People who cultivate immortality may not necessarily think of immortality.
That's the case with Mo Chen. He just wants to find his biological parents, find a virtuous wife, and live a stable life.
But when a strange light penetrated his eyebrows, he changed his mind.
Finally one day, Mo Chen made up his mind and walked towards the vast world with a scroll of mountains and rivers and a broad bronze sword on his back.
In the vast world, the heaven and earth are in chaos, the sun and the moon fail to do their duty, and there are numerous strange phenomena.
But the bumpy road couldn't stop Mo Chen from moving forward.
He solved the mystery of heaven and earth bit by bit, and completed the task of building mountains bit by bit.
A series of bizarre stories are waiting for Mo Chen to experience; a series of sacred mountains shrouded in mist are waiting for Mo Chen to explore.
Whether he is willing or forced, it is ultimately the path chosen by Mo Chen.
This is a story of a young man growing up silently, and also a story of the world gradually fading away.
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Reader comments
Is the out-of-order place a fixed place? Is the fog a way in? Or is the fog itself the place? Are they conscious? How does it work? Does it follow a certain pattern? Or is it created by some kind of consciousness, or is it created by the power of heaven and earth (emphasis on this point, if you use the sky to go against the sky, you will be hacked. If you use the sky as a shell and break out of the cocoon to become something, I don't know what will happen, because you introduced it last time...)?
In the previous introduction, the fog swallowed up all the worlds, and the worlds were divided? , I don't know how to set it, I think of many possibilities, no matter which one I admire. The central forbidden area and that monument must be very magical!
Mo You can answer selectively and with restrictions.
Also, why don't you advertise? There are so few people, and it's hard to support them. You don't know how to TJ!
Look at the sky, I don't have enough ink in my stomach, so I will try my best to give you some very sophisticated advertisements...
Practitioners who come here to see if you have any opinions, can you tell me and let me know how to change it?
The practitioners who came in to see.
Some plots are not satisfactory, some descriptions are not satisfactory, some plots are too slow, and some plots have problems. You can tell me here.
You can also let me know what shortcomings I have, thank you
The author writes according to his own ideas. It can be seen from the previous chapters that the layout is very big, but many things appear too fast. The He family suddenly comes out just to kill people. The protagonist goes up to kill him before he can find the person he wants to kill. Then in less than three seconds, he suddenly appears in a chaotic land of unknown origin. Then, before the chaotic land can be understood, a inheritance suddenly comes out. After another three seconds, the He family is gone again. Suddenly his father finds him, and as soon as he is found, he suddenly writes that the protagonist is about to appear. I went to find my biological parents. Just after entering the city, the young master of the He family came to show off again. Before he started showing off, he was beaten back by another force. As soon as he returned, he met the patriarch of the most powerful family in the territory. As soon as he met the patriarch, he asked him about his adventures. , As soon as he asked Qi Yu, he said part of it. Just after he said it, he said that your most loyal guard has a traitor. Just after he said that there was a traitor, the patriarch believed it and was ready to clean up the traitors. As soon as he said that he wanted to clean up the traitors, he planned to let his daughter follow him. . . . . . . This is the development of the first ten chapters. . . . . It's a good thing that you don't learn how to separate yourself from water. What do you think if you don't explain a lot of things that should be explained? It's just a story outline, a world created by you. Can you tell us a little bit about the plot and let us figure out the story ourselves?
This introduction is very well written, and the writing is smooth. Why don't many people read it?
Suggestions to the author to add some pretense and slap-in-the-face plot
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit cliche. If it was a well-known author, he should be able to rest on his laurels and still have people read it. But it is unattractive for a new author to start with this routine. In this era, this kind of routine that ordinary people practice is only suitable for new readers!
110 Great achievements
Damn, this book is really awesome. Boss Mo Chenzi must continue writing. I'm really looking forward to the next book.
One moment Aunt Zhu said, "Your father, isn't it your father?" The next moment. The author
It's well written, why doesn't anyone read it?
I just read the first chapter of the first chapter. The author is correcting it.
I couldn't stand the first chapter, it's all the same routine, what kind of male protagonist is not worthy of Jili Gua La, his parents must have a story, nothing new, even if the writing is okay, but he still persuades him to quit 😥
To be honest, I have only read the first five chapters. My personal opinion is a bit dull.
The writing is great. I like your setting about chaos, but chaos has no role in the middle period. It's a pity. Will there be any big developments later? Otherwise, the early preparations will be wasted...
It's okay, but it's just a bit boring.
I felt discouraged from the first chapter. The routine is too old, I don't want to watch it
The first chapter felt a bit discouraging, the routine was too old, I didn't want to read it
What's going on? I've been pushing this book for a while, but it only has 180,000 hits.
When will the author publish a new book?
After raising it for more than a year, it is ready for slaughter. I just don't know if it has become fat after raising it for more than a year.
. Well, isn't the starting point the starting point?
Good book, no problem, the writing style is really good, there is no problem with the writing, it is rare, I will wait until I finish it to reach level 2. Become a god 😊.
Come on, you are the boss.
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I haven't read it yet, but if I add some of the comments made by the poster and change the protagonist's body into a "demon spirit" with the same title as the book, it might attract a lot of old bookworms like me who have experienced the book shortage. I have read Stallion since I was young, I remember it was "The Peach Garden Ring", and then I also read the fantasy novels of San Shao and his friends, as well as the online game trilogy. Gradually, these articles began to disappear. It suited my taste, and I met "Urban Insect King" and started reading the Alien Beast style. The Alien Beast style has always been the same since "Godzilla". It was boring. I felt that every protagonist was righteous and oriented towards the light. I also found it boring. I started reading Western fantasy books about necromancers. It was always skeletons, lichs, etc. So what should I do? From humans to beasts to skulls, what else is there to read? Then I discovered a very exciting novel: The Peerless World of Crying, the Transformation Trilogy. Well, straight men like to talk about transformation stories about shemales. Personally, I like to read stories where the ending is single, but this kind of subject is already very niche, and it is divided into hundreds of transformations and marriages. It is boring, surrounded by a group of rotten girls. I entered the porn circle and started reading gay literature. Starting from "The Patriarch of the Devil", I read some non-brainy gay literature and found that I was invincible. There were no good books to read anymore. After watching male videos and female videos, I finally found a few more good books, such as "Super Mechanic", "Low" "Dimensional Games", "The Poor Man's Two Thousand Years", well, I hope these three books can temporarily quench my thirst. I have tried to write novels before and I know that writing novels is not easy. I'd better continue to be my reader. The old bookworm has a taste for diamonds, and I can also give some advice to new authors. I'm reading After many routines and various types of novels, several new genres have been published in the past few years. I also hope that the author can work hard to innovate. For example, two of the three novels I published before are relatively innovative in order to attract more readers. "Super Mechanic" and "Low Dimensional Game", one article can become a god.
Is the out-of-order place a fixed place? Is the fog a way in? Or is the fog itself the place? Are they conscious? How does it work? Does it follow a certain pattern? Or is it created by some kind of consciousness, or is it created by the power of heaven and earth (emphasis on this point, if you use the sky to go against the sky, you will be hacked. If you use the sky as a shell and break out of the cocoon to become something, I don't know what will happen, because you introduced it last time...)? In the previous introduction, the fog swallowed up all the worlds, and the worlds were divided? , I don't know how to set it, I think of many possibilities, no matter which one I admire. The central forbidden area and that monument must be very magical! Mo You can answer selectively and with restrictions. Also, why don't you advertise? There are so few people, and it's hard to support them. You don't know how to TJ! Look at the sky, I don't have enough ink in my stomach, so I will try my best to give you some very sophisticated advertisements...
Practitioners who come here to see if you have any opinions, can you tell me and let me know how to change it?
The practitioners who came in to see. Some plots are not satisfactory, some descriptions are not satisfactory, some plots are too slow, and some plots have problems. You can tell me here. You can also let me know what shortcomings I have, thank you
The author writes according to his own ideas. It can be seen from the previous chapters that the layout is very big, but many things appear too fast. The He family suddenly comes out just to kill people. The protagonist goes up to kill him before he can find the person he wants to kill. Then in less than three seconds, he suddenly appears in a chaotic land of unknown origin. Then, before the chaotic land can be understood, a inheritance suddenly comes out. After another three seconds, the He family is gone again. Suddenly his father finds him, and as soon as he is found, he suddenly writes that the protagonist is about to appear. I went to find my biological parents. Just after entering the city, the young master of the He family came to show off again. Before he started showing off, he was beaten back by another force. As soon as he returned, he met the patriarch of the most powerful family in the territory. As soon as he met the patriarch, he asked him about his adventures. , As soon as he asked Qi Yu, he said part of it. Just after he said it, he said that your most loyal guard has a traitor. Just after he said that there was a traitor, the patriarch believed it and was ready to clean up the traitors. As soon as he said that he wanted to clean up the traitors, he planned to let his daughter follow him. . . . . . . This is the development of the first ten chapters. . . . . It's a good thing that you don't learn how to separate yourself from water. What do you think if you don't explain a lot of things that should be explained? It's just a story outline, a world created by you. Can you tell us a little bit about the plot and let us figure out the story ourselves?
This introduction is very well written, and the writing is smooth. Why don't many people read it?
Suggestions to the author to add some pretense and slap-in-the-face plot
The writing is good, but the plot is a bit cliche. If it was a well-known author, he should be able to rest on his laurels and still have people read it. But it is unattractive for a new author to start with this routine. In this era, this kind of routine that ordinary people practice is only suitable for new readers!
110 Great achievements
Damn, this book is really awesome. Boss Mo Chenzi must continue writing. I'm really looking forward to the next book.
One moment Aunt Zhu said, "Your father, isn't it your father?" The next moment. The author
It's well written, why doesn't anyone read it?
I just read the first chapter of the first chapter. The author is correcting it.
I couldn't stand the first chapter, it's all the same routine, what kind of male protagonist is not worthy of Jili Gua La, his parents must have a story, nothing new, even if the writing is okay, but he still persuades him to quit 😥
To be honest, I have only read the first five chapters. My personal opinion is a bit dull.
The writing is great. I like your setting about chaos, but chaos has no role in the middle period. It's a pity. Will there be any big developments later? Otherwise, the early preparations will be wasted...
It's okay, but it's just a bit boring.
I felt discouraged from the first chapter. The routine is too old, I don't want to watch it
The first chapter felt a bit discouraging, the routine was too old, I didn't want to read it
What's going on? I've been pushing this book for a while, but it only has 180,000 hits.
When will the author publish a new book?
After raising it for more than a year, it is ready for slaughter. I just don't know if it has become fat after raising it for more than a year.
. Well, isn't the starting point the starting point?
Good book, no problem, the writing style is really good, there is no problem with the writing, it is rare, I will wait until I finish it to reach level 2. Become a god 😊. Come on, you are the boss.
Already added to the book list, please give it a thumbs up from the author
Already rewarded and added to the book list, please click on your image to show your love ❤️ and follow me! So cute!
I haven't read it yet, but if I add some of the comments made by the poster and change the protagonist's body into a "demon spirit" with the same title as the book, it might attract a lot of old bookworms like me who have experienced the book shortage. I have read Stallion since I was young, I remember it was "The Peach Garden Ring", and then I also read the fantasy novels of San Shao and his friends, as well as the online game trilogy. Gradually, these articles began to disappear. It suited my taste, and I met "Urban Insect King" and started reading the Alien Beast style. The Alien Beast style has always been the same since "Godzilla". It was boring. I felt that every protagonist was righteous and oriented towards the light. I also found it boring. I started reading Western fantasy books about necromancers. It was always skeletons, lichs, etc. So what should I do? From humans to beasts to skulls, what else is there to read? Then I discovered a very exciting novel: The Peerless World of Crying, the Transformation Trilogy. Well, straight men like to talk about transformation stories about shemales. Personally, I like to read stories where the ending is single, but this kind of subject is already very niche, and it is divided into hundreds of transformations and marriages. It is boring, surrounded by a group of rotten girls. I entered the porn circle and started reading gay literature. Starting from "The Patriarch of the Devil", I read some non-brainy gay literature and found that I was invincible. There were no good books to read anymore. After watching male videos and female videos, I finally found a few more good books, such as "Super Mechanic", "Low" "Dimensional Games", "The Poor Man's Two Thousand Years", well, I hope these three books can temporarily quench my thirst. I have tried to write novels before and I know that writing novels is not easy. I'd better continue to be my reader. The old bookworm has a taste for diamonds, and I can also give some advice to new authors. I'm reading After many routines and various types of novels, several new genres have been published in the past few years. I also hope that the author can work hard to innovate. For example, two of the three novels I published before are relatively innovative in order to attract more readers. "Super Mechanic" and "Low Dimensional Game", one article can become a god.