The Extraordinary Journey of American Comics

After reading Chapter 8, I was immediately persuaded to quit. The system training was so strong that it was not enough for Daredevil to practice. I vomited. The chapter still showed that it had been modified...

Some suggestions for new readers in the future The values ​​​​of this book are relatively ideal and artistic, similar to the values ​​​​of the master in the "Batman" series of games who do not kill anyone. It is not very suitable for Taoist friends who have seen the three thousand worlds, especially for Taoist friends who agree with the existence of the law of the dark forest: "If people don't offend me, I won't offend others. If people offend me, I will kill you." However, the concept of this book is considered novel, and there is no problem with it being a high-quality product, but it may not be as good as Conferred God. However, this book is biased toward the later stages. In the early stages, the author may have had problems with his penmanship, and the writing was a bit reluctant. But overall, it's probably a good book. However, I'm sorry, I am a person accustomed to the laws of the dark forest. To avoid being too deeply poisoned, I would like to sneak away first as a courtesy. I would like to send you a recommendation ticket to express my apology.

Batman's character and other DC characters' characters are only written in three parts. The reason why there is only one Batman in Gotham is because the city has long been corrupted. Before Batman came out to do activities, the city was already a city of crime, and Batman also has a devil in his heart. It was his non-killing principle that prevented him from turning into a devil. There are some things that he can't take back after the first time. Gradually, he became the biggest devil in the city. There is also the character of the villain, which is written too one-sided.

I just read Chapter 32 and found that the battle scenes written by the author were a bit gamified. In the game, being hit by an ice arrow will cause blood loss and slowdown. In reality, hypothermia and injury may cause ordinary people to lose their combat effectiveness. Being hit by a fire spell may also cause permanent burns. This is Master, otherwise it would be so difficult to defeat the mobs, it would be better to use a gun.

The ability system at the beginning is written in a messy manner, making it confusing to read. After working hard for two years with a cheat, I have just reached the threshold of being a professional athlete. In the world of Marvel, Coulson can beat you to death, and you are still a jerk.

In addition, the idea of ​​Harley Quinn being the heroine is so stupid, it seems to be the result of impulse after watching a movie or animation. Harley Quinn's character is impossible to fall in love with normally, unless you want to make the relationship line as messy as Lord and Catwoman. If you want to have a serious love story, you either have to be crazy or Harley is normal. If the protagonist's crazy twist is too great, you can't handle it. If Harley is normal, she will lose all the charm of the character. So if you look at the movies and comics, except for her entanglement with the Joker, Harley has at most developed into sex partners with other men. It would be best for this character to be like Black Cat, fall in love vigorously and then break up and return to the Marvel Universe. There will be occasional interactions in the future.

Rubbish, giving away girls in various ways, and then becoming single himself. At the end of the article, he didn't even get a woman, and started to find a scumbag to fall in love with. Even Wonder Woman gave it to Captain America, it was so disgusting. This has a woolly meaning in American life.

When I saw Chapter 9, I was a little disappointed. Pig's Foot came to New York for three months and started to do chivalry. The key is, the strength of this pig's foot is really unbearable. There is a mage legendary hero card nearby, and the body reaches the limit of the human body. Then the magic of Pig's Foot was chopped into pieces by a knife, haha

I have read more than 70 chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not online. In the Marvel world, I often make stupid mistakes for small things. For example, I don't practice because I hate priests. My companions are injured and have no milk. I don't know that life is the first priority. I don't use protection for a little output.

It's too troublesome to write. There's a lot of verbosity in it. If you don't do it, who will?

To be honest, if I were the author, I would definitely choose the reader named Sanqianyi. He writes so badly and still actively interacts with the author because of his support. It is simply true love. I don't know how to describe this book as boring. The protagonist has a lot of hero cards and skills. In the end, it is too cool but not cool, and it is powerful but not powerful. I even suspected that it was written by a Blizzard fan.

Isn't this Master too scumbag? Although there is an energy level setting, one of Master's Olympiad Impacts has about the same effect as swinging a stick. This is too much to look down on Master! When dealing with ordinary people, shouldn't they be injured if scratched and killed if touched? To deal with a few street gangsters, he actually turned into a melee mage. . . Shouldn't one be killed by a skewer of ice arrows, and a group of people should be frozen to death by frost nova aoe? If spells can't kill ordinary people, they might as well play as warriors 😵

I read Chapter 7.8, But the protagonist drew a lot of cards, hundreds of them. I saw a few skill cards and several hero cards. Can you tell me what the other cards are? And the hero cards are a bit too easy to draw. The hero card setting is also very strange. The hero proficiency ABCDF is strengthened. There is also a certain amount of secret energy to unlock those hero abilities. So why do you need proficiency? Isn't it embarrassing? The proficiency is not the same as not having a secret ability. The hero card also carries the knowledge and skills of the hero, so why do you need a skill card? One Kadgar is not enough for you to learn. Your magic does not come from learning and practicing. Wouldn't it be better to have a skill card and then practice proficiency? This point made me particularly uncomfortable when reading this book. You can't set the hero card to have special talents. Others can be trained by skill cards. Or you can set it as a hero template to bring the talents, skills, and knowledge of this hero. But you have to learn and practice to upgrade the hero yourself. You can understand it at a glance and don't need to distinguish this from that

The protagonist's IQ makes people feel like a primary school student. There's nothing interesting to watch. Don't come in and try the poison.

At least I can find a niche for each superhero and words that fit their personality.

Except for a few famous events, it is best not to use the world view of comic plots. It is too big even Marvel itself can't control it, let alone you. And the vast majority of readers fall into the trap of movies, which are too complex and difficult for many people to understand. Big events are also too closely connected, lacking obvious main lines and daily adjustments. In the middle and later stages, it feels like a boring online game with constant monster spawning and upgrades.

After writing so much, it's still LV1, which shows that the author's writing skills are a novice!

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Water, the main reason is that the pace is too slow. The protagonist thinks he is weak. He is still wandering around. It is too uncomfortable to watch.

To be honest, Yinyi's experience and character creation skills need to be improved. First of all, Zheng Xian, who can become a high-ranking official, will not have such low IQ and EQ that he would ask a native American in front of the Avengers whether he would help China or the United States in a fight, even if he has some Chinese ancestry. Secondly, Ultron, a robot, would not tremble in fear when seeing Magneto, unless he specifically added a trembling function to himself. In the end, Magneto is a veteran revolutionary rebel who started engaging in terrorist activities, not a retired citizen. You won't be upset just because you lost once, and you won't be sour all the time.

In current Marvel novels, the author's writing of SHIELD is so awesome! As soon as the protagonist shows up, he will immediately find out and come to check the water meter. I just want to ask his father, Hydra, if SHIELD is so awesome? The system is not high-end enough, or the protagonist is too mentally retarded. Whenever I see the protagonist being discovered as soon as he bubbles up, there is a feeling that the protagonist is nothing more than that.

After reading the free part, to be honest, I was persuaded to quit. Whether the online article is good or not all depends on whether the first part is attractive. From the beginning, I felt that it was very perfunctory or the writing was problematic. The details were very poor. Such an awesome system was briefly described, the details of the system were described in one stroke, and the characters worked hard, and most of them were self-constructed plots. The problem is that the plot problems are also huge. Is it so easy to gain trust between people? There are a lot of flaws, and it's really not to your liking anyway.

I just read Chapter 8, and I just said, first check the protagonist's brain before he is exercising his abilities or drawing any cards. I think the protagonist's IQ may be no different from that of a primary school student.

Can you be bolder when writing books and stop licking those foreign superheroes? You've already written a book, why are you still licking them?

A real mage is not comparable to the protagonist, a fake mage who plays games with the system. Real mage's mental power is very powerful. Even if they don't use magic, their powerful mental power can control ordinary mortals. Some mages will have their body gene locks broken when they reach Legend and become demigods, while the protagonist is just a player playing Tencent games. Once the system is lost, the protagonist is essentially an ordinary person.

It's too licking. It licks all kinds of heroes unconditionally. Everyone can boss around and act like a dog to the protagonist. I haven't read the rest, but from the first few chapters, I think I am acting like a dog for S. H. I. E. L. D. Those who can't accept it should not read it. After reading about twenty chapters, I was poisoned and felt very uncomfortable.

After reading more than a dozen chapters... The result... Where are the Templars? Although they are both Blizzard, from the cover to the introduction, everything you talk about is StarCraft, and then you end up with Warcraft?

The author is a virgin, her hands are funny🙄🙄🙄

It's so messy, I admire you for being able to write so many chapters.

The introduction is all fake. It will take more than 580 chapters for Battleship to come out, and it is almost finished.