Wandering in the Heavens

It's finally over. I basically ordered and read it all. I didn't give a single monthly pass or recommendation ticket, but I'm still the 14th fan. I hope the author will reflect on it and don't let the next book sink in.

Another divine book is finished. A must-read every day. I don't follow those great masters every day. This book is very well written. ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ )

Now that we have arrived in the eternal world, why go to the world of low martial arts?

Incarnation also creates Hunyuan. Is this a poisonous point? Should Hunyuan be unique?

The biggest opportunity in Shushan is those magic weapons. Unfortunately, this world is too particular about cause and effect, so it's hard to get them.

After reading this book, I instantly turned into an idiot who would die if I didn't complain Is it really a god? Shushan and Eternal Life are worlds with the same power level? I almost laughed out loud. There are many common sense mistakes. I remember that Yueyang Tower seems to be that if you live high in the temple, you worry about its people, and if you are far away from the rivers and lakes, you worry about its king. The author just did the opposite. He said, don't take it out if you don't remember it well, okay? Also, he is simply wrong about some of the titles in the book. What the hell is the Nine Demons and Yin God? Is the Nine Yin Demon God good~ Forget about other novels. You said that in the world of Tianlong Babu, you can defeat all the martial arts of the Xiaoyao sect with just the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu? Even if you can defeat, a The sixth level of the Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu can compete with those top masters? Don't make me laugh, okay? If it is really that powerful, then in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, if King Jinlun has practiced the Dragon Elephant Prajna Gong to the tenth level, wouldn't he be invincible? What about Guo Jing, Yang Guo and the others? Of course, having said so much, I think the most interesting thing is Putting Shushan and Eternal Life together on the same power level is really interesting and interesting. You said that in the early stage of Shushan, there were many golden immortals in the mortal world, which is correct, but in the middle and later stages of the eternal life world, there are as many golden immortals as sand. Tianjun still has twenty levels~ Among the current power systems, the only one that can stably suppress him is the prehistoric one, right? I haven't finished complaining yet, and it feels like it's not interesting anymore, so give it up.

You copy the setting of Immortal Daluo Jinxian and then say that there is no Daluo Jinxian in the Three Thousand Era of Immortality. You are really awesome, author.

I can't watch it. The beginning shows that the author has not finished reading Eternal Life. Bai Haichan's identity is not known, and he dares to ask for Fang Lao Mo's luck. This kind of thing cannot be said, because the immortal king can hear and see it. You never know how many immortal kings are paying attention to Fang Lao Mo.

😰😰This book refreshed my perspective! The protagonist traveled through the eternal world and actually invented the mobile phone and the Internet in the world of immortality. Why don't you just let the protagonist invent an aircraft carrier and destroy all the heavens and end it directly?

The system is in a mess, and the door to eternal life is just an innate treasure? Even the Chaos Qinglian cannot evolve the fairy world on its own, that is the Chaos Treasure! The Gate of Eternal Life is definitely no less than or even more powerful than the Treasure of Chaos. After all, the Golden Immortal is immortal, Da Luo transcends the long river of time, only the ancestors of the Hunyuan Dao can transcend fate, and only the Hunyuan Wuji can be eternal. After the end of eternal life, the realm behind is simply impossible to see. It is pure nonsense and confusing logic 😡

I felt that the front was too poisonous. I hit the ninth prince, then the third prince, then the third prince, and then the second prince. I hit the younger one and then the older one. Finally, I punched him and vomited blood. I also said thank you to the second prince for teaching me. He was so arrogant at the beginning and refused to give up. He wanted to beat him. The Ninth Prince punched him, and in the end, he said thank you for your advice, I can't do it for being poisonous, you are a person with a back-up, why don't you take advantage of the young master of the Fang family, why don't you just write that you are a slave, wouldn't this temper your character more? Also, Fang Han is the Gate of Immortality Artifact Spirit, which involves the plans of countless heavenly kings and immortal kings. They constantly send him treasures and opportunities. In other words, his big opportunities are all planned by someone behind the scenes. How do you think about taking away his opportunities? You also directly said that you want one-tenth of his luck. You make the bosses who are watching Fang Han's growth behind the scenes find no reason not to slice and dice you to study you.

The most poisonous thing is to use the martial arts world of high martial arts to defeat the martial arts of low martial arts, and then learn the martial arts of low martial arts to defeat the warriors of the high martial arts world. For example, in a world where there are cultivators and ordinary martial arts practitioners, cultivators learn martial arts skills and fight other cultivators. In other words, people from major sects in the main world of the protagonist learn ordinary martial arts and then fight against people from major sects. Forced to be funny

It doesn't matter if the protagonist's cultivation level is slow. After all, no matter which book the protagonist is in, his strength will take off sooner or later. However, mediocre IQ and low character can never be compensated. The protagonist's character always gives people a mediocre or useless feeling, and the scene of Fengshen Wuyishan really made people stunned. The protagonist, a mortal, ran to two immortals, Xiao Sheng and Cao Bao, and took out a lot of good things in exchange for spiritual treasures. Is this because his brain is flooded? There is a limit to innocence, as Xiao Sheng said, are you forcing us to rob you again?

Qidian is the most rubbish time-travel text. The system is unclear, the magic weapon is unclear, and the world level is unclear.

Cut to see how much water can be extracted and how long it will last! Put it on me

Some people say water, but I think it's because the writing is poor. Don't say you are good and you will come. Do you think I have to create you when I say you are not good?

I just don't understand. They have been reborn in the world of Xianxia, ​​and they still want to play Zhutianliu and go to the world of martial arts to show off. What are these authors thinking?

Although it was a bit poisonous, I still managed to survive the Three Kingdoms, but I still couldn't hold on in the end. The poisonous spots in the Three Kingdoms were too dense. I didn't want to read it with my brain, but I still failed in Chapter 151. Cutting off Liu Bei, not to mention his sworn sworn relationship with Guan Yu and Zhang Fei, how can he still be the eldest brother because of his strength? Are you talking about rebellion just because we have a casual conversation? Can a servant bring a lot of money to buy an official position? Talking about visiting in the deep mountains and old forests? Screaming evil for no reason, and having a long-lasting reputation! Is it true that a white body wants to worship heroes and celebrities? Not to mention the poor writing style and allusions in the sentences.

It's really good-looking, but I don't understand what you're saying. If you don't write what you mean, it's garbage? I give you the keyboard and you write.

Taking advantage of the limited exemption, I read more than 400 chapters and found it difficult to continue reading without clear explanation of some issues. 1. The issue of realms. The names of realms in each world are different. Which realm in the main world corresponds to the realms in other worlds? The author does not explain these background settings clearly, and the readers are left to guess, which makes reading very difficult. 2. The great master said earlier that I can travel around the world without relying on things like the golden finger of the protagonist. I just want to ask if the saints in the prehistoric plane and the saints in the Fengshen plane are the same person, or if their memories are not connected. If it is consistent, how come the protagonist is so bold and confident to go to the West after intercepting the things that lead to it? There is also the prehistoric world (according to the author's previous tips, I guess the journey to the west is probably also the prehistoric flow). Could it be that the sage can't calculate what he once had? "Myself" is curious, even if he has not discovered these two worlds, based on the protagonist's experience, he regards the master of the world as the one in the world of gods. According to the protagonist, he was discovered by me as soon as he entered the world. In the future, the protagonist went to the world after Journey to the West and discovered that the protagonist had his own skills. After counting, he found that it had nothing to do with him. He pulled the protagonist over and asked, how did the protagonist answer (of course I didn't read that, so I don't know what the protagonist's cultivation was at that time). Also, after the protagonist enters, are there two identical spiritual treasures? The author changed the twenty-four Dinghaizhu into thirty-six to cover it up. What about the treasure money and other innate spiritual treasures obtained in the world of gods? 3. Lifespan issue. The protagonist seems to regard the Little Fate Technique as a regular method rather than a trump card. He uses it in almost every battle to hunt for treasures, and even before he became an immortal, he always had tens of thousands. The reason he gave every time was that his foundation was thicker than others and his lifespan was several times longer than others. But I feel that even if I use it so much, no matter how many times it is used, it won't be enough. Can you clearly describe the lifespan after each breakthrough, or explain it in the work related to it? After all, we who have not read the original work have no idea about the lifespan corresponding to each realm.

At first, I thought it was a masterpiece, but as it goes on, it becomes more and more poisonous. I can't even help you detoxify it, so please quit.

The main character is really rubbish and has such an idiotic personality. I can't watch it for free. I don't dare to talk shit about being beaten. I don't need a backstage.

Rubbish novel, this is just a fantasy novel. It only travels through a few worlds in total. The ones who have traveled through are so weak that they leave. This book has 1/4 of the chapters in the prehistoric era and 1/4 of the chapters in Eternal Life. Those who travel to less than 6 worlds and cannot use 200 chapters are just passers-by. The remaining 2/4 are all spent on original works. The level is messed up.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was a little speechless. The writing in this book is really not that good. It is not as good as the other book The World of Gods is Eternal Life. This book is purely a pretense and slap in the face. There are no less than a dozen pretense and slaps in the face in dozens of chapters. Wherever the protagonist goes, there are people who make things difficult for him. There are also people who have just broken through supernatural powers. I am convinced by them all.

It sucks. You don't have to pretend to be a cultured person, okay? Why don't you see it? You are writing a novel, not here to convince us to believe you. What you wrote is reasonable and we naturally believe it. It looks so embarrassing.

It is rare for a novel to be full of curses from this chapter to the post. You are not suitable for writing novels

Will there be no Daluo Jinxian in eternal life? Can you please read the original text before you make a fuss?

What kind of bullshit are you writing about? You are a maid and you are giving away treasures. You are so generous, why don't you give me a starting point of 10,000 yuan? I happen to be short of these, so why don't you give them to me?

I can't stand Chapter 10. The one who can see the Shushan roll is Zhen Niubi. . . A treasure that travels through all the worlds will actually have obvious spatial fluctuations when it travels, and it will be detected by a mere one or two levels of supernatural power. This is worthy of traveling through the heavens, it's really disgusting.

What the hell is this mess?