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Fortunately, there are two drawbacks. It must be my habit of reading novels. Paragraphs that are too long are particularly uncomfortable. Dialogue and action should be separated as much as possible. After all, the author has a good skill in describing actions, so separation does not seem so procrastinating. Also, it seems that the protagonist has a face like Snow White, and the killer wants to let him go 🤭. Thinking about it now, it is true, but if you add the sentence "I was very shocked when I received this mission, I have been hesitant," it can better highlight the father's character. Or did he not know that he was killing a baby? Personal opinion: It is best to change it, it is easy to make mistakes and make complaints. Can't you say it's for protection? Or is it like Ganie, who was originally a killer, but his mother was kind to him because she promised to save the son of her old friend? After all, according to my experience in reading killer stories, if I were the killer, the first lesson would be to let him kill babies. The killer must first be hard-hearted. The above are just personal opinions.