The Sword Breaks the Country

Wow, it's finally finished. Spread the flowers*^O^* Thank you to the author for creating such a good book. I feel very strongly about martial arts recently while playing Taiwu Picture Scroll and listening to the novel! The twist at the end is a bit magical. It would be better if we can dig deep and find new ways to think about it and write so many words. Come on, author, I'll be sure to follow up when I feel like publishing a sequel!

Martial arts is not easy, finishing the novel is even harder!

Forehead? Is this book a fiction? Local natives! I thought he was an outsider.

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Eight hundred thousand, keep up the good work 👍

[Reward] If you have a fish reward, hey, write a book with a starting price of 1,000,000 coins. This book is so well written, so I'll give you a reward. I hope the follow-up will be more exciting!

Comrades who feel poisonous at the beginning, your poison point is too low, you need to read this book several times to receive training 🤭. I really almost gave up during the decisive battle at Huashan. In the past few years, writers have been talking about the abuse of protagonists. They are probably children who have never experienced life. I think that only by being constantly beaten by life can I feel a sense of empathy. However, I am probably one of the few with a shaky personality. Come on, author! By the way, the more I read this book, the more I feel like I am reading a martial arts version of Steelmaking.

Let's read the introduction first. It's okay to write about martial arts, but the protagonist has no memory of past lives and is basically a native. There is no golden finger, so the sense of immersion is inherently lower than others. Moreover, when writing about martial arts, he withdraws from such magical things as astrology, horoscopes and destiny. Basically, at least half of the people who clicked on this book were dissuaded!

It is well written and worth reading in its entirety

The writing is orderly and fresh.

Reply to Xiaomao: After reading the book in general, I feel that there is a more prominent problem: the opening pace is too slow. Your category is historical martial arts, but the formations are not revealed until Chapter 8, and the existence of boxing is only glimpsed in Chapter 14. This long transitional chapter is all about the situation of the Fang family and the protagonist. It focuses on describing the background of the times and trying to incorporate historical events. There is no trace of martial arts in this society. There is a sense of fragmentation. The whole thing feels like a historical novel rather than martial arts. Then you focus the narrative on the group portraits, and do not develop the plot from the perspective of the protagonist, and do not leave room for the protagonist's inner activities and exchange of feelings with the readers. As a result, the readers cannot establish a close connection with the protagonist immediately, so they will not pay attention to his experiences. The stickiness of the article is not high, and they will impatiently turn a few pages without seeing what they want to see, such as the martial arts plot, and then run away. This is a matter of the sense of substitution. The perspective and method of telling, the relaxation of the rhythm, and the creation of the environment and atmosphere will all affect it, so you should pay attention to it.

I haven't been to the starting point for so many days. It's all on the shelves. Congratulations.

This experience value is not enough. It made me feel uncomfortable holding it in. Now I'm fine. I've finally come forward. Let's take a seat here first.

The number of reading days on my Qidian account has reached 5,000. Please leave a name to commemorate it.

Without Liu Bowen's words, it wouldn't be that uncomfortable, and the gap is not that big. If you want to read it, at least skip the prologue.

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What everyone said is not poisonous at all. It's just that the way of writing one story after another is very boring. When I go back to my hometown, I will tell one story on the left and the other on the right. Upgrading and hunting for treasures is just a side story. I really can't get the energy to read it.

The author's profound knowledge puts his colleagues to shame, so I came here to learn from him!

I'm just passing by. I heard that the author is very considerate, so I'll give you my recommendation today. I checked the word count and collected it first! I really can't bear to wait for the second update, and I'm tortured by the second update! ! !

Give it some water! Get some sleep? Six words

Hey sister, Happy New Year and a prosperous Year of the Dog

After writing a few chapters, the author knew why he still insisted on abusing the protagonist after losing fans so seriously. Maybe the author didn't think it was abusive, but I felt very depressed, and I didn't feel the unyielding and resistance in the depression. I only felt helpless and struggling to survive, which was uncomfortable.

The beginning is too vicious, not in the sense that it abuses the protagonist, but in that the protagonist's situation changes too suddenly: one second he was showing off in front of Miss Jie, the next second he was in prison, half-killed by a passerby villain before, and then exterminated and survived... The plot's transitions were too stiff, making it really uncomfortable to read. You are not Martin, and rashly engaging in plot twists like this will only poison people. Friendly advice.

Hey sister, two votes for you, 🙂🙂🙂 can you show me "One Sword to Become a Buddha", it's so miserable

How about my picture 🤓

Such a good book, why not reward it?

I don't understand why there is something strange when I hear Jie Ling. He is just a stranger. He just talked once and that's it. What the hell. The reason why today's martial arts movies are unsustainable is that there are always many inexplicable plots and inexplicable women, making the protagonist instantly become an idiot.

Come on, author! It's really rare to see people without plug-ins these days.

It is recommended that you start reading from Chapter 10...