The Cultivator’s Snack Expert

... I really can't help but want to express my thoughts... The author's creativity is very attractive. At least there are many plots in the book that make me very uncomfortable, but I still can't help but follow it. In fact, the plot is good, but the character creation is really a failure... It's not a failure in one or two characters, but almost all the characters make people feel very uncomfortable... Or, are they fake? I always feel that the characters in this book are actually living in fairy tales... The bad guys are controlled by unpredictable means, and they turn around and take revenge regardless of their own safety. However, from the text, I don't feel how hard-headed and unafraid of death they are, but what they do can make people praise them... They even refuse to give in after being hurt... And Mu Ji, the author wants to portray him as a cunning and cunning bad guy, right? But I just feel that this is a bad guy with a serious lack of brains... Emmm... The person who also wants to express his shrewdness but only makes people feel that he is not smart enough is the scumbag ex-husband... And the heroine's mother. I feel that she despises girls and is not very patriarchal. Instead, it always gives people a feeling of hypocrisy, or... Fake? While she loves her daughter, she occasionally cares a few words to express that she is a biological mother and cares a lot about her son. In fact, even if something happens to her son, it will not affect her eating, drinking and playing... Are travel costs so low? Jiang Xue... His various behaviors towards the heroine are inexplicable, I think he is acting coquettishly towards his mother... But I think many of his actions are clearly disrespectful to the elders... Mainly, I can't figure out the intention... It's so baffling... It's not like a son to his mother... And the heroine... I agree with a certain comment, the outlook is very strange... The personality is also very strange and contradictory... It feels like killing people in order to make the heroine kill, in order to make the heroine kind and kind, the heroine's character... Feels like It was forced to go where the author needed it... But he put this forced character in the article, which seemed very out of place... The heroine let go of many hidden dangers, but she thought she was righteous... I just felt that the heroine put herself in the position of a judge... Or a higher law maker, but she still insisted on a law-abiding image... In short, the creativity is very good, the plot is great, but the character creation feels very childish... I hope the author's writing will get better and better!

Want to write a fanfic Xue Cheng opened his eyes drowsily, am I not in the Linglong World? This is it? The first sight is a modern hospital. The doctor and nurse were holding the broken instruments and looked slightly panicked when they saw her waking up. Xue Cheng ignored them and quickly opened his magic eyes. With her cultivation as the God Emperor, she was very good at using the Demonic Eyes. The result is that this world is actually the earth. But it's different from the small world she was born into. The divine sense cultivated by the God Emperor cannot detect all of this earth. It seems that it's not that simple here. The doctor looked a little nervous when he saw Xue Cheng wake up. He said, "Miss, are you okay?" Hearing the title of miss, Xue Cheng, who is over 3,000 years old, was really a little confused. Although cultivation has not lasted for many years, Xuecheng still had some insights and fell into an epiphany for a while. The little spiritual energy left on the earth rushed towards Xuecheng's position in the hospital. Voice of the Great Dao... Although there is no breakthrough, the realm of Xuecheng's gods has become more stable. When Xuecheng had his epiphany, auspicious visions appeared throughout the hospital. All the patients inside, no matter what kind of disease they had, have recovered. Those who are not sick also feel that their whole bodies are warm and full of strength. Fortunately, Qiankun Blue World is still with me.

Does anyone dislike the Wu sisters? Everyone is talking about Jiang Xue. Her mother and brother are annoying. I think I hate Wu Huang the most. I don't know what the significance of this character's appearance is? He kept causing trouble for Xuecheng and asked Xuecheng to follow behind to solve the problem.

When will the marriage line with the elf be lifted? Every time I see it, I want to vomit 😰🤐 It's not a pedophile! Who would have an affair with someone younger than their own child?

I update it every day, 2,000 words, and many people have left messages saying that it is not easy to be a TG without earning full attendance, haha! I have to learn from you and persevere to the end, and the clouds will clear and the moon will shine! Finally, I wish your works are prosperous and all your wishes come true in 2019!

Dear, when can the master and son come out to play? All the flowers I have been waiting for have faded.

I really hope someone (who is malicious towards the heroine) can secretly kill the heroine's mother and brother

Is this one without a male protagonist? (´･ᆺ･`) It would be nice if there was no male protagonist (๑‾ ꇴ ‾๑). The comment section made me confused.

There is no problem that Linglong snacks cannot solve. If there is, then have another one...

If you brag too much, the story will appear false. If you don't write that her master can burn down the world, it would be fine. If you don't write about Pangu, it would be fine. No matter how you write about the formation, it won't go too far. But writing about Pangu is too fake.