Great Sports Era

The first setting is so messy! The plot of the second character is too vague! Third, the writing style needs to be improved!

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I gave up after reading more than a dozen chapters. How can I put it? The setting is very good and I also like the world of sports. But the plot is getting more and more annoying the more I read it.

I only read two chapters and I couldn't stand it anymore, 😅😰

Nice idea! The writing is pretty good too! I hope the more I write, the more exciting it will be! !

The idea is very good and the setting is also good. Didn't show up well! Looking forward to the author's next book! 😁

I once watched a domestic animation, and in the finale, the top could control the explosion of the earth and the sun 😁

Many of the sentences are long and tiring to read, especially when reading on a mobile phone. You have to pay attention to sentence fragmentation.

He said to her: Let's go to the movies together. She said: OK. He said to her again: My girlfriend will come with me tomorrow. She felt her heart ached a little, but she still smiled and said: OK. The next day, she only saw him coming alone, so she asked: Where is your girlfriend? He touched her head gently, smiled and said to her: It's on my mobile phone. My girlfriend is the heroine in "Si Chen Wants to Become the God of Love".

Not bad! I'm not really the only one, am I? Is anyone there? Drop me a note! !

Is this practice writing? ! The creativity is pretty good! What does the author think? Modification or eunuch? Taking a break during the New Year? First of all, I wish you a happy new year! Come on!

This broken sentence makes me feel uncomfortable😖