Movie Time and Space Superhero

This book is so tiring to read. Reading is relaxing, not depressing.

To be honest, this book is really attractive at the beginning. I was ready to follow it, but when I saw Captain America, he became a fanatical believer! Nima, forget it and give up.

The author's name is correct. He's really a novice 🤫 and the plot is patchworked together. It's better to just go watch the movie. 🤫 You must know that what you write is a fan of the same person.

The first part about World War II is definitely good. If you keep writing, I think this book will be even better. Later on, some random things will come out. From what you read, most of this book is definitely focused on World War II.

It's not easy to find a Zhengyi novel with a positive outlook on life, but what is the author writing about? The crisis that is about to be experienced is constantly reiterated, but the protagonist described by the author does not have the strength to solve the crisis at all. At least the words described by the author do not reflect the strength of the protagonist at all. . From the reader's perspective, the protagonist is always deflated and abused. I really admire the author, who is not good at writing cool and refreshing things, but still insists on writing so many words. From when I saw the protagonist's comrade-in-arms Wall Street Tiger Merry being assassinated by Lucifer, this book only produced one exciting point, that is, the protagonist used Dormammu to devour the worlds of heaven and hell. Then the book never felt any better. The author has absolutely no ability to describe the cool points. It is recommended that the author attend training and learn more. Why do readers always think that the scenes at the beginning of D-Day and Saving Private Ryan are good-looking? That's because the main line here is clear and the goal is clear. The protagonist has only one goal, which is to complete this task and become stronger. There is no repeated emphasis on the crisis of God of War Ares, no crisis of heaven and hell, no mention of the crisis of Dormammu at the same time, and no mention of Thanos, Biohazard, Hulk, or Transformers crisis again and again. . . Author, didn't your editor tell you not to plant so many targets at the same time? When you wrote this, were you sure you could handle so many lines at the same time? ? ? This is why your book did not do well and was criticized. This book of yours has been completely ruined by you. There are so many characters that there is no way to change them. I suggest that the author should rewrite it as a eunuch. The justice superhero genre is still a good theme. But author, please don't open multiple lines and multiple targets at the same time. . You can completely deal with it in sections. Focus on the current goal and wait until this goal is completed before starting the next goal. That's fine. . Instead of writing in a mess like you do now, with so many goals appearing at the same time. You can't control it at all.

I like this book very much. The style of the book is quite new, and the heroine also loves it. It's just that the book went a little off track starting from Hell Detective. The subsequent settings of Heaven and Hell are also very poisonous, and so is Captain America. It's okay to have different positions, but it's not necessary to stand completely in Heaven. The Captain also has a brain, and I hope the author can bring it back later. After all, by the time of the Avengers, I met the Captain after decades, and the protagonist was already 🐮. Many readers also gave up because they didn't survive the poisonous pit mentioned above. I think the recommendation votes didn't have much success from that point on. After the update, half of the book collapsed. I thought this book would be a hit, but now I can't stand it. The strength system is too messy, and the timeline is written too early. Now I write about returning to China. Foreigners will either go to heaven or hell after death, but as for the Chinese, Chinese and Western beliefs are completely different. Wouldn't there be some kind of heaven and earth? How can we fill this hole? It can't be rounded up. I hope the author will finish this chapter soon and stop writing about China. The layout of this book really cannot be added, otherwise it will be over. I suggest that the author speed up the time and write about Marvel or DC heroes. Many cities in comics are fictitious. There is no need to just write about New York. Let the protagonist go to those cities and partner with a certain partner to deal with the bad guys who want to cause trouble. There are many stories to write. I have written so many words, and I don't know if the author can read it. If you do, please let me know. I'll say it again, this book is really a pity and a pity.

I just don't understand. Is it necessary to write about someone who nine out of ten people from Marvel admire and kneels down and licks Captain America? Sorry, I'm not very fond of foreigners. How should I put it, there are yellow-skinned monkeys and the like.

This book is not about ordinary chaos! ! ! 1. Pig's Knuckle obviously has a system, but he always doubts this and that. So, is your power given by the system? Scientific? 2. Pig's foot is like a fool. In the previous plot, it was written that Pig's foot knows the plot, but in the end, he randomly appears in hell and heaven. Pig's foot feels that the world is going to be destroyed. Haha, Transformers have them, so the Emperor of the Universe must also have Primordial God. Don't you know the plot? The world is going to be destroyed, so how will the captain survive 70 years later? 3. The original character creation in the movie is garbage! Please read the original work carefully, okay? If you use someone else's plot and characters and change them all, isn't this just selling someone else's story? This book is just for fun, I won't spend money to read it.

I guess at least half of the people who abandoned the book abandoned it after reading Hell Detective like me.

The book starts off very well. But when you get to London it starts to rubbish. As soon as he arrived in London, he left the goddess behind and started working on The Exorcist. After finally finishing in London, he went to the Far East. Then the change in experience points caused the protagonist to level up too quickly, and a nondescript mental limit was added. I was really speechless when I lost the gun later. The protagonist developed from an okay character to a middle-class character. It is also said that close combat is more efficient, which is really more and more out of touch with World War II. Will there really be a hand-tearing devil next time? In fact, I think the biggest problem with this book is that the power system improves too quickly. The author wanted the protagonist to be able to level up quickly, but the protagonist upgraded too quickly and had too much power to surpass ordinary people. As a result, there was nothing to write about, or people were too lazy to read it. You see, when the protagonist was a soldier in the beginning, no one said you were stupid, but later on, the protagonist has made everyone stronger because there is no suspense and excitement. I suggest that the author should slow down the protagonist's power improvement. Even if the superhero collision can only be played as an assistant, it will still be very interesting.

I think it's pretty good. I'll subscribe to it once it's on the shelves. It's much better than the pen stuff recommended on Qidian's homepage. It's fantasy every day, and it's about fighting monsters and upgrading. Do these birdies at Qidian think readers are still stuck in 2001? The concept is novel, the intention is innovative, and the writing style is even acceptable. Look at the little butterfly in the plane. Some people say it is good for primary school students' compositions. The author needs to consolidate several story lines in this article first, and don't open too much, which is difficult to control.

This book is the worst time I have ever seen Gu Yi get hacked. . Can't Ancient One defeat Ares, the God of War? ? ? ? ? As the Ancient One who defeated Mephisto and sent away Dormammu, what is Greek mythology? ? Unless it's Sithorne or the Ancient One who is a member of the Celestials, there really aren't many gods on earth who can beat the Ancient One. Just because Gu Yi was cut into that horrible shape in the movie does not mean that Gu Yi really has that much ability. What is Ares? Can you hold the time stone?

You've been kneeling for too long and you can't get up, right? Or do you like to lick, or you can only lick?

The original work disguised as a fan has changed the Marvel world beyond recognition. It is simply force-feeding the truth. The reader retention rate is less than 10%, which means that more than 90% of the readers have been poisoned by you.

It might as well be written as traveling into each movie world. If you mix the movie worlds together like this, it will be difficult to reconcile the contradictions between the movie worlds, such as the time period where the characters are located and the background of the world. It is too difficult to connect them together without any flaws. A novel with flaws will cause drama when you read it, and you will feel very awkward. For example, Transformers can rub Iron Man casually, even if he is equipped with Hulkbuster armor. For example, the world background of the movie Hellraiser is from the 20th to the 21st century. It is impossible to live in the same time period as Wonder Woman who just left the island. Flaws like this are really awkward to see.

I really can't stand it anymore, so I say goodbye.

Nowadays, Internet articles seem to be trapped in a strange circle! Either I try my best to find all kinds of ideas, as if someone else has written this, I must be different from him (this does not refer to the plot, but the setting and so on). Regardless of whether I am so vicious or not, I am going to make something new anyway!        ，，，！ Why are you so awesome! Marvel itself has released a mutant list! Because it's so hard to write that I can't read it! Good guy! These beautiful comics who write online articles are a mess. If you had the writing skills, you wouldn't come here to write online articles! Is there anything complicated about your Majesty's spare life? No! Upgrade the old routine to fight monsters, add a plug-in for pig's feet, and only use two maps! Why is it so popular? The humanistic narrative plot is awesome! It's like trying to rub whatever's in the box now! Yes! It's a bit creative and can attract people to take a look. The starting point is not to charge for the first chapter. People will run away after seeing a few pictures! What's the use? Basic skills are not good! Do you write online articles just because you have an idea in your head? I won't starve you to death!

The protagonist is a piece of rubbish. Anyone who can hypnotize can get rid of the protagonist. He has traveled through the mixed world of Marvel and DC, and has met other plot characters. He is still doubting this and that, whether it really exists, and has never believed in the existence of those things. He is escaping from reality. At this time, as long as someone hypnotizes him, telling him that this is not true, it is just your fantasy, and at the same time saying that this is true, even the movie characters have appeared, why is it not true? Doing this can drive this trash protagonist crazy and kill him. What a trash, trash protagonist.

It's not easy. I finally found another one that is based on foreign movies. Now I just search all the worlds and all the worlds. Almost all the films and TV shows are about martial arts and fantasy. The key is that they are all in the same routine. I almost vomited after reading them.

I started to get crazy when I wrote The Exorcist, and I found that many young writers have this problem. The stories are written one by one, and several story lines are not carried out at the same time. I don't have the ability to control it. A complete mess

The protagonist is just a licking dog! Licking the male protagonist🤑

I've read over a hundred chapters and it's so confusing. Wonder Woman, Captain America, Constantine, all kinds of hodgepodge! It's a bit tiring to watch!

This protagonist is such a loser. He can develop quickly even if he uses a plug-in to fight guerrillas on his own! ! ! !

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the author killed himself.

The garbage pig's feet don't sneak into the battlefield quickly to collect energy 😥 to improve your abilities! Still running around, where can I collect energy when the war is over?

It's outrageous. Marvel and DC can actually do it together with Taking the Tiger Mountain. I'm really a dj.

It's a hodgepodge of free chapters that are hard to finish. Constantine is starting to collapse. Combat Power FW Goldfinger FW characters can't change much of the plot. It's better to watch the original drama if you just follow the plot. . . The shortcomings outweigh the creativity.

The first two volumes are still readable, but after the mixed DC, it started to become extremely toxic, and then forced to follow the plot, knowing what was going to happen without warning, and then blaming yourself after the death of a comrade, which is very disgusting.

Does anyone have a war movie novel with a similar beginning to this one? I beg you, the book is so dead. 😭

The opening chapter is wonderful, hooking up with DC instantly pulls the strings