Arcanist of Azeroth

This time travel is too poisonous. Just go back in time. God was blown to Earth by the Well of Eternity, and then he took the protagonist back to Azeroth. I'm really disgusted by this.

I originally used another account, but I wasn't allowed to post comments and I changed it to another one. It's not like I haven't read it. Read 200 chapters. There is really something I want to complain about and it would be hard not to do so. 1. The early upgrade is too fast, very bland, and lacks an epic feel. The protagonist upgrades after learning and reaching 100% experience value. Although there is some battle insights and upgrades in the middle, the pattern is too small. I understand that the author wanted to level up quickly so that it would be useful in later campaigns, but the leveling up was too simple, too thin, and not very grand. I feel that the nature of the Immortal Elf can be brought into play, so I will move the time forward 300 years, write some stories about my travels (it was said that I traveled to Dalaran at the beginning), write some stories with famous people in Warcraft, and then continue to upgrade after the Black Gate to play a role when the Second Idiot appears. 2. The character description is not rich enough The male protagonist gave me a feeling of greatness and righteousness. He is not the Virgin Mary, but he feels that he is far from the tranquility of ordinary time travellers. He is too indifferent to fame and fortune. Although there is the pressure of fighting, he may easily receive fame and fortune. Only by satisfying his own selfish desires can the character be full. It lacks its own characteristics. For example, would it be better to give the male protagonist a lustful attribute and insert some humor into the story? There are too few descriptions of other characters such as the heroine, Hill, and Jaina, and there is also very little ink about Lothar Orgrim, a famous figure in the history of Warcraft. The whole world was not full, it felt too fake, and I couldn't put much emotion into it. Even when Hill died, I didn't react. I was even a little confused. How could a very popular person in World of Warcraft be written off to death? There is obviously a possibility of salvation, but he is forced to die to advance the plot. Even if you are a little more willful, Hill must be in the city. A little willfulness will increase the fullness of the character, as if a Warcraft fan has truly traveled to the past, making it more real. 3. The male protagonist seems to be a time traveler and is familiar with the history of Azeroth, but your knowledge of history does not play a big role. Since I am familiar with the history of Azeroth, there are many things that can be taken advantage of, and many things can have better solutions. For example, when the two fools invaded, you can definitely call Kaizi back. The two legends brought the prince (set as a pseudo-legend) and a lot of councilors to fight against the two fools against the Sun Well. In order to solve the crisis, the Sun King forcibly absorbed the power of the sun well, and the two fools fought back. In the end, the old man died with all his strength. Most of the council members lost. The upper elf strength has changed, but also retained its vitality, making the battle a bit tragic and the characters fuller. There is no need to respect history too much. Some changes are perfectly fine. You cannot be afraid of changing the plot and forcefully design some unreasonable places. 4. The setting of the male protagonist is vague. The male protagonist may have a high IQ, but some things are not the optimal solution, and there are even many loopholes. Call it silly, he is also quite smart, and he knows what the problems of elf society are. If you want to write about a hot-blooded idiot, don't think so much, just do it. Let's write a male protagonist with high IQ. The plot must be able to withstand scrutiny and there should be no obvious loopholes. Written for half an hour, I hope the author can read it

Now that I see the natural disasters and plagues starting, I feel inspired. For the time being, the author's writing is commendable, the plot arrangement is quite good, and the rhythm is slightly inferior, but with the addition of Warcraft fans and blood elf fans, it is considered good. In terms of strength level, this book is more consistent with the plot among many Warcraft fans. It requires levels but is not too rigid in absolute levels. It makes the world view more reasonable, which is a good highlight. But there is a poisonous point in this book that cannot be ignored, that is, there are too many private goods. I believe everyone who has read the book can feel it. It's not that you can't have private goods, but you have to have a certain degree of tolerance, because many people look at it for World of Warcraft instead of real politics. Furthermore, there are too many arbitrary elements in the author's private works, and he often substitutes concepts. His understanding of the actual political and economic conditions of other countries is very one-sided, and he is slightly arrogant and ignorant. Other than that, there are no major shortcomings. Therefore, readers who are serious about this aspect should think about it before entering the trap, so as not to affect their mood. As for book lovers who don't care about this, congratulations on finding a good Warcraft fanfic.

I read Chapter 4 and 5, and it doesn't look like the wow I know, so I quit.

The Lich King Arthas has been changed by you.

I think Onyxia can be added as the heroine

The details of this book are great. You can see the author's intentions when writing. There is nothing to say about the plot. It respects the original version and has its own innovation. It can be said to be very good! I have added the author as a friend in private and often chat with him. The author is a very good person. He often listens to our opinions when writing books. He really regards writing books as a hobby. He often spends time looking for information in the game. He himself has a very high level in the world of Warcraft. Although the update speed is not as fast as those of the great masters, it is understandable. One of the authors is busy with work and often stays up very late writing books. Secondly, the author does not want to sacrifice quality for the sake of progress. He hopes that we can read it comfortably, so I hope everyone will understand if the update is not very fast. After all, the author deserves our praise for taking time off from work to write such an excellent work for us. The author is very able to express insightful views on many issues. I also hope that the author will write better and better books and bring us more excellent works!

The Titans couldn't defeat the ancient gods. The most powerful ancient god, Y'Shaarj, was crushed to death by Aman'Thul.

A genius five-ring mage The middle-level power of the high elf according to the author In the first battle, I only fired one fire blast and one pyroblast (no monsters were killed). When I was about to launch the second pyroblast, I actually had no mana... I wore the skin of WOW and borrowed DND's. Shadow, all kinds of Long Aotian foreshadowing in the early stage, ended up with this performance after the first battle This way of writing reminded me of another strange blood elf novel. The protagonist did not move soy sauce throughout the opening and watched his teammates explain spells. However, at the end, the author said "the protagonist has run out of magic"

World of Warcraft is no different. We still need equipment, we still have the Bronze Beard Gate, and we still like the space bar. Whether we play or not, wow is there. My playing Wow is not actually superior, but just a blessing for my choice. I know a group leader who bought a total of 6000RMB cards for the first 10 people in the guild. I asked him why, and he said that if he bought the cards, they would be embarrassed to AFK I know a female player, a high-end CJQ, who insists on logging off the Nagrand floating island every day. She said that when she was leveling there, she deliberately slowed down the speed. I have seen a conductor. When he was in front of the professor at 11 o'clock in the middle of the night, he said let's take a rest. Someone asked why, and he said: "You can't remember? At this time yesterday, MT's children were going to bed." I heard I met a miner. One week before AFK, he mined for 8 hours a day, and finally put it in the guild bank in a cool way: "I'm so tired, you guys are forging projects, please find someone else in the future." After that, he never came online again, and the guild bank had an extra 30,000 gold that day. I have seen an R| who forcibly kicked a nurse at 2 o'clock in the afternoon. When we asked her why, she said: "The nurse is a student and he has to go to class at 2:30." There is also a thief who works online for 6 hours a day after getting the double sword. I only know that his mastermind is a friend who helped him reach 60,000. I have seen a hunter who gave up the orange bow. Man, he was ROLLing with another hunter that day, but the other hunter got offline. He waited for 5 minutes, and he called that hunter 8 times, but he never picked up the orange bow. Then he also got offline, and everyone got offline. I also saw a noob who had no one to accompany him on the task of Nu Yan. He just said something in general, I saw ten. Many people said: Group me. When my level 70 fs was red, a trumpet said that you should pick up the boss's equipment and repair it. Thank you. I took him to farm all night. We served for 4 days, and the Alliance and the Horde slaughtered each other 8 times. Stranglethorn Valley continued all year round, but we still served. After killing the Nian Beast, they would only leave each other. I saw a novice who was watching the sea in Burial Shadow Village. He was stuck on a task for two days and needed a high-end dummy. When I passed by, he was mining. I asked him why. He said that he wanted to complete the task for the project. I dismounted and made a dummy, and then wanted to hear him say thank you. Not only did he say that when I left, I had 16 pieces of wool and 2 sets of iron ore in my bag. , 3 Groups of 8 silks, and a bottle of special effect mana potion. As a thief, I kept the mana potion and never threw it away. Perhaps it was a coincidence that a Druid said to me that I sold 3 cards. I just said in silence on the world channel that this Druid is a newbie, so don't let him be discouraged. One person messaged me, "Sorry, I didn't know that I was a newbie. "Jingu gave it to him." The other person didn't make any move, I would rather believe that he was cheating. Someone was bringing SL to brush and said black flag, but the result was a black heart. The QS gave it to himself. DK of the same team was speechless. The mage asked him, don't you want the flag? I'll buy it for DK, and I'll give you the store price. The knight didn't answer, just asked if you want me to bring it. After saying this, The four trumpets all agreed and quit the team. Warcraft is no different. We need the same equipment, have the same bronze beard gate, and like the space bar. Whether we play or not, wow is there. I am not superior in playing Wow. It is just a blessing for my choice. Warcraft also has many differences. We need to let go of the mindset we have always developed to observe this game. Drama, this world, brings us many things that are difficult to detect and detect. At least, the memories you have about this world cannot be obtained by any means elsewhere. Afk It has been a long time, and for many reasons, I recall my friends who laughed and cursed together and wrote all night long. Please forgive me for leaving without saying goodbye. This article is forwarded to brothers who feel the same way as me.

I dare not say anything else, but I read about the first battle between the orc and the protagonist. I'm sure the author has never played a mage. At the beginning of the battle, he floated up to the Warriors coach and received a hammer blow, then flashed out, and then used all his mana to support the shield to fight against Daniel Wu's Shadow Arrow. The whole scene seemed to be nothing but being beaten. Why don't you practice a T?

I'm also speechless about what's in the protagonist's head! This is a big poisonous point in this book. I don't know why the author designed this! All the thoughts and memories of the protagonist are no secret to her! But the protagonist has nothing to do with her! Then whatever she wants to do to the protagonist, the protagonist can only wait for death! And every time the protagonist talks to her, it's every minute of drama! Every time I see this kind of plot, I skip it quickly! Because it's very poisonous and frustrating! I think it would be better if you directly give the protagonist a small system or a heaven-defying arcane talent than placing a time bomb in the protagonist's head! Reading a book requires a sense of immersion. If you were the protagonist, would you like a soul in your head that you cannot have any restrictions or countermeasures? This can't be considered a time bomb, but a time nuclear bomb!

After reading Chapter 25, I wanted to give up the book. There are many unreasonable things, there are big problems with the words and sentences, and human relations and affairs are unreasonable. In short, it looks like a book written by a middle school student who loves to play games.

As an elf, if you write about the ordinary appearance of the protagonist, you will know that the author did not write seriously.

Personally, I feel that Titans are the ceiling of strength in World of Warcraft. So far, no adult Titan has died at the hands of a non-Titan being. The Lord of the Void should be just an unsolvable force. Whether it has strength or wisdom is irrelevant. Maybe the so-called Lord of the Void just has the power of pan-will or a cosmic phenomenon similar to the Holy Light. If the Void is really strong and the Ancient Gods are really a great threat to the Titans, then the Titans will never have internal strife. The most basic truth is, what if Sargeras cannot defeat the Ancient Gods when he goes to destroy the planet? Therefore, since Sargeras chose this path and chose to kill the Titans of the Pantheon, it at least meant that the ancient gods did not pose any threat to them. In the final analysis, it is difficult for the ancient gods to solve it because they only care about the star soul. It is just like killing cancer cells easily without caring about the safety of the patient. The only real threat to the Titans is the Dark Titan, which was corrupted when he was a star soul. Only the Titans can fight against the Titans. Fighting against the forces of the void is only about methods, not strength. When Sargeras made up his mind to destroy all planets, the void no longer posed much of a threat to him. The universe is too big, and the number of Titans is too small. It is impossible for them to guard every planet with a star soul. The corruption of the void will come as soon as they step out, making it impossible to guard against it. Therefore, it is foreseeable that sooner or later they will be besieged by a large number of Dark Titans. Sargeras could not find a way to destroy the ancient gods without harming the star souls, so he chose to destroy all the planets and then destroy the void forces. In the absence of the Dark Titan, the void is almost vulnerable to him. This is a visible path, and it is also the reason why Sargeras parted ways with the pantheon and embarked on this path. There is nothing wrong with this path, it is just too cruel for those star souls and the creatures living on it.

Why are Azeroth and this book so similar?

This is the least compelling book introduction I have ever seen.

1. Typos 2. All kinds of complaints about real life 3. The word count is seriously low, sometimes 6 pages in a chapter are content that has been repeated before. 4. The old lady in the head 5. At the beginning of level 5, there were less than two Pyroblast spells and no mana. If the high elves had this kind of mana, they would have been eaten up by the trolls, and the same would be true in the later stages. I originally read it once when I was studying, and now I am reading it for the second time. It is really poisonous. Other people's copy of Blade of Dawn is at least much better than yours.

In fact, the ancient gods are not as powerful as the Titans. When several ancient gods were parasitic on the planet Azeroth, the most powerful Thousand-Headed Demon Y'Shaarj was plucked up like a carrot by the father of the Titans, Aman'Thul. The Well of Eternity was Ai-chan's wound. The Titans realized that such reckless actions would cause a lot of harm to Ai-chan, so they changed it to a seal.

The day you were born, the forests of Lordaeron whispered your name: Wang Fugui... Fu Gui... Gui

Everything else is good, except for the part about Sylvanas that is unreasonable. As the protagonist's most important family member, he didn't even know they were there during the undead disaster? Isn't this a little unreasonable? Isn't it a bit unreasonable to not protect people even though they know there will be danger? Moreover, Aurelia's reaction to her sister's death was too bland.

It's been 7 years since I wrote this book. Can I write a new one?

It's a mess, the main character is useless at all

I present two monthly passes, please update.

Fake corpse er

Speaking of which, Patrick seems to be based on the Patriach, right?

Why is the timeline of this book so messy? There is no Battle of Mount Hyjal, no Battle of Destruction of Dalaran, no how the draenei appeared. I feel like the author is good at writing about the world of Faerûn, and the analysis of various magics is clear and logical.

The writing style is a bit poor, the narrative is long-winded, the transitions are abrupt, and there are many key typos. It feels awkward and can't be read 😥

Come on, author💪, work hard💪, write slowly, don't be a eunuch

How many years have passed? Let's start another one