The Shop Only Sells Afternoon Tea

After reading the public chapter, I feel like the protagonist is just a puppet. Whatever card is given by the system will come out. I thought it was for the protagonist to learn how to make it on his own, so what's the point of being responsible for inserting cards and selling things? There is also an inexplicable setting that I can't eat, and I also take advantage of my dad's hot spot to get a little lolita. However, this setting is not only refreshing and heartwarming to watch, but also makes me feel aggrieved.

To the author: I don't quite understand your initial motivation for writing a book, but no matter what, I always hope that your book will be welcomed by everyone! So now that you've written it, you should take it seriously! Details determine success or failure. I have only read the first few dozen chapters to give you some suggestions! For example, why is the main character only 30 when his salary is only paid half a month? To show poverty? What's the point? Regardless of the reason, the original shop owner believed that the protagonist gave the shop and custody of the child, so he already had the halo of being a protagonist. Why can he just take someone else's ID card and transfer the property to someone else and transfer custody? Don't you need to come forward in person? If you have the ability to do something without your own intervention, do you still need the protagonist to monitor you? Considering the price in recent years, a set of second-hand tables, chairs and benches only cost a few dozen yuan, but a girl can eat osmanthus cake for eight or nine yuan and sell it for a big price? To highlight the deliciousness? Do you know that the Price Bureau requires you to clearly mark your prices? If someone else finds it too expensive after eating, can they sue you without setting the price in advance? If a random student dares to steal other people's accounts and publish comments online, is this a legitimate idea? Does he want to go in and eat royal food? The total nonsense and errors in details give readers a worse and worse sense of reading, which can only lead to negative reviews! If you still want to write well for everyone to read instead of making fun of yourself, then please write seriously, please do a good job of researching the information before writing, and it is not difficult to ask a few friends or classmates to read the manuscript before sending it out, my friend!

The layout is too small, and it feels like the owner is just the nanny for those few people, which is boring

I thought it was very good. It was a very light-hearted article, and I was very moved. I have been reading the book for seven or eight years, and it's a pity that I stopped writing it.

Can we not set up such mandatory tasks? Is this still a system? ? ? Doesn't the system assist people? Why do we have to do so many tasks, or rather make mistakes? This writing method was quite popular when the system novels were first published, but the more I have seen and read them, the more I feel like the protagonist of this type of system novel is no longer the protagonist. .

It's amazing that I wrote 1.21 Million words

Not bad, just too little, so I collected it first 😆

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I feel that the author's daily writing is quite good, but the plot of pretending to be a slap in the face is not so good. You can see that the protagonist is making a fuss out of molehills, and the protagonist makes things big because of some trivial things. Sometimes the problem that can be solved by calling the police has to be taken action. It is recommended to do more daily.

I read it four years ago, and now I have read it again. It is relaxing, interesting and touching. It is a good novel that I can still have some aftertaste after reading it.

Well, it looks a bit embarrassing. Could you have thought about the price of the pig's feet earlier? I've done it twice.

Why do I feel like all the characters have low IQs? If you want to create distinctive characters, don't all be in terms of IQ. There's also something worse than going too far. Not only will the character not look cute, but it will also make people dislike it. Like Gu Qianqian, it's a bit too much.

There are delicious foods but I can't eat them myself, so why can I give them snacks?

The synopsis of the plot is good, but my thinking was a bit confusing when I was watching it, and it jumped very quickly.

Not even good at characterization? The protagonist is not like the protagonist, and the supporting role feels like the protagonist, but the character is not well portrayed and it feels uncomfortable to watch.

This kind of daily writing is the most test of writing style and the author's life experience! The writer's writing skills are far from perfect, and his life experience is just a blank slate, needless to say! Rich life experience does not necessarily mean good writing skills, but good writing skills must have rich life experience and a full emotional life!

Shen Nong tried the poison and it killed me. It made me suffer from embarrassment. When I met a woman, I told her the system and said she was speechless. What else is the Xuanyuan Sword? Give you one and you will laugh to death.

If it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't click on it. The cover really doesn't suit me, but the book looks okay.

It turns out that you have put it on the shelves a long time ago. If you had known, I would have put it on the shelves earlier. Anyway, you have to have perfect attendance. . .

You can still watch it if there is no system or the system is too cold.

The cute cat-themed coffee is pretty good 😁 The Ergouzi-themed coffee is also good

Before you know it, you've finished the book, and I'm still struggling

As far as I can tell, is there no follow-up to the protagonist's campus competition?

Chinese people are not interested in afternoon tea. There is no such thing as afternoon tea in China. Afternoon tea is introduced from abroad. Readers naturally don't feel it