The Crossed Boundary

First of all, I am a student - so I have no money to support the author. I publish this article here in the hope that it will help the author attract rich people. This is also my first long review. There will be no spoilers about the plot - as for the character names I mentioned, you may have forgotten them halfway through. The overall look and feel of this book is very good, the plot is compact and the daily pleasant atmosphere is well described - the author's writing skills are also highlighted by this. What I like most about this article is the warm daily life (especially Shura Field (×)). However, the author may not have taken care of readers like me on this point - because the plot is too compact and the new world appears very quickly - maybe the daily chapter is too unreadable. About the timeline setting of the Touhou chapter before the establishment of Gensokyo is a highlight, and it also echoes the ending at the end It is very detailed in filling in the pits - except for the emotional scenes. For example, Musiu saw his future self in Greece, so Musiu made a special trip to Greece in the late period. For example, the preview of the two rituals and the treatment of the Sky Realm chapter. But the biggest regret of this article is probably that there is not enough dog food - what I really want to see is the daily dog ​​food and the Shura field! This article has cut off most of the overall sense of urgency of Infinite Streaming, perhaps due to the intermittent daily routine. The experimental main god in the later Sky Realm chapter, the meeting with Japanese style and the exchange of memories are also a highlight. I really didn't expect the Lord's appearance in FATE/ZERO. But later on, the author completely forgot about this harem! The confessions of Katsura Hinata and Mu Xiu in the Date A Live episode are also a highlight. About the author's description of the emotional drama is still a disappointment (dog food, dog food!) This work describes all aspects of divinity very fully, but there are some repeated quotations in the later period - for example, the sentences in the Dead Sea Script are suspicious of the word count of water. A very good novel in all aspects. A rare two-dimensional unlimited streaming masterpiece - even if you haven't watched those episodes, you still have a good experience (maybe it's because you haven't watched them that you won't stick to the original settings.)

How much does the author like teenagers? Or is the author mocking the word juvenile? If there are more than 3 boys in a chapter, can't they use their names?

...... Digging, what did you write? It's only 4 chapters in the fog. I don't even know what you wrote. It's outrageous.

It's very well written, I recommend watching it.

Regarding the appearance of the protagonist Shiki and the protagonist are considered brother and sister = Shiki and the protagonist look similar... Shiki=Takeuchi face=Protagonist Takeuchi face So, the protagonist's appearance=King Da Mao=Okita Souji=Nero=Arquette=Eltruchi=Zhu Yue=Three Valkyrie Sisters=Sparkle=Grey=some version of Rin=Jane of Arc=Black Sadness=Mysterious Heroine Marshal: Saint? ... Many saints? ? Mu Xiu: Just say I am a popular face... Zhu Yue: I found that you look similar to our family!

I want to be RBQ. No one will watch it, right?

The reason why the first volume felt poisonous was because the author's portrayal of the protagonist made the readers lack a sense of security. Here we only evaluate the content of the first volume First of all, in terms of personality, he is a soft-hearted + passive + pleaser type personality. When being unreasonably asked to take a life and death risk, he did not take any proactive action and chose to accommodate himself. Even if it is for the heroine's own good, we should try to persuade her to give up instead of taking her as a burden to take risks. The character of the protagonist gives the impression that it is difficult for him to make the right choice, and sooner or later he will suffer from his character, which makes the reader lack a sense of security. The second is the ability setting. It cannot be said that superpowers are not strong, but if the superpowers are played well, the superpowers themselves are inherently powerful. Either the user is incredibly intelligent and knowledgeable, and has developed his originally weak superpower to an astonishing level. However, the setting of the protagonist's superpowers feels like a defective product. The superpowers in the Forbidden series have many shortcomings, and even have additional shortcomings. Not to mention that it is directly incompatible with all enhancements containing mysterious elements. The computing power limit that was supposed to limit the maximum power has also become a blue bar, and the combat ability reflected is not strong. In addition, the protagonist's intelligence is not outstanding and his knowledge is not high. He just uses his super powers violently. It gives people the feeling that the compatibility between the protagonist and the enhancement of super powers is really bad. It consumes a lot of resources but cannot produce tactical effects, and other ways out are blocked by super powers. Finally, there is the issue of incompatibility between the daily comedy style and the style of the main god Infinite Flow. The underlying logic of the two conflicts. In daily comedy-style works, characters do not need to consider the pros and cons, nor do they need to consider behavioral logic issues, everything is for the sake of comedy. The Lord God Infinite Style uses danger to force the characters to grow. The characters need to weigh the pros and cons and carefully consider how to choose in order to survive. In the early stage, the author used the dangerous coercion mode of the main god style to let the characters adopt a daily funny style of behavior. The readers' insecurities are instantly filled, because daily comedy will not kill people, but the Lord God will really kill them.

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that it is really long-winded. A lot of space is devoted to psychological descriptions and explanations. Except for the necessary ones, some places can really be cut down appropriately and it will be better. Many chapters only say two sentences, do two actions, use two skills, and then explain. This feels like a very serious plot split. It's like watching a half-hour commercial after watching a TV series for three minutes. Do you understand this irritability?

Readers who can't stand this book will basically say goodbye to online articles. . . Authors who are so individual and whose performance is always stable and good-looking can be regarded as the best among the existing authors.

It's okay to give up magic for a superpower, but isn't this magic too comprehensive? As long as all the energy is included in this magic? You can't practice! ! ! Are you afraid that you will be too strong and impose restrictions? Wouldn't it be nice to find an ability that has no side effects? Also, what is the meaning of depletion of calculation power for a person with super power level 4? How many times does a person with great power use it? Is there a setting of depletion of calculation power in the Forbidden City? It looks like a blue bar! That Accelerator had maintained vector control all day long and soon ran out of mana.

Excellent work! As long as you survive the poison in the first volume, the world behind will be very exciting. When I saw Yahweh, I couldn't help but sigh: Princess is awesome!

Why did the protagonist give up the enhancement of the magic side and choose super power enhancement when he knew at the beginning that he was dealing with ghosts?

Build a Yingying Tower and put in a few Yingying monsters every day for me to kill.

It's been so many years that I've learned that Mario is a harem game (˘•ω•˘) Know about Princess Bowser (⌯¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧ Who do you think dropped the gold coins on the road to guide you to hunt him down! ? Why do you think she would rather kidnap the princess and become your enemy? ! Why do mushrooms slide? ! Why do we prepare flags for you as a guiding light! ? It's all because Bowser likes you! ! Mario! (Grabbing Mario by the collar) Do you know what you are doing? ! She kidnapped the princess but did nothing, waiting for you on the other side of the level. Just to see you. And you! ! (Pumping fist) It actually made Bowser cry!

It's so confusing, the plot 😐 is all over the place.

Licking the dog! ! The writing is a bit messy, but the good ones below are how much they cost! !

The protagonist of this book, emmmmm, I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, I have seen the following attributes so far: dog-licking, silk-picking, holy mother, weak, and a way of thinking that is different from ordinary people. If you can't hold on any longer, keep going if you can watch it.

This book review has nothing to do with the book. I even suspected it was Trojan.

I'm a little confused. Since the protagonist wants to practice the domineering power in the Warring States space, why doesn't he just recruit a group of bandits to join the fight for hegemony? He can show his thunder ability, package himself as a god and descend to earth, and then exchange it for a large amount of arms. Japan's Warring States Period The scale of the rebellion in China is considered to be a local provincial rebellion at most. He can bring down the Warring States Period by recruiting a thousand or so people equipped with modern weapons. At the very least, since his force has reached the point where he can leave if he wants, no one can stop him. Why is Yiyuan so cowardly and always under surveillance. I really can't understand the protagonist's way of thinking

I saw the second volume, the middle part of Tian Xia Bu Wu. There were too many poisonous points. I couldn't stand it anymore, but it became more and more uncomfortable to watch. So I read the ending in advance, and I felt that it was as expected. It was a garbage ending, just like the garbage setting in the previous part. The protagonist's dog-like tangled personality gave people an awkward feeling. The protagonist was very cowardly and an indecisive waste.

This is not a dian-in-dian infinite stream. If you don't like manga or don't read two-dimensional comics, you don't need to read it. That's not to say anything else, but if you don't know Katsura Daisy Madoka Yakumo Purple Ceremony Aozaki Aoko Maou Sadao, I guess it won't make much sense for me to watch it myself. As for the otaku flavor and the male protagonist's character, the former cannot be removed, and the latter is just like that. I may have a little bit of what you said in the front, but there are also many people who kill an entire street or even destroy an entire civilization in the back. It should be good for Two-Spined Newt lovers and old readers of comics.

At the beginning, the ordinary woman said a few words and then went to deal with the evil spirits. This is different from the mental guy on the roadside who has no brain. At least the mental guy doesn't have the ability to really run away when he sees a ghost.

There is always one thing, isn't he a black man with direct control? Why did you end up with Fenmao?

It is indeed an old book. Even the first volume is full of poisonous points. Loli originally went to find her brother. You promised to help her find it and then take her to Sanqianyuan's house? Are you going to branch out randomly without finishing the main plot? You said you were looking for Heron Palace, couldn't the bodyguard find it faster than you yourself? He even took Loli to look for him, 666 Also, he was not sure when he would be passively time travelled, and he still delayed going to other worlds to prevent the main world from changing.

What is this? I'm confused.

There are more settings in the early stage than the plot, so even those who are impatient will not watch it.

Although I haven't watched it yet, what are a group of trainees scolding? Reading a book without paying for it and then scolding people?

I feel like the writing is too messy. Before one world ends, it switches to the next one.

Can anyone explain the issue of superpowers? The more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes -_-||

The function of the Sun Staircase in the game is to recombine DNA, right? T is the combination of the ancestor and the leech. What if the ancestor is combined with something else?