Standing in a Dangerous Building, the Wind Blows Softly

Regarding this book, I am still holding a wait-and-see attitude. I will neither praise nor belittle it. From the few chapters that have been released now, it can be seen that this work was originally supposed to be a short story, because the author wrote it in a hurry, and some plots were omitted, such as the reaction of the hero and heroine's country when it was attacked, and the plot was not mentioned at all. In the two years of hard work, the male protagonist's efforts, the state of the country, and the obstacles that may arise in the reform are completely undescribed. The female protagonist is sent to a foreign country, where she falls in love with the male protagonist, but the environment is extremely oppressive. The male protagonist stays in his own country and has a prominent status. So after the war, his own story will naturally and inevitably happen. And compared to the female protagonist's solo story, the male protagonist's story of loyal service to the country and constant love should be narrated in more space. The interaction between the two countries should also be very exciting, but in the author's original plan, these did not appear, or the author considered it, but because he planned to write a short story, he did not describe these stories that would have been exciting and attractive to readers. These structures, which must have taken a lot of effort to describe in the early stage, are not mentioned in these chapters, so it will be even more troublesome to explain them naturally and without trace in the future. However, I am still very optimistic about this story. If it is written as a short story, it will definitely be a masterpiece worth recalling. If it is changed into a long story, it will definitely be even more exciting. I'm really looking forward to the story between the male and female protagonists. The story depends on the author's writing skills and narration.

The content is fascinating and impressive, and if the slowdown can make people feel like a trickle, with proper guidance, it can allow people to recall those wonderful moments and gradually lead to subsequent developments, making the plot appear natural and smooth, making people feel that "it should be like this" or "that's how it is" without causing an inexplicable and abrupt feeling. `ニニ5O⒍7ニ⒍O4

The plot is delicate and the writing is very good. Please keep writing and wait for the update 🌹

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