Time Travel, Seek Death, Play Escape

There are very few good-looking fate fics. I personally feel great about it. I traveled to Uruk at the beginning, and then became close friends with Youshan. I like this beginning very much. As for why you opened a harem? Aren't you playing FGO just to support your wife? (Ps: As a wife supporter, I feel very involved)

Now that I see it, I don't even understand it. It's written in a mess. The settings I wrote at the beginning are immediately overturned later. I don't have a good grasp of the realm. I have already overcome the tribulation, opened a door and cast a spell, and then collapsed. Does this mean that the door is powerful? I only see how the protagonist is so useless. The characterization is also very poor, as to whether Gilgamesh is a girl. If not, the interaction between the protagonist and him is really disgusting. If you want to be girly, use less words like muscles, otherwise I will really be scared to death by the muscular devil girl in my mind

Although I read it a little confused, (you just didn't understand it at all, okay) cough cough, don't pay attention to the words in the brackets, but it feels so awesome, I don't understand (what) at all.

Friends walk together for life, who comes out of Merlin and who is a dog

To persuade him to quit, there was a previous chapter where Shining was on Enkidu's bed and Pig's Foot saw Enkidu also on the bed. Although nothing happened, it was purely a prank, but the joke was out of character and Pig's Foot behaved like a waste. Pig's Foot and Enkidu had a kiss and a vague relationship before, but Twinkle knew that their relationship was still like this, and their values ​​​​were very different from ordinary people. Forget it, the question is, how does Pig's Foot behave? However, even Enkidu didn't react at all. Enkidu liked pig's feet emotionally and didn't say a word when he saw this scene in the pig's feet. His mind was so crazy that he turned a blind eye, but he still had that kind of thought in his heart. Do you think the reactions of these three people seemed to be abnormal? The plot that was so good and suddenly so disgusting was a failure of the author's imagination. A pig's trotter who can endure a cuckold scene is really a loser. If he doesn't show any decent expression and still gives the other party a reason to excuse himself, haha, he's a loser.

Why are so few people good at writing about two dimensions? The well-written ones are particularly good, similar to novels such as Traveling Through 99 Worlds Simultaneously, Infinite Prophet, and Two-Dimensional Yellow Hair, which are full of jokes and lots of sexy tricks, while the poorly-written ones feel unusually immature and confusing

In the third chapter, the most annoying line in online articles appears, the tree that is beautiful in the forest will be destroyed by the wind 🤫. In fact, in order to be afraid that people would discover my superhuman intelligence, I pretended to be the last in exams since I was a child. After all, I was too strong, and even the wind would destroy me!

I found this book, I am a great person, please praise me!

What I hate most is that I am a trainee who writes books for all kinds of disgusting people, like an ancient giant maggot with a mouth full of shit. Spray everywhere! I'm disgusted by this kind of comment before I even read the book, disgusting! Rua!

The combat facilities collapsed immediately. You can kill gods in the early stage. It's too strong, too strong. How to write it in the later stage? Forced reduction? How to make it round later? . . . And where did you read that Scathach can kill gods? In the Age of Gods, God is the ceiling. When God's spiritual base comes, even the heroic spirits cannot defeat it. It is very difficult to defeat it, let alone the true body. Except for those with similar wandering star forces, it cannot defeat God.

He actually came back to life. It's rare that I can find him back.

When I saw Chapter 27, I felt that there was something wrong with the relationship. I forgot which chapter it came from. Enkidu and Gilgamesh were lying together in the morning. Why were you so sure that the protagonist would come that day, or had they been lying together for more than a day or two? Then I thought, if a person really likes another person, they would not test it in this way; and then in Chapter 27 that I have seen so far, they got together without any explanation? ? ? I can't even describe it here. Isn't it the kind that doesn't feel awkward? At least explain it, or let the misunderstanding continue. It would be too abrupt to confess and accept it all of a sudden. .

The author doesn't know why you always write effeminate characters. Enzidu's gender seems to be of unknown gender. You forced this fanfic to be written as a woman. People avoid characters whose gender is unknown or controversial. And personally I think effeminate is disgusting. This is purely a personal opinion, some people who like to be girly may mistakenly spray it.

Chapter 17, Enkidu is in bed with Gilgamesh. If he really likes him, I don't think he would use this method to test people. Nor does it say that Gilgamesh is a woman. From the perspective of the protagonist, it's like the girl you have had a crush on for a long time gives you some hope, and then one morning you happily go to the girl you have a crush on for a long time and give her the gift you have been preparing for a long time. Gift, but it turned out that she was lying on the girl's bed with your brother, and you didn't explain it after you found it. Think about how you feel. There is no explanation or description of this matter in the next few chapters of the article, as if it was directly revealed. As a result, what was originally quite light and funny ended up becoming very uncomfortable at this point 🐷🔪

You are not a moon man at all! ! !

The protagonist now faces the Qin Universe Empire. What is the outcome?

Go and eat ashes in my favorites!

Do I live longer than the author? In March you said you were back to work... And then you haven't updated it until now. You are updating in preparation for the New Year 😅

Won the Easter match😰

The book was resurrected (temporarily), but Merlin was still glowing and crying.

I can't remember why this book is on my bookshelf

How does this book exist and not exist at the same time?

The setting of the evil god Cthulhu is really terrifying. Anyone can destroy the world and destroy the earth.

Not a buddy? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I'm going to smoke Kong Ming. Let's get some European air.