The Best Loser Sheng Beloved Concubine

###Counterattack##sweetpet# Plot review: Sweet + Pet, suitable for eating some sweets in leisure time. This book is easy to read and the writing is smooth. The setting of the good-for-nothing heroine is quite attractive to readers. Books in which the good-for-nothing is the protagonist will definitely be explosive in the end, and counterattacks are quite to my liking. Writing: Overall, the writing is quite good. Some small suggestions that I would like to make after reading, which can be used as reference: Some scene descriptions and character costumes in the article need to be refined in various aspects. The emotional aspect also needs more thought and consideration. Some places may be written too quickly, which will make readers feel that the inner emotions of the characters develop too quickly and fail to resonate with readers. #It's not easy for novice writers. I have collected my works by following Da Da Da and looking forward to the follow-up development~# Recommendation index:☆☆☆ Keep up the good work Da Da! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

I liked this genre a lot when I was reading books in the early days, but I haven't read this style in a long time. I'll tell you my feelings after reading a little bit. The plot progresses a little faster, and the turns are more abrupt. For example, the appearance of the princess or the princess, although it points out the origin of the male protagonist, is a bit blunt. The description is not detailed enough, there are many language conflicts, but the psychological description is not delicate enough. Sometimes describing the protagonist does not necessarily need to blindly portray the psychology of the protagonist, the onlookers and the performance of body movements. , The portrayal of the people around the character is a foil to the character itself, and the description of the environment is not adequate The plot is a bit old-fashioned, it is no longer popular for losers to shout in front of the protagonist and be rejected by everyone around him It is recommended that the supporting characters should not be too mask-like, everyone has a different personality, in good works different supporting characters get along with the heroine and the heroine They all have different performances, and you can try side descriptions appropriately; for character conflicts, it is recommended to consider changing the plot. For example, when the princess sees the heroine, she can show that she is shocked first, and then say disdainfully: "It's just that." After all, the identity of the princess is destined to be arrogant, and at the same time, unexpectedly, a disfigured woman lives in the sweetheart's house (of course, this is to see I'm just giving an example of what kind of character the princess is shaped by the environment she lives in. If you want to show that the princess is kind-hearted, you can put a tangled little expression on the princess after "but that's it" to show that the princess is embarrassed about her unbridled words and is afraid of hurting others) But it can be seen that the author is still very careful, but is limited to writing style and experience, come on.

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Wouldn't it feel better if the reason for the male protagonist's appearance was changed to passing by instead of being entrusted by the heroine's grandfather? 😰 Collection and investment 😁

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It's really wonderful. . I feel like I finished reading the newly updated chapters in one go. . The meaning is still not finished. . . . .

Ask, does it have a readership?

The character explosion grabbed 50 experience points, haha.

The author just follows his own ideas. I like your setting.

I just like the male protagonist, I just watch him when I come up, ah ah

After raising it for a while, I found that it was still not raised long enough. I will come back after a while.

I just want to say that since everyone wants to read this book, support it no matter what, but why does the author write so little and so short every time?

A friend told me what the contribution points of this book club are for?

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The author's writing style is sophisticated and his ideas are ingenious. It is a good book. You should hide it first to respect it and then read it after you have fattened it up.

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What is the pen name of the author Ji?