Infinite Journey

It feels like the protagonist is portrayed like a primary school student..."Wait a minute... Then go and open the urgent package... And also play with it..." Is this what teenagers and adults would do? Instantly poisonous... The author's twist is too blunt... Won't he change it?

Let me tell you, author, your book is a parody of Get Out, but do you know what the essence of Get Out is? Killing a sister is the right way. As long as the protagonist's sister dies, your book will become popular.

What the heck is that at the beginning? It's a group of poisonous people, and there are two women right after rebirth. You will definitely fail.

The author has expanded. He used to update two pages a day, but now he only has one chapter.

Build muscles, be a killer, and be the boss. The difference between the protagonist before and after his rebirth is at most four years, and for a junior college, it is at most three years. Then the problem arises! The protagonist is so cool and has so many enemies with others, why didn't he go before he was reborn? Don't say that the protagonist dies and has a great enlightenment...

I read a few chapters and finally understood why there are so many words but so few readers.

It's disgusting that you are constantly having an affair with your own sister, you are a scumbag

I was also drunk when I suddenly changed from martial arts to literary arts. I had practiced martial arts for so many years and instead of doing what I was most familiar with, I had to imitate others and make fuss. No matter how awesome the essays written in the previous life exam are, they are just copied waste!

I'm here to make a splash and ask for attention!

This is the legendary Langwei

How do you know the effect if you don't add it even once?

The recent plot feels very watery

Come on, I'm optimistic about you. I like this style of getting out of here.

So the rest of the story is about me having an ambiguous sister?

In the eighth picture, when I was fighting Brother Qiang, I was inexperienced against the enemy. In my dream, I almost became an immortal. You and I still gave this enemy inexperience, so I asked my book friends if they were poisonous.

Without its own style, how can we talk about the spirit? The simple setting tells an exquisite story, and the empty characters and words reveal the author's helplessness. You can write and read by yourself, revise and practice diligently.

Chapter 18: If you have some force, you just want to rob it. Where is your brain?

How could this book be classified as fantasy...

New book [Portable Auxiliary Training System], I hope everyone can read it!

Why do so many people criticize it? Is this book going to be popular? I don't feel this way at all!

I stopped reading after reading the first chapter and gave up! Old routine! Rebirth and revenge

Okay, come on

He said that he should go for it and that he would order everything.

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Dear author, after reading your book, I feel that these chapters are not grand enough, and have entered the realm of making small fuss and looking for trouble. If a person is strong and famous, it will spread quickly in the dark world. Everyone in mixed society has a keen eye and knows who can do something and who cannot do it. Warriors have keen six senses, even more so. If everything is as described in these chapters, this is not a warrior, this is not a gangster, this is simply a gangster, which seriously lowers the grade of this book. Zhengyi is mostly a dog-slaughterer. Pigfoot is a person who pursues the limits of martial arts. Please give him enough respect. Such martial arts is not wasted on showing off or being selfish. Best regards.

The recent plot is a bit embarrassing. Ever since I moved to a new city, the main character's relatives, KTV, and auction houses have all been pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. They clearly said that it's good to show off their strength, but others have to fight and then start a feud. I feel like the Protector of the Demon Gate is just a title. There is no difference whether it is different or not. In fact, this aspect can be written down. Also, the protagonist is now first-class, and can explore the realm above the next first-class, or the cause and effect of the school in the previous life. There's no need to be too entangled and mindless to pretend to be a B-plot. Of course, this is just an opinion. It depends on the author's arrangements. 🙂

Author, if you don't force yourself to show off, we will still be good friends.

A little speechless, he asked what Grandmaster Lin's name was, while Grandmaster Hong shouted in front of him, "Lin Yun, what kind of trouble is this?"

Um, what can I say? Have you finally changed the map?

What an embarrassing plot, what an embarrassing writing style