Summon the Heroes

After reading Chapter 7, if there is anything going on with Ms. Chen in the end, isn't this just deliberately looking for trouble to send my wife away?

This book really gave me an amazing feeling in the early stage, and it was a happy and gratifying story. However, the author disappointed me in the later stage. The writing was too ink, and the chivalrous flavor of the early stage was lost. It can be seen that the author did not grasp the rhythm in the later stage, especially the description of the protagonist's emotional route. There was a lack of foreshadowing for Kite's feelings, and the character description of Kite was not done well. The early stage was too dark, and the later stage was forced to wash it out. To sum up, the author's creativity is good, and the plot is a bit weak. For the first book, it is quite good. I am looking forward to your performance in the next book.

I don't want to say it anymore…it's impossible to tell the difference between a strong martial artist…and he defeated such a scornful person in one fell swoop! There are also little miscellaneous fish who come out to challenge him. The key is that they can beat the protagonist to a desperate situation to win. I am speechless! Don't do this to everyone! You can see for yourself how many of them are the same in the text... It starts with a few lines of bb and then the protagonist gets into a fight and finally understands xx and then defeats him... I am speechless. I am tired of reading more than 120 chapters.

I really regretted reading this book. Why does it have to be literary and youthful when it is clear that the novel is written by a novice? The heroine is like this and the protagonist still licks his face and says he can't let go? I couldn't bear to read the latest chapter, but up to now there is no whitewashing of the heroine. Author, are you writing this book just to disgust people? Anyway, you just like the heroine and it doesn't matter how the heroine attacks the hero?

I won't talk about emotional lines or anything like that. Let's talk about how after the protagonist came out of seclusion for ten years, his combat power exploded. In order to prevent the novel's combat power system from collapsing, the author forced the protagonist to use only one knight. Painting a tiger cannot be compared to a dog.

The person who said that the front is amazing is obviously Tuo, but there are all kinds of poisons in the front, I can't stand it.

It was so vicious in the early stage, but you guys said it was wonderful in the early stage. . Convinced

I just read the first chapter and I was shocked by the protagonist's intelligence. Wouldn't the protagonist take the initiative to remind the four knights that their faces are poisonous? This kind of person can also prove that he and the black shop are not together. Do you have to wait for others to find out and kill him together? The author is forcing the plot to follow!

It's extremely poisonous. If you want a system, just summon it as quickly as possible. At the beginning, you're begging for mercy like a dog. The system has come out, so why beg for mercy? There's still a system, and there are still conditions for summoning, so you might as well not use the system. It's useful, but it's extremely poisonous.

It hurts to watch. . . I thought it looked good before the coup, so I ordered it immediately. What happened next? Is Chen Xiaotong still cleared? What the hell is infinite space? Later, Chen Xiaotong was kidding me when she agreed to be the queen again. She is so cheap about love that she is not as good as those prostitutes.

Will Li Si come again? If I win so much money, I will take Wan'er home to rest and make that guy Wang Shiliu angry to death.

I haven't read it for a long time. After reading the last chapter, I still want to clean her up. Withdraw. Bye. What will I write in the next book?

I just came to see the author, and in the new year, I came to see old friends.

By the way, how big is the author's book club?

Bake the votes and book reviews? It was full of poisonous points and a lot of people applauded it.

Among Gu Long's three knives, the Xiao Li Fei Dao is the stunning knife, the Ding Peng Demon Knife is the ruthless knife, and the Red Snow Black Knife is the silent knife. The biggest difference between Fu Hongxue and other swordsmen is that every one of his swords has a mark, and each sword is made by millions of swords. His swordsmanship has never been accurately evaluated. His sword aims at "quick", he draws the sword faster than you, draws the sword faster than you, and retracts the sword faster than you. This is Fu Hongxue's sword.

After reading the first ten chapters, I have no desire to read anymore.

The problem is, knowing that the Changsheng Sword Sect is in the south, the protagonist secretly learns the opponent's martial arts, but still stays in Gusu! Second, knowing that the head disciple of the Changsheng Sword Sect participated in the competition, and still going to participate, you are looking for death! Third, the first time is free. I don't dare to starve to death for a year. If I don't come back for a year and three months, I will die. I feel that the protagonist is not a college student, but a primary school student, and he is still a brainless one! He has a criminal record, but he still watches the fun! I don't know what the mentality of those who like to watch the excitement is

It's just lowering the protagonist's IQ!

The more I read, the angrier I became, so I asked when the Dog Emperor will die.

Old Chen! Your power system is not structured well. The gap between low-level and high-level is too big, and there is a lack of transition in the middle. The gap between Grandmaster and Grandmaster, and the gap between vampires.

The author started by saying that he was afraid of pounce, but did not pounce. Writing another 800,000 words will be more rewarding. There is no person who cannot be cleansed, and there is no story that cannot be reconciled. Martial arts fantasy, if you want to deal with monsters and monsters, summon the thunderbolt heroes, there is no broken void. Legendary characters are also welcome. There is no problem if you go back and change the map and continue to develop the normal force. The subject of writing is still the author yourself, come on ✊

Don't whitewash Chen Xiaotong, don't whitewash, don't whitewash! ! !

When practicing the knife with pig's trotters, I'm afraid of this and that, and I retreat.

The novel is not written like this, brother

Sure enough, Jin Yong is easier to imitate than Gu Long. It was too difficult for Gu Long to forcefully write out his taste.

It's really hard to describe the characters in Gu Long's novels. I read them when I was a child. More than 20 years later, they are still so clear. Each character has his own style and is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. The prodigal, the killer, the hero, the gangster villain, the beauty, etc.

I thought that the waiter in the shop would just go along with it, but I didn't expect that he would start a martial arts competition to attract a bride, so I ran away quickly.

It feels like something written by an elementary school student

What happened to that fan badge, the Northern Iron Seal?