Silent Escape

This foreshadowing was unexpectedᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ

Wow, it's been such a long time

Waiting for the summer vacation, I hope to continue to update, finish telling the story, and take my time.

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It's too watery, there's no outline, just think about it a little bit

Ever since I started reading book reviews, I have been afraid to read many books.

Is this all Ye Feng's dream?

Hey, there are still not many people watching. It's a pity that I'm not rich and can't be strong.

There are so many book reviews, maybe I was dragged into it (ﾉಥBenefitಥ)

Does the author also read Panic World😁

If the plot is better grasped, I think this book still has a future. Although I can't say that I will definitely become a god, the results should be much better. In particular, some plots ended too hastily, and the writing became more and more watery later on, especially the third task. I feel like I didn't grasp the outline well.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the author prefers to use a summary method to narrate, indicating that too many materials are used: "What did the protagonist do?" "What did the protagonist do, and then what did he do, so what happened." This type of expression was at the time a very convenient but also the most boring way of saying it. Try expressing the background through dialogue between multiple characters and letting the reader realize it themselves. This will make it more interesting.

Although the university courses are not stressful, you still have to study hard and just let it happen for updates or whatever.

Your persistence has caught up with me, or I like your appearance. [I feel like I want to come out and comment]

After reading the first three tasks, I feel that this book is still busy and interesting. Good luck to the author!

Please give me a code name, or a sidekick named A. If I can live a little longer, I'll count.

Author, you started making it up from the second half of the third story

Not bad. The author is a novice, but his writing is better than some platinum masters. I'd like to give you a full subscription first. I heard that it will be very popular later on. The author should be more careful. Books don't just look good to become popular. The last time I recommended your book, the score increased by at least 3 times.

The author just went to college? What major?

Do you also watch Doomsday Online? Do you use all your income to read novels?🤫