The Thunder God Emperor

It feels great in the front, but not so good in the back. It feels like the protagonist is like a gift boy, trying to get a bunch of good things by himself, then giving them to others, and drinking some soup himself. The protagonist feels like a piece of shit who can be bullied by old monsters.

I can't understand why the prince wants to take your magic medicine and end your path to immortality and destroy your whole family's hopes! You won't kill? He actually gave me a magic spell! What is a person? Holy Mother...

Li Yunlong, you have also traveled through time, where is Chu Yunfei! The text is a bit confusing and the sense of substitution is poor.

The early stage was good, the orthodox immortal cultivation novels, but when it came to the Blood Spirit World, it collapsed into a complete mess, and the ungratefulness did not escape. Although the starting point novels are diverse, they are still more righteous on the surface, and it is really difficult to bring them in. A few suggestions: 1. The names of the protagonists, Li Yunlong and Hu Yifei, have been stereotyped by film and television dramas. You can't beat their 2 cross-border upgrades too fast with one book. You won't be able to read Buddha in the future. It's just like you won 100 million in the lottery now. Life has lost its ups and downs and lacks introduction. (Although Adventure in the early stage also won the lottery, it can't be used. It's the same as not winning, so in the early stage It's more fun to watch), 3 A salty fish can still show off after being turned over, and it's human nature to return home in glory. It's really poisonous if you kill Xuan Tian or you have too few scenes. 4 I found your book from the starting point. I saw it on a pirated website. I owe you a full order. See you in the next book. If it's good, I'll order it all and add the helmsman.

Yi Yijiu(｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much

Reading your novel really didn't exhaust me to death. I'm not saying that the writing is bad. In fact, I feel it's pretty good. But can your writing be smoother? It's really tiring to read. It's more tiring than a primary school student's composition.

Really, novels about cultivating immortals are not suitable for appearing in the system

Li Yunlong, my teacher can't take over

The hostile female nun in the previous book was either killed quickly or something happened to her. There is no trace of her in this book until now. She keeps seeing that Shangguan Wan'er, making her inexplicably irritable.

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