Wu Linshen Dian

It looks simple and bright, without too many bugs, and the plot is quite attractive. However, the number of words in the update is too few, and it is not fat enough, so I can only save it and read it slowly when it becomes fatter! Come on, author!

Duan You went on an expedition,————. For the book written by Duan You, please support it first and then read it!

This book is quite like an old man and a poor nun. If time passes, it will definitely become a big hit. Ami Tofu, so good and so happy!

How to say it? After reading fifty chapters, the author's condition is getting better and better. At the beginning, there was still a sense of rawness and the character dialogue was childish. The protagonist's life experience, martial arts training, apprenticeship, sect competition, and training down the mountain. No matter how you look at it, you have a sense of seeing an online game, step by step, and upgrade step by step. The author seems to have become more proficient at the end, although the plot is still very routine, with shadows of martial arts, both parents die, a treasure is found on a cliff, the grandfather appears, and he has a Hunyuan body, just in time to practice martial arts. Obtain the divine sword, meet an expert, bow to the master, and pets will follow. This is a plot I watched four or five years ago. However, I see that the author seems to have his own innovations in the back, and as the author's first book, it is not easy to write like this. It must be above the level of a newcomer! After all, no one is oblivious to what is said. On a side note, Golden Finger appeared a little late. This book can be used as a writing practice. Don't worry too much about your grades. Writing about one million words will make a big difference. For those of us with average talent, persistence is the most important thing. Let's encourage each other! There is no way to stay in the book list of the gods.