Valoran's Paradise

The most miserable book I have ever seen, it would be better to cut it up and put it in the palace

I thought I was already miserable, but I didn't expect...

A year later, I came back to read it and found that the author finally gave up. Congratulations, you finally gave up.

There are not many LOL fan books that are qualified storytelling works. It's a very normal story line, just connect everything together. It's quite miserable...

By the way, if the author gives me a headache every day, it wouldn't be so miserable, right?

Talents like the author are role models for our generation!

Is this book released again? I remember it was closed for a long time.

It feels like there is something wrong with the settings. . I really like the story of Valoran, but this setting doesn't sound like a world, and it doesn't give people a sense of immersion. .

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The writing is okay, but could you please stop using punctuation marks? Basically every sentence has this~ very dramatic