Daddy Star

It's a good book, but it has to include some messy second-generation struggle scenes. Not to mention that the protagonist is now at the bottom and is not qualified to join it. Even if the protagonist becomes the most awesome star in China in the end, he is not much different from a dog in front of these top people.

The whole starting point may be because I haven't watched The Legend of Wukong.

A mess. . . I thought it was a little refreshing, but I didn't expect it to be very depressing 😰

The interspersed writing was uncomfortable to read, the main plot was difficult to grasp, and the reading was tangled.

I want to ask, does this novel have anything to do with Dad?

Why are there so many inexplicable plots, why can't you just sing and raise your children?

I was confused. It was clearly Wing Chun, but why did it change to Tai Chi in Chapter 20? The author used some caution. ! !

There are too many confusing plots. You, an entertainment star, should be relegated to the grievances of the world. If you don't like it, throw it away.

At the beginning, I wanted to intersperse content and emotional insights into the lyrics, giving it the feeling of a timeline and a montage of images. Since people don't like it, I won't write like this in the future. I read a lot of books and they all talk about water lyrics. Now it's up to me, and I accept it humbly. Thank you also for your comments. Adoption!

I feel like this kind of novel can give you a rough idea of ​​the subsequent plot after reading the beginning. It's quite boring to read and makes you feel a little bored.

It feels really uncomfortable to intersperse writing...

The author is too tired to write the protagonist. Since he is a dad, don't add too many plot points. Celebrities are not just singers.

As a pure reader, after reading this novel, I found the plot and characters attractive enough, but sometimes I felt there were some problems with the writing, and I looked forward to better writing.

There is no love for someone who can't even support himself. In the end, it will be a tragedy. I'm sorry for myself, but I'm even more sorry for others. If you don't have strong enough shoulders, don't talk about "I can give you happiness" easily.

I don't know how to write book reviews, and even if I do, I can't write anything constructive. All I know is that your book is right up my alley. I like to watch. I support it. I was happy to see it. I vote.

If necessary, create a small character profile and I'll add it to the book! If you have any favorite storylines, you can tell me

Keep writing, I really want you to write tens of thousands of words a day, and I will give you the recommendation votes for 4 chapters every day, so work hard! 🤝🤝🤝🤝

The logic is clear and thorough, and it doesn't make you feel uncomfortable when you look at it. Like it!

I've tricked everyone in the dormitory, haha, please give me a little red flower!