there so many one-star reviews in the daily guide? Such comments should not appear here.

There is no limit to time travel, why not go there (My Superman Girlfriend) One of the easiest ways to obtain superhuman abilities

There are relatively few pretense scenes. Author, if you don't return your wealth and honor to your hometown, it's like walking in brocade clothes at night.

In fact, the author, you can use it as a foreshadowing in the early stage. You can find some world layout and so on later. Of course, I haven't read much. I don't know how many hooks you set for the protagonist in the early stage. As long as it is not too unfavorable, it will be stable. It's just a suggestion.

Invincible articles are the most difficult to write. After all, there is only one number one, and you need tens of millions of readers, so it is a test of your writing skills. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗

I'm dizzy. You just figured out how to make reasonable use of the ability to travel through all the worlds, and you went to practice the Sunflower Book?

It's not bad. Although the progress is a bit fast, the author has a good grasp of it and doesn't write too much. If you read it casually, it may look a bit messy, so those readers who complain about messing up should read it carefully and don't just mess around without understanding. The protagonist of this novel has an online IQ, there are fewer bloody plots, and the plot is smooth and not stiff, which is much better than most novels. Of course, there are some unreasonable problems, but they are harmless and do not affect the pleasure of reading. I personally feel that this is a good time-travel novel. The above is purely my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it!

Sure enough, the writing was not very good. I thought it was Dr. Chen again.

Sure enough, there is only one Dr. Chen...

Author, are you a pineapple?

I was very happy when I saw the strong breeding armor. I really like the biological armor inside. It's a pity that the author, that bastard, doesn't update anymore.

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