21St Century Weapon Refining Expert

Put it on the top of the bookshelf Looking forward to opening a new book. More than a year Oh

Let's open a new book and write about Europe and America. They are all about data flow and theory. You are definitely one of the best among academics. I like reading your macroeconomics, nuclear weapons and the richest man. It is obvious that you are very knowledgeable about European and American economic history. Why not try writing about foreign subjects? After reading a book, few old bookworms will care about nationalism. Most of them care about the plot, so give it a try. I'm really looking forward to another urban history novel from you. I started to like your novels from the richest man in the world. I really hope you will stop falling into the trap of cultivation.

Author Jun, I have finally published a new book. I have been waiting for you for a long time.

Stirring people's hearts, that's how life should be

After reading some of the public chapters of Shameless Family, I can say that the author's writing skills are very good, but he likes to play word games too much, playing deep and mysterious. This makes reading so tiring! How many readers just want to relax, so if they are so tired from reading, aren't they asking for trouble? ? I hope the author will consider it.

It's not considered poisonous, but I can see that the author is already on his way to the minister's room.

The title is normal, the introduction is interesting, and the content is unsatisfactory. I feel like a lot of content has been cut out in the first few chapters. Instead of being engaging, a lot of the skipped content seems hollow and ineffective. For example, when the system was surprised, it suddenly became energetic and felt that there was a big story in it, but there was no content at all. For example, when mentioning a goddess, always give the goddess a little description! For example, she was looking down angrily, etc. It is all a matter of one sentence, which not only makes the content full and traceless, but also can pave the way for the future story development and the entrance of the characters, with various developments. For example, a goddess can destroy death with one finger For example, the goddess sends people into the world For example, the protagonist, the parasitic goddess For example, the protagonist is a goddess I summarize the rest into the following six points: . . . . . .

I retrieved my starting number and found out that the richest man in the world is 404... I was thinking of reading the author's other articles and found out about the latest eunuch.

In fact, the writing is quite good, but it has become useless after repeated revisions. What a pity! 💔

It turned out to be the gun of Liuhe Daqiang. I was so excited when I saw the chapter title. Author, you are a bad pervert 🔨

Brother, you'd better open the city.

Waiting for a new book. . . Even if you are an old eunuch, I still love you QAQ

In Chapter 40, Jin Haibiao's head was twisted off. In Chapter 42, it is written that Jin Haibiao was unconscious and was taken to open the safe.

I didn't even post an advertisement for the previous book, so I didn't even know I was going to open a new one. . .

The characters are all so sinister, please give me some light of hope

I feel like the book collapses easily after reading the introduction.

Why haven't I seen this book on Writers News before? Just saw it today…

Didn't you just make a big change? Changed again? I also see here that there are only 34 chapters left.

In fact, the writing was very good before the first revision, and it was very enjoyable to read. After the revision, it focused on the construction of the system. It is not that it is not good, but it is a bit astringent to read. There are too many explanations, but it loses the sense of rhythm and the sense of integration with reality. It is not as enjoyable as before.

I only update this little every day, can you update a few more chapters? It was extremely frustrating to wait.

How is the author doing lately? Big revision?

Level 1 Return to Heaven. After complete death, you can be resurrected at the resurrection point. This is not fun. Like online games, it is recommended to remove this ability, mainly because it is difficult to accept mentally. Of course, if the plot later requires it, then forget it. It is not as good as the author being exhausted and panicking.

Can't catch thirty-three and thirty-four? The plot jumps a bit too much

Can you think of it before writing it? How many times have you revised the draft? I think I'm going crazy and about to break up

Why is the content different?

= =Pretty good, ruthless enough. .

I've read Chapter 45 before, but I've just written Chapter 41 now. Have I traveled through time?

The author is still very hard-working and serious. He has revised it twice. No wonder the previous works are so beautiful.

I still miss the feeling when I watched Shameless Family. Maybe most people think that the later part is very exciting, but what attracts me more is the campus life in the front. I laughed while watching it, it was really funny. It's a pity that we still haven't fully booked it, so Zeng Li jumped over because he didn't like it. It's better to use automatic subscription for this book, which can be regarded as my own small support.