Control the Soul from Konoha

If Goldfinger just learned ninjutsu from dead people, it would be basically useless. Naruto would be useless without blood.

As a system, it can't beat the indigenous people. What a lot of talent.

They have all obtained the Pure Land and can improve their strength. Why is there only one female protagonist? They should all be collected!

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This book is not authentic. It seems that Hiruzen Sarutobi is the brigade commander. It is very dramatic.

A system that can travel through the world cannot defeat a surface-level scum, 666666, 8888888

Seeing that many people are complaining about the protagonist's cheating problem, here is a spoiler. Kanbara Makino has the chakra of the Six Paths Old Man in his body. He can also be regarded as the reincarnation of the Six Paths Old Man, so he can control the Pure Land. It's a bit weird to say that he is reincarnated. After all, he is a time traveler. It is more like the relationship between Xiao Yan and Yao Lao, except that the old man Liu Dao is usually in a hang-up state. Kamihara Makino is a cheat in his own right. He is born with all attributes of chakra. He can study the Blood Succession Limits at will, and he can also easily learn S-level ninjutsu and forbidden techniques. Controlling the soul is not just a headline. After the third world war, the protagonist's strength has improved, so he will study the Pure Land. If a genin controls the soul of a Kage-level powerhouse, wouldn't it be even more outrageous? I want to write this book into a Naruto fanfic that everyone can accept, so I won't do too many secondary designs, and it will basically be based on the original work. As for Mr. System, it's really not that great... Please give me your favorites and recommendation votes, and I will update everyone after it is put on the shelves.

Has the protagonist become the container of Rokudo? Starting from today, you are no longer Otsutsuki Rokudo. He is the Six Paths Sage of Konoha.

Goldfinger is too weak, the protagonist has no blood sacrifice, and feels like his talent is average

This plot collapsed. The previous ones were good, but starting from Senju Tobirama's sudden death, it collapsed to the point where I couldn't continue watching.

Impulsive, irritable, emotional, his mind is stuck on the wall, his girlfriend since he was a child is still someone else, he takes Asma on missions and exercises, slows down his growth and still wants to save the world, it's like playing house.

Now the fan praises White Fang too much,

Brothers, when you start a new book, you must not feed it. It will feed the book to death. Try to click to the last page every day to increase the number of readings.

Your novel feels too ordinary. It's too incompetent to fight for a woman and bring a light. The plug-ins are not written well at the beginning. It feels like a super parallel import. I didn't feel any passion at all after reading many chapters. It's too ordinary. The protagonist seems to be just trying to gather people. You, the Naruto, are what I like the most. 😅 But you are so good at writing so much, as if the original novel has not changed at all. At this point in time, you want to become Hokage and transform the village, and you don't have time. It seems that you can use the soul of the Pure Land in the back, but you can't wait anymore in the front. Isn't this Pure Land boring and you can't even control it 100%? I have never used other methods to limit the protagonist's strength, but it is too invincible.

Now this is no different from this chronicle. Most of the chapter is psychological activities, and there is almost nothing to promote the main line.

Novels with a lot of fluff are uncomfortable to watch, especially system novels.

The story of the whiteboard system and Lao Liu dying together in order to expand the reward library!

The plot settings are not quite right.

It was good in the beginning, but after Senju Tobirama was offline, it suddenly became unstoppable. The plot line was messy and I didn't know what to do.