Sky Dungeon

The first chapter at the beginning was very poorly written and I couldn't understand it. I wanted to give up and look for the book again several times. I held my nose and read it for a long time before I found out that it turned out to be (Pig's Foot ran away from home, and then jumped out of the Pig's Foot three years later and entered the game I made, and then recalled the Pig's Foot a few months ago in my own game, and then Pig's Foot was fired again). I'm going to look at which version it is, or if there are other versions. The first chapter is really bad. One is three years ago and the other is recalling a few months or a few days ago three years later. The approximate time is not marked. The time feels very confusing. I feel that the running away from home should be written as a separate prologue or the time should be marked instead of a recall.

The little sister who doesn't understand Bai has been drawing fan art for several days.

You haven't entered the game yet for the first ten chapters. . . The first 4 chapters have already introduced it, but there are still a few chapters of flirting. Then choosing a name can also be half a chapter. . . Read the book to the beginning. If you procrastinate the beginning like this, you won't be able to retain people.

Following the author's imagination, he actually inserted an FPS shooting gameplay into the RPG online game. What about professions? Is it also a level A without professions?

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I have thousands of collections. Thank you for your support. By the way, I would like to report the current writing progress. The draft has reached chapter 881 and the draft has been saved in the backend to chapter 329.

I'm going to read it a second time. There are too many in-depth things and it's too brain-burning to understand.

After reading the first chapter, I was deeply attracted by the content. I heard that the plot behind it is very grand, the imagination is strange, and there are many manuscripts saved, so the author will update it quickly, come on. It's just a pity that such a sacred book has only been discovered by a small number of people like me, which has to be said to be a great loss to the Internet literary circle.

I think if I change my profile, more people will open it.

This book really picks readers. Those who just want to read the game to see how technology crushes them and how to cheat in various ways should give up. There is no lack of sci-fi and urban color, just waiting to be fattened and eaten.

The author has a vicious tongue. Welcome to BB. If you don't believe me, read the book review! ! People with poor mental endurance, heart disease patients, etc. Speak with caution!

Yang Miaomiao's fan portrait doesn't look like a cat person

There are many special professions in the novel. The Magic Piper blocks all communication functions of the player. It is very interesting. The villagers also opened their imagination as a profession. The understanding of skills is the synthesis of skills, and the combination of skills is quite special. There are 42 professions, and not even half of them appeared in the latest chapter. Is it a gimmick?

I was attracted by the cover and thought it was an SO novel. After reading it, I found out that it was an original game. I also read the testimonials and felt that the author was brave enough to challenge the sword masterpiece! Nowadays, most game writers are famous for their game prototypes. Where do you get the courage to write original games? No wonder there are fewer people driving. However, after reading a hundred chapters, I still feel that there are many things to like, especially the writing is humorous and eclectic, and does not follow the old routines of game writing. Although the protagonist is the game's main planner, he is just the fired game framework copywriter, and the details of the game are not known. This cheat is relatively pertinent. Those golden fingers of the rebirth genre are too cliche and highly biased, but this novel is different. There is no absolute foreknowledge, and many details are very reasonable and realistic, unlike other novels that are over the top. Overall worth reading, recommended! ! ! ! ! ! !

Lure the fan of the 26-year-old female tenant into her home and kill her

That catchphrase is really enough. It's not smooth at all.

I have to admire the author's great imagination. This article shows that the author has profound writing skills, sophisticated writing style, and interlocking plots. With the ups and downs of the plot, he is happy and sad, sometimes clear and calm, and sometimes passionate. The equipment, competition, upgrades and other aspects described in the article have unique insights. The upgrades that do not conform to the ordinary monsters are very creative. Thumbs up!

White does not understand black fandom

The King of Sword Riders looks very much like Saber White, so I drew this

Maybe it's too niche. There are only 300 comments out of 1,800 photos. I looked through the comments and no one said what this novel is about. However, the strong "Dragon King" style at the beginning really shocked me.

The cover looks like the sword Aincrad

I always feel that it is not a pure game novel. It has more descriptions of real life and a slower pace. Is it for the sake of animation? After reading it, I realized that Da Da Da had no intention of writing a normal game novel. There are no potions, no life skills, no combat data, no detailed explanations of equipment, and no artifacts and krypton gold props. However, he was able to set up the game to be watertight. It can only be said to be a masterpiece! Think about those Japanese game novels. They rarely show off their data and equipment all day long. I hope there will be no more eunuchs. After all, without the common content of these game novels, it may be exhausting to think of new ways...

I feel like I can compete with Japanese comic game characters

Someone in the group recommended it, I'll check it out tomorrow

It's like my temples were injected with 10ml of hyaluronic acid... This is such a strange word. Just like what Uncle Yu Qian said. This is a compliment! ?

Yang Miaomiao Fan

To be honest, the amount of information in this chapter is really quite large. It took me a lot of time to understand it but I still have only a little understanding of it. Maybe it's because I really have very little contact with the business systems of various games. With my personal ability, I can only see it on the surface. I think there seems to be no problem. But I always feel like something is a bit inconsistent. After thinking about it for a long time, I still couldn't figure it out. I simply invited three or five friends to study together. After all, three cobblers can be as powerful as Zhuge Liang. As soon as there were more people, we immediately saw the problem. First of all, a friend of mine took one look at it and said, "The setting of the 30-day trading period is too outrageous. Why not just limit it with the number of transactions? With this setting, novice players don't need to buy equipment by themselves. They can just wait to pick up the equipment that the big players have eliminated." I asked him to explain the logic of this, but I still didn't understand it. I don't know if you understand this after reading this. Then regarding the sense of disobedience I mentioned, this is what he said. As soon as I said it, I suddenly realized. "There is nothing wrong with the system itself. But the fault lies in the fact that it is in the game. Just like in reality, for the sake of national security, the country implements militarized management. The intention is good, but it is overcorrected." "In reality, the state regulates the economy a hundred times more freely than in your game. , Who plays such a game? To put it simply, we have not found a balance between preventing capital and ensuring gameplay. Although many functions are eliminated, it prevents capital from entering and causing monopoly, but it also reduces the gameplay a lot." Then we came to the conclusion after discussion. "The advantage of your plan is to maintain the stability of the market, but it sacrifices freedom. It is impossible to figure out how to correctly guide the direction of capital in the work, and it is impossible to think of a stop-gap solution that gets the best of both worlds." My friends then agreed that your plan is actually similar to a planned economy. Too rigid. If you want to do this, it is better to limit it from the game itself. For example, if there is no enhancement and increase, the only equipment, the gap between krypton gold and normal people will not be so big. Or you can start from the setting of the world itself and set up a background where everyone is playing the game on an expedition ship, etc... Although everyone has been discussing this topic for a long time. But I still have not succeeded in recommending your book... Then there is a little doubt on my part. After reading it for a long time, I wonder if I missed it? The profit model of the game mentioned now seems to clearly mention only "exchanging real currency for game currency"? What exactly do you rely on to make money? In addition, this equipment creation is actually a disguised mission system. The author has released the dropping of mission items, but you have turned things that normally have no restrictions into missions. It feels weird. Also, what exactly does this so-called "confirmation of the commission" refer to? Do I need to take out the equipment design drawings before I can start using the consignment function to collect materials, or what? Finally, in this chapter, the question raised by Yang Miaomiao is too precise. I personally think it doesn't fit in with his current personality. It should be vague from his point of view, and then refined, summarized, summarized and explained by the protagonist. And give some words to other readers who see this. Although I have complained so much, it seems that they are all talking about the shortcomings of this book. This book seems not worth reading. In fact, ordinary online game novels do not have such advanced shortcomings. What are those books? Buy a helmet at the beginning, enter the game, create a character, crowd around, fight high-level monsters with a slightly smaller number of people, describe the monsters in detail, then level up, encounter elites or small bosses... You can read it if you are interested. Really, most books have this content. That's why books like this one are so precious. I also want to write an online game novel, and I read this book with a learning attitude. For old readers, I can accept some of the dissuasive words mentioned above. I think it's worth checking out this one.

The author has a vicious tongue: Is the body shape and weapon system very novel and awesome? The attributes of the character should be initialized based on the body shape. In a nearly real game, attacks must also follow some realistic laws. You cannot allow a character with an extremely small body size to have the same attributes as a big guy. Then this is unfair. After all, big guys are easier to attack. Nowadays, most game novels make all the player characters the same, and each one is written with brain waves connected. Just like Sword Art Online, real people play in it. Have you considered the unfairness caused by body size to the players? Could it be that once the brain waves are connected, it all relies on locking skills? Then what level of skill completion and attack angle should be written? They all play with small size and powerful attack power! Do you want to be so tall and tall as cannon fodder?

How did you read this beginning? From other posts, it seems that this novel seems to be quite deep. The author also said that readers like to prepare for the next novel without thinking. . . . It starts with a classic story of one man and two women being ostracized, the classic "iceberg beauty" and "hot figure". . . Where is this depth?

I watched a few pictures and I don't know what the main character is going to do.