Underworld Ghost House

Haha Mumu, your protagonist is the same as mine! They are all dark-hearted and thick-skinned😁😁😁

The content is so funny, just right for my taste. Oh, I like it so much~ The author will update it soon

I've read two chapters, and the setting is quite novel. The writing style is funny and cheerful, which is quite good. However, the descriptions in some places could be more detailed and a little out of the ordinary. But after reading more and getting used to it, you can understand it. Come on~

Haha, it's so enjoyable, so awesome!

The author's story is well conceived and developmental. But he is not good at writing skills. Some plots are vague and lack rationality (why are the people of the Mirror Moon Sect so sure that the young man must have made a contract with the black snake and then recruit a bunch of children to call the sect? If it is said that the senior brother found out through investigating the black snake, then why are they Why should we guess whether it was done by an expert or a person from the mountain? ) The subsequent dialogue between the village chief and the heroine was not natural enough, and the heroine's reaction was not accurately written. This can be derived from the imagined scenario, and the village chief's subsequent lament really did not fit the plot setting. Also, the progress in the scene where I just met the crazy old man jumped a little too fast. These are incoherent articles caused by impatience. If I read it correctly, this should be a novel with fantasy elements, but why is it not called magic but martial arts? The article should be set in the ancient world. Arabic numerals are used, but why do the characters in it still use such an exotic catchphrase as kawaii? It feels like we are on the wrong set to say that Cao Cao Cao Cao reveals the historical words like this. The repeated use of the word "little sister" for several girls or their language expressions will seem a bit poor and redundant, but there is no need to add funny language and modern narration. After summarizing the whole story, the only impression I have on the heroine is that she is black and strong. It is recommended to be specific and rich in diversity when constructing character images. The language and communication of the characters are not mature enough, and it feels a bit artificial. The portrayal of the core character image is not clear enough. There is also a lack of reasons for cultivating immortality. The above are some of the detailed problems that I know about. But the overall feeling of the book is that it has a certain appeal in reading. The arrangement of the plot is neither fast nor slow, and there are some highlights from time to time (such as the scene where the crazy old man peeks at the bath), and it is smooth and not difficult to understand. The skeleton outline is also carefully conceived. After the above optimization, I think it is a qualified and competitive online article!

Mu Mu Mu Mu Mu, Supernatural is so good to watch, but I didn't even dare to go to the toilet after watching it, hey

Suddenly when I saw this, I realized that the heroine is a soul-transporter. Shouldn't such flexibility belong to the original owner of the original world? What does that have to do with the little fat girl? What does the heroine's soul in the 21st century have to do with the underworld of another world? Not a family, right?

Believe in the hero, come on, believe in your ability, and you will protect everything.

The chapters in the novel seem to have no connection with each other, but in fact, each chapter is related to each other and connected with each other.

It seems very profound at first sight, but it is not that difficult to understand when you read the main text.

Although there are not many of this theme, each one has its own characteristics and will not make people feel outdated. There are still many innovative places.

Is it a fantasy and supernatural thing 😜

Looks good! ! Not good enough, too thin.

Come on Mumu↖(^ω^)↗The title of the book is very interesting😊

All ordered, come on, it looks good (❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

I have always liked reading supernatural novels, but this one made my eyes light up. Thank you to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง