Azeroth's Redemption

One of the best pieces of Warcraft fan fiction, and you can see the author's intentions. The characters' personalities and plot direction are also very Azeroth, with magic and blindness as the main focus, and the good and the strange complementing each other. I hope I can stick to it. There are still three months until 8.0. Please update more now 😃😃

What I'm saying is not that this book is all about my own feelings. Without prey, what's the point of hunters' existence? Without the leader of the Illidari, what's the point of guarding the world? I hope the Watchers will seal us in the cave again. Demon Hunter. Without demons, the world doesn't need hunters.

It has been revised to Chapter 45 of the first volume. Considering that the writing style of some of the early content was indeed a bit poor and awkward, a relatively major change was made. The main purpose is to modify the beliefs and values ​​of the protagonist Lanlos to make it closer to the 'redemption' of the title. The personalities of some characters have also been changed. The plot basically remains unchanged, mainly just small details. If you are interested, you can review it. If you have any suggestions, you can give feedback in the group or in the book review. I will also step up my efforts in updating recently. I'm really sorry for the pause for so long!

It's so frustrating to watch a bunch of disgusting characters. The protagonist has always been arranged so clearly that he's like a puppet with strings. It's really disgusting to have a bunch of deceptive characters and forcefully whitewash them. Maybe this is the literary youth.

I feel like I can't stand it any longer and I'm about to give up the book. Are you ready to transform into a demon hunter? Suck everything, just have some common sense, okay? Is it so easy to take advantage of it? Isn't it that the power of one's own cultivation is not safe, and that you don't even have this bit of common sense? Sooner or later the pig's feet will become a slave to strength. I only see Lansuosuo constantly playing tricks. You, a teaching assistant, are not even a mid-level mage. Is it really okay to cause trouble everywhere? Shouldn't a mage have a wealth of knowledge first? Why don't you read more books to improve your strength before the main plot begins?

The protagonist is a mature white-collar worker. A series of detailed descriptions of actions after time travel, such as scratching the head, a bitter smile, and resentful eyes, are included in almost every chapter. Not like a mature person. Secondly, there is the savior complex of Azeroth. The wow novels ten years ago all have this complex. Simply put, it is repaying evil with kindness. This kind of plot is common: every time you meet an important character in the game, you can almost unconditionally tolerate this person's shortcomings, which is in sharp contrast to how you treat other characters. Coupled with the author's self-righteous feelings and sensational descriptions, it turns a good book into a bad one and makes it difficult to read. The biggest highlight. The author's power system setting is very good, and the overall plot has the feeling of people on earth slowly growing up. However, as an earthling, you should have a sense of superiority that you know everything about history. After the strong man humiliates himself, he just gives a bitter smile or a resentful look in his eyes and explains with a bitter smile. Is it over after the explanation? Where is your anger? Where is your compromise? Where is your patience? Even if this is a medieval world of high demons, it's normal for others to look down on you because of prejudice about your birth and strength. But you are a person with a socialist education, not a medieval aborigine. If others humiliate you, you can tolerate it in order to survive, but please let readers see that you are burdened with humiliation and that you are dissatisfied with them. Otherwise, author, you wrote your protagonist like a dog, do you understand? The biggest poisonous point. It is now the 20s of the 21st century. The Our Lady of Salvation is no longer popular. Damn you are an earthling. After being an elf for a few years, you really think you are an elf? If someone treats you well, then you are grateful to this race and this organization? If you like the three Windrunner sisters, you have to accommodate them? I'll give you a good look and you'll put aside the past grudges? There are other female characters after that, all have this kind of description. Finally, my own understanding: In the setting of World of Warcraft, Azeroth will inevitably break out of its cocoon and become a butterfly after dealing with blood and suffering. Does it need you to have a salvation complex? Does it need you to save it? Please don't position yourself as a savior. You can do anything for strength, rights, beauty, and eternal life.

Is it because of the time span? The writing style changed drastically in the early and late stages, but when the strength improved in the later stages, it became like a clown. This is a legendary mage plus demon hunter. He was actually just an ordinary juggler. Especially after getting the Heart of Azeroth. The place where this protagonist spends the most time is in various prisons

To be honest, this is really the worst plot of a Warcraft fanfic I have ever seen, bar none. Fortunately, the writing is very smooth, and after reading fifty chapters, there is no place where I get stuck. I won't go into minor issues like the names of characters, but let's talk about the plot. I really want to ask, author, do you want to rewrite the biography of Quel'Thalas? In order to advance the plot, demon spies are constantly sent to the elven hinterland to cause trouble. When did the demon become so obsessed with it? Can we invade Azeroth from the Twisting Nether without restraint? No need for positioning? Sargeras is not that powerful, otherwise would the orcs be needed? To put it bluntly, if you write a running account according to the original plot, it will be much better than this. It's not that you wrote a new plot that's not good, but it's that it's hard to connect the plot you wrote with the history of Warcraft, making it difficult for people to accept this kind of adaptation that deviates from history. The setting of Warcraft is very grand, and the main line of history is very clear, so don't just make up some non-existent battles, unless it changes because of the intervention of the protagonist. Just like Journey to the West will not become Journey to the South, the main line cannot be deviated. If the plot is completely unfamiliar, is it still called Warcraft?

Lan Lan wrote various NPCs in the game into the book as supporting roles and supporting roles, which is much better than those fans who don't go crazy and create original characters. (The welfare chapter is also good) 🙂 However, this post is mainly to complain about various problems that were not discovered at the time, so I will not go into details about the advantages. 😁 Aside from the major problem of serious inconsistencies in various settings and various shortcomings in the plot, Lan Lan's writing skills still need to be improved. The title of the book is "Redemption of Azeroth", but the behavior of the protagonist Lanros does not reflect "redemption" well. Although Lan Lan said that he revised it at the beginning to make it more consistent with the title of the book, the whole story is still not "redemptive" enough. 🤔 This book was probably written under the influence of the whitewashing of Illidan and the opening of demon hunters in "Legion". But Lanlos is mainly a mage, and his demon hunter-related abilities continue to bring him all kinds of troubles and misunderstandings, causing him to constantly beat up people who should be teammates. Watching it all the way can be said to be a bit poisonous, and the feeling of suffocation it brings far exceeds the pleasure of being slapped in the face by pretending to be cool. 🥵 At the same time, Lan Lan was unwilling to let Lanros make major changes in history, and let Lanros participate in various events to plunder the resources and opportunities of the original characters, resulting in the embarrassing situation of "it will still be the same without the protagonist, or even better." 🧐 After Chapter 926, Lanlos' strength continued to improve, but he did not contribute much to the change of history. He is a legend and even almost a demi-god. He wants to change the general situation but still develops as the original story develops: In Azeroth, the traitor Dar'Khan who framed the protagonist has not been punished. Is he going to stay behind to open the door for the Lich King? Ryan was assassinated by Garona, and Lothar still died at the hands of Orgrimmar. The Red Dragon Queen is still enslaved, and Malygos is showing signs of starting a war in the Nexus... In Draenor, Yrel's sister Samara is still dead, Draenei is still defeated by the Horde, and the fate of the arakkoa is It is still miserable, and the expeditionary force cannot escape the fate of the original work being missing... In the War of the Ancients, Shandris's parents died tragically, Faroldis was ruined, and Narthalas was destroyed... Sindragosa should also die in the follow-up. At the beginning, it could be said that the protagonist is too weak, but after returning from Draenor, his strength and the ability to predict the future should be enough to change the direction of history. Nozdormu also agreed to let go... But it is still basically the same as before 😐 And many things have become the protagonist's fault or even become worse because of the protagonist—— Gul'dan ran away even though he was not dead, Tidewave Port was destroyed because of the protagonist, Feather Moon and his wife were tortured to death because of the protagonist, the destruction of Narthalas was also inseparable from the protagonist, Alleria fell into pain because of the protagonist...😅 If the world would be a better place without the protagonist, then what is the significance of the protagonist's existence to Azeroth? 😥 Lanlos caused trouble everywhere like a disaster star along the way, but failed to change the direction of many major events... What did he redeem? 😏

What the hell is this book? It has been targeted in various ways, just like the halo of ridicule. I didn't know it in the later stage, but abused the master in the early stage. Why is the protagonist so unlikable?

In a word, no matter how strong the protagonist becomes, he always feels like a weakling who is fooled around by others.

The other worlds have been updated, what about this one?

Author, please wake up, can elves and children do tricks? Also, have you ever seen a fat elf? Are there fat elves in Azeroth?

Many people like Illidan, but I don't like it... May I ask why everyone likes Illidan? 1. Character design and personality 2. The shape is good-looking, I just like it! 3. Egg knife.

There is no mage hand in Warcraft, the arcane mage directly simulates the force field. Just look at those floating towers, they are still in the hands of the mage. Can you please stop forcing things from other novels or games into World of Warcraft? If you want, you can create a real-time level system.

This should be the only protagonist who truly integrates into World of Warcraft. I see the worldview, values ​​and moral values ​​of different races, rather than modern people wearing racial shells. The setting of Warcraft is really too bad. There is no real difference between races except appearance. I just want to see the world in the true sense, and the people who have truly integrated into the world.

As a literary work, this novel is quite well written, with flesh and blood and a reasonable plot. However, if you want to enjoy the game, you still need to consider whether to fall into the trap. The improvement in strength cannot be seen (always open at 55). Every time you win, you have to fight to the death. When you progress with the female characters, you always get to know a lot of "brothers". On the contrary, it feels a bit like those mage novels about being alone in pursuit of power.

This is one of the most exciting Azeroth novels I have read. I hope the author will work harder.

The race written about is good, but could it not be a crappy adventure from the beginning? ! The territory of the high elves is protected by rune stones, and you can cast any magic in it. A lord demon can easily pass through the rune stones and find the pig's feet that steal the soul. Do you think this is ridiculous, author? How powerful is this demon lord? He is even more powerful than Archimonde. What once again attracted the devil's attention was the unscrupulous use of magic by human magicians. Can we be more reliable in writing novels? In addition, it took more than 2,000 years from the troll war to the opening of the Black Gate! ! ! See for yourself which of the elves that appeared during the Troll War appeared in the subsequent Undead War, and then determine the lifespan of the high elves. Before the Black Gate opened, apart from trolls, what other demons were the threat to the high elves? Don't mess around, okay? You should also follow the Basic Law when writing a book. Finally, I hope that the author will write better and better, and not dig a hole that is too big to fill.

Support it. Looking at the entire starting point, this is the only book that writes our DH. Alas, after watching the animation of Argus, I no longer want to protect the alliance and Azeroth. I just want to go to the Pantheon and follow Mr. Dan.

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Observe secretly. . . Come on and write

To summarize the plot after arriving in the Outland: the protagonist arrives at a, fights, fights, fights, the protagonist needs to go to b, fights, fights, the protagonist needs to go to c, fights, fights. . . . . Then defg. . . . . Wouldn't it be interesting to directly transfer the single-line quest chain of finding things, which is considered too long even in online games? I don't really understand this kind of foreign plot. It's far different from the previous two parts.

Let me tell you something, I feel really embarrassed when I see it

It's so embarrassing. Most people only read the first three chapters. The first three chapters of this attractive book are confusing.

The writing is too messy and jumpy! If we didn't have the writing power, we would just tell the story. There is a hammer here and a stick here and there. The whole process of reading the article is just various fragments, which is very incomplete!

What a shame, I ordered 200 chapters for nothing, the writing is really bad.

Damn, I thought I was finished, but it turned out to be a eunuch

Very well described combat. The plot processing needs to be strengthened to a certain extent. Such poor results are probably due to the somewhat inexplicable beginning.

I feel like Zul'jin alone can kill the three Windrunner sisters, maybe add Kael'thas?